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Reviews for Winning the West

By : Agarwaenloth
  • From ANON - Tabee on June 15, 2004
    OOOO!!!

    I am so glad you updated this! I don't think it took that dark of a turn (course, there are only 2 chapters, who knows what will happen next)

    so, Swann owns the saloon in town? hm.. yeah, that works, would make him rather wealthy.

    poor Will! apprenticed to icky Mr. Brown (which is bad enough) but on top of that he gets to be a rentboy!

    Yay! Jack for saving him, but what happens next?

    more soon please!!

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  • From ANON - nell on May 07, 2004
    This is really good! Please continue! Longer chapters. Pretty please? :)
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  • From ANON - Pookie on April 30, 2004
    so, that was like the third times I've read this... and its still good :D

    let's see.. I think the chapters are a little short, if you could lengthen 'em a bit that would be great (or just post 2 or 3 at a time, that would be good too)

    I really like the idea for the story, but I think you could be a little more descriptive, like where in the west are they? How come Jack is in that town? those kinds of things (unless you mean to explain it all later, then ignore me and keep writing the way you want, you are the author!)

    I can't wait for more, update soon please :)


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  • From ANON - lunasherash on April 30, 2004
    a good idea and your a fairly good wrigher
    so luna says plaese wrihgt more
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  • From ANON - Mahie on April 30, 2004
    You bloody have to continue! How can you stop like that? lol :) I loved the prologue. It was sad and beautiful. I can see Jack dying for Will if the boy died jus just makes sense. Please PLEASE write more. Besides my love for J/W slash I do love cowboys as well after watching Viggo Mortensen riding a horse. lol.
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  • From ANON - Brandybuccaneer on April 29, 2004
    [applaudes] This is incredibly interesting! I find myself wondering what'll happen.... :)
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