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Reviews for Will More Strongly

By : crazyundeadfairy
  • From ANON - Garnet on June 06, 2004
    I'm so glad you updated. And it was a very nice update too. The conversation between Paris and Andromache was a good part. It was also kind of sad seeing as he kidnapped Helen for love even though it's not what everyone seems to think. Oh, I'm not sure if anyone's pointed it out to you yet but in an earlier chapter (ch2, I think?) there's a part where you accidentally wrote 'Paris of Sparta' instead of 'Paris of Troy'. Just thought I'd point it out since it might confuse some people. Wonderful job! Can't wait to see more. ^_^
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  • From ANON - rose on June 04, 2004
    wonderful love, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Spirit on June 03, 2004
    Oh, do write more! It's so wonderful, as there just isn't enough good achillies/paris slash! Please please write the next part soon... maybe with some in iin it? *batts eyelashes*!!
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  • From ANON - leann on May 28, 2004
    *stupidly sappy smile* love, such a wonderful thing, nothing else will have you marry someone else for the one you love. great chapter--think helen will be mad when she learns that paris puked when he realised that he would have to marry her? heheehe, i can't wait for achilles to meet paris (it's easier to spell) again.
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  • From ANON - Garnet on May 27, 2004
    You have no idea how happy you make me when you update this amazing fic. Again, another wonderful chapter. The interaction between Hector and Paris is very nicely done. Big brother Hector is wonderfully written. I feel bad for Paris that he has to marry Helen even though he's so smitten with Achilles. The emotions are very real. Awesome job. Can't wait for more. :)
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  • From ANON - Crystabel Took on May 24, 2004
    Oh, please hurry with the update! I really like this story! I can't wait for Achilles finding out about Paris/Alexandros!
    Please, please hurry!

    Kat

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  • From ANON - Isabel Schemes on May 23, 2004
    Hey, great story so far. I really enjoy how you mix the original story with the movie story and your story. I don't have any critisim except to make character descisons a little more clear- I'm still confused as to why Paris took Helen. Other than that, great writing and I look forward to more chapters...soon
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  • From ANON - Garnet on May 23, 2004
    Wonderful update. It's nice to see the story from Achilles' side. I love how you write. I can very much feel the love Achilles and Paris have for each other. This is simply beautiful. I look forward to seeing more.
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  • From ANON - Garnet on May 22, 2004
    Ooh, I love it. You write so beautifully. Combining elements of Paris' history as a shepherd along with him becoming Prince Paris of Troy was ingenius. Plus the slash and the alternate reason for bringing Helen to Troy! Please continue soon. You've got me hooked. :)
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  • From ANON - Brandybuccaneer on May 19, 2004
    Excellent! Yoe goe got this set up so superbly!
    Poor lovesick, shepard Paris...
    I just can't wait to see how this will end up, so I hope you plan to updaton! on! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2004
    That was well written and HOT! Great job, I look forward to more (there will be more, yes?).
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  • From ANON - Kidney_Thief on May 17, 2004
    This was so cute. They really love each other and it makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. Plus, that was hot! Excellent writing, it wasnt cheesy or anything so good job. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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