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By : hellborne
  • From ANON - Captain Uschi on August 24, 2006
    Very good story, had me in tears at the end.heh. ^.^
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  • From ANON - littlebird on April 19, 2005
    A mildly happy ending (if that hip does not continue to hurt). Very nice. Especially with all those hints at what happened in the meantime and who might know what.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 17, 2005
    Sniffle, snort. Glad the sea didn't kill Jack although how Norrington will keep him from reclaiming the Pearl could be a whole story in itself. This was a great fairy tale.
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  • From ANON - sallie on April 17, 2005
    YEAH!
    Jack lives!
    *hugs Jack and bursts into tears.
    "I knew it!"
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  • From ANON - sallie on April 12, 2005
    OHHHH evil cliffie!
    That tbc better be true!
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  • From ANON - littlebird on April 10, 2005
    The end? But - that can not be the end? Please?
    Poor Jack, somehow everybody wants to arrest him, even when he is a prince.
    Please continue! It was so nice speculating: would he really be king, or find a way out, or would independent pirates or the Spanish take the ship on her way to England.
    So Jack will probably be declared dead, so that, if he is alive (and I hope he is) he can assume a new name and be a pirate again?
    Or will he finally be king after all?
    Btw., why would the English parliament agree to place a bastard son from a sideline first in line for the throne? There must be something in it for them. My personal theory about Jack's family has been for quite some time now: he might be a descendent of Cortez, which would explain the compass and the knowledge about the Aztec gold as family heirloom. Cortez was married to an Aztec princess and they had children, or so I've heard. Now if Jack were heir to that couple, he could reasonably claim the Mexican crown. The prospect of adding Mexico to the empire would speak for Jack as king, I'd say. And because this theory has been nagging at me I'm especially curious for your backstory now.
    Have I said "Please continue" already?
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2005
    Something.


    No, no thats not all I would put. I must say that after I finished the first story in this series I didn't not intend on continuing. I miss Jack Sparrow. As much as I find your stories interesting and unique, there is something to be said for the good Captain. It's no good that you're not feeling well, and I do hope you feel better. Don't be depressed. Just because no one reviews your stories here doesn't mean that they are not good. I actually read The Pirate and the Yarn Spinner on a Yahoo! Group, and I very much enjoyed it.

    Be well.

    ~KnightessDaine
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  • From ANON - littlebird on March 27, 2005
    Sentenced to a lifetime of hard labor... He should refuse, because then you could have him dragged to England in chains. (A sight for the so-inclined.)
    Of course, Jack could as well be kidnapped by independent pirates when traveling to England.
    That king George appears to be a bit dumb. He should have recalled Jack first, then adopted him, not making Jack or Lawrence targets for pirates and Spaniards (or French, Durch or whomever they were at war with). And not giving Jack the option to refuse and run.
    >Point of fact, I abhor slavery and all the trappings thereof.
    But what is breaking a person so that they will be of good service if not slavery? And that he did to Gillette.
    By the way, will you tell us who gave Jack his slave-brand? I'm really curious to learn more of the backstory.
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  • From ANON - cruiser on March 26, 2005
    Sorry to hear that you are sick....get well soon savvy.....I love the story, you write very well. Keep your chin up and the chapters coming ....okay!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Felaine on March 19, 2005
    My humblest apolories ...bows with hands together. ..I didn't find any postings after chapter 5 (I think it was) and thought you had abandoned the story. I've had that happen to me so often, it's a discouraging thing.
    I like the way you're slowly bringing everybody around and have a good rational for Jack's behavior.
    I can just see the gold teeth in a box.
    Don't know about making our boy the King of anything, but you've done nicely with the changes so far so I trust you.
    It was a wise decision on the King's part to try to send a messanger Jack won't murder as soon as he hears the messsage. Maybe.

    Sorry to hear of your medical difficulty. I've read your work at The Black Pearl Sails and know you have friends there who are thinking of you. I'll keep you in my prayers.
    Felaine
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  • From ANON - Bray on March 17, 2005
    I was so excited when I saw you'd updated this story. I truely have enjoyed reading the first story and this one in turn. The fact that Jack has been adopted by the king is an interesting turn of events. I truely would like to see how he takes the news. . .And I think I want to get a little more of a introduction to Jack's son.

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - littlebird on March 16, 2005
    If you post your stories elsewhere to get more reviews, may I please ask you to leave them here as well? Some of us like to read them over and over again. (*blush*)
    And please continue this one! "Royal Jack" stories are always nice and now I'm curious what you have planned for him.
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  • From ANON - LadyJanelly on January 01, 2005
    So far, very cool. I usually dont read 10 chapters of a story with no slash, so that's a compliment. (hey, i read the prequel too, so that's 22 chapters with no slash. I must be impressed, yes?)

    Anyways, I love what you've done with the story. So many fanfic writiers in the PotC fandom seem afraid to make changes to the characters lives. It's good to see you have the courage to project what they could potentially become.

    Keep up the good work. You are appreciated.

    -Janelly
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2004
    Finally, someone got around to chastising that officious little smarmalade Gillette! Oh, I've seen him humanized here and there, made sympathetic as Groves' lover or what have you. But the evil vindictive grin satisfies my facial muscles so much more than the pitying half-smile, don't you know.

    Cliffhangers are all very well, in principle. But this story has tangled so many characters, so deftly, that if you don't get to the dénouement I shall be very disappointed indeed. Keep those plot ferrets breeding, savvy?
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  • From ANON - Dori on November 04, 2004
    Hey!

    I love your story I just wish you'd update more often.
    But there's one thing I don't understand. In Chapter 9 you said Lawrence was Raymond's son and in the 10th chapter the King said 'Deliver my son Lawrence...'. So I'm a bit confused now. Who's son is Lawrence?
    I hope you'll post a new chapter soon. :)
    Dori
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