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By : Azrielle6969
  • From Soniakawai on January 11, 2014
    ahhhhh more!!!
    I am so curious now!!
    please upload soon!!
    ps. how do u know somebody updates?
    do i get a notification?
    i am new to the site
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  • From ANON - Demondogs on November 27, 2005
    Great Story!!! I loved it Keep it going!!!!
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  • From ANON - Wilder on October 15, 2005
    Ah!! it just stops! where'd it go? arg *pout* i was really likeing the story, all of your stories i have read have been really good! this is the first Riddick fic i've read and it sounds interesting. i like how you are switching between their view points and aren't making Riddick this sweet little thing that is put upon, that is used alot. i hope you continue and maybe explain everything some more... looking for ward to it... i offer chocolate pocky for you muse!!
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  • From ANON - Dee on September 21, 2005
    Yes I like your story and yes I'd like another chapter please. This story is great.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on May 09, 2005
    I enjoyed reading this. Do you plan on continuing?
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 01, 2005
    wow! cool! must read more
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  • From ANON - SG on May 01, 2005
    very cool story, you've written Riddick excellently. I'll be checking back for updates, but no rush tho.
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  • From ANON - yelsha on January 07, 2005
    I love it! Please keep going.
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  • From ANON - TheRealJack on November 29, 2004
    I liked it, I'd like to see more of it.
    One minor criticism though, it is tiresome to read through all of the dialogue twice, so if you can find a way around that while still getting Riddick's POV across that would be great.
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  • From dawnenab on September 29, 2004
    Nice start for someone who doesn't know Riddick or PB very well. I agree that the alternating POV's could be better served by showing how differently they perceive a given situation...or how their own personalities notice different things as priority. Otherwise redundancy will lose some readers. Other than that? Keep up the good work.

    ~Ali
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  • From ANON - dipsytipsy on September 27, 2004
    please keep writing more chapters this is a really good story. Not just smut (not that theres anything wrong with that ;)
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  • From ANON - Alo on September 03, 2004
    I really love it!

    Update soon please!


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  • From ANON - Y.S. on July 22, 2004
    WHEN ARE THEY GONNA F***? DON'T MAKE US WAIT LIKE THIS~!!!!
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  • From ANON - Skye on July 04, 2004
    I do like your story line and I do want to see the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - brainfear on June 23, 2004
    Sounds good so far. Lots of F-bombs (f-words). Hehe. Made me wince a few times. I like the roughness of Riddick. Please post more soon!
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