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Reviews for elizabeths desire

By : dinodoll
  • From ANON - Ibex on January 11, 2007
    Nice start, I like this take on the many many many versions of the night on the island! However, you could focus more on showing the reader what is going on rather than telling them. Paint pictures with the words, I know this story must roll through your head like a movie, you're see it it all--as a reader, I want to have that experience too. And doing some research always help to set a mood--a telegram? In the 1600's? Keep writing, this is a good first effort!
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  • From ANON - Corki on May 09, 2004
    oh i love this story please update soon its really good i love jack and elizabeth fics
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on May 03, 2004
    Cool. I like the different twist. Keep it up!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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