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By : bluemagic132003
  • From aimless38 on April 15, 2004
    oH yes I say again you have really captured Jack..oh excuse me.. Captain Jack..wonderfully. His cockiness andyfulyfulness, all 100% pirate. As to the delicious sex scene... pardon me while I go stick my head into the freezer..I believe I had a hot flash or 4. Heh. I cannot wait for more this is a wonderful romp.
    Hugs
    Amy
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  • From ANON - Rozzan on April 14, 2004
    Oh , lovely chapters. This story is so so brilliant.
    I adored this line "No , but I do believe that dear William has finally learned to recognize an opportune moment."
    because it was a favourite moment of mine in the film.

    I need air too, when Suzanna is around Jack. The sexual tension is driving me insane. The stars and the moon passage are so beautifully romantic...sigh.. and we get to see a really unusual and thoughtful and interesting side of Jack here.. Nice.
    Love the bit about the rabbit making ricees ies in the moon. You have such a wonderful knowledge about things like this from all over the world. well done. You inspire me to do more research into things myself.

    The springing Jack from jail scene was great too, excellent use of the psychology of Suzanna's ruse to free him and how she accomplished it, and a great way too, to let us into more of her background. You are a stunningly good writer. Stunning.

    The sex scene... what can I say..speechless.. Wow, gorgeous, wonderful. I shall re read this many times I expect.
    I want Jack too, hot and hard against me, if this is how he makes love. Just lovely. More More More. Can hardly wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - Emeraldfire on April 13, 2004
    Oh my God! That was the best POTC fanfic I'vad sad so far! I hope you are continuing. You should be writing professionally if you aren't already.
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  • From ANON - evileyedpirategrrrl on April 12, 2004
    oh my, i dare say you took my breath away...
    i'm not the type that usually reviews, but your story telling
    talents are too good for me to not respond to. i'm head over heels
    iuateuated with your story, such great character development! how many more
    chapters do you plan to write? hopefully more, and soon!
    *rum flavored gold toothed pirate kisses xoxo
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  • From ANON - aimless on April 11, 2004
    Bravo! Another Het fic!
    Great story so far and you have captured Jack wonderfully. Intriguing plot, great characterizations. Wonderful descriptions, also a very erotic love scene. What more could I ask fI caI can only think of one thing........More Chapters please.
    You are doing a great job so far and I eagerly anticipate reading more.
    Hugs
    Amy
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  • From hellborne on April 11, 2004
    Magnificent, my dear!eat eat plot, great visuals! And although I'm far more into slash, the sex scene was wonderful! You really do need to keep this up. It's great to see quality work. I love it!

    Hellborne
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  • From ANON - watashi on April 11, 2004
    I like Chapter 5! The only nitpick I have is a couple of errors in the French parts, but that's mostly because I'm a French translator. Other than that, this is a really good story, and I want to see where it's going.
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  • From hellborne on April 09, 2004
    I see what you meant about chapter 3...but not to worry. Many authors see Jack as having been to the orient and getting food there...

    Still fantastic! I can definitely visualize everything perfectly! I tend to "watch" books as if they're a movie...your story lends itself well to that, which many fanfics don't. Congrats!!!!

    Oh yes...you asked about the names of my ferrets: Carlton (my favorite, the youngest, and the one who seems to be channeling in Satan), Tic Tac (a tiny mint with a nibble), Wednesday Addams (my only biter left), Sweetums (after the muppet), Nibbles (after the baby mouse in the diaper in Tom & Jerry), Kluster (the princess of the bunch), Post (who is deaf as a...), Molly (either Brown or Weasley...we've never been sure), and Vega (queen of the bunch).

    Hellborne
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  • From ANON - watashi on April 09, 2004
    I bow in the presence of a writer who both got Jack right and gave him an OFC who gives as good as she gets (probably in several senses of the phrase)! I still can't get Jack right, myself.

    I'm looking forward to reading more of this.
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  • From ANON - Rozzan on April 08, 2004
    Hi Blue Magic, Well you know how much I like this! It is just great. Your Jack Sparrow is spot on..spot on and Suzanna is going to be great. A match for Jack indeed.
    It has been a great pleasure to read this, posted here on the site and getting the reviews so soon that it deserves. I am sure we can all hardly wait for more.
    Especially after that F***ing delicious last line... of chapter 2
    "For the first and only time that any of them could remember, Jack Sparrow had taken his pleasure with his eyes closed."

    Priceless, absolutely priceless.......!!
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  • From hellborne on April 08, 2004
    ROTFLUASTF!!! This is positively the most delightful story I've read! You've got Jack perfect! And your lady is no Mary Sue!

    I've taken the liberty of putting this on my favorites list. You've got me rolling on the floor laughing uncontrollably and scaring the ferrets! You simply must write more, and quickly! Do you have other stuff somewhere else? Email me the url if you do!

    Truly, this is a MUST read for POTC fans!

    Hellborne
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  • From ANON - C.J. Davis on April 08, 2004
    I am thoroughly ingtrigued by this! Love Ms. Harcourt. And I think you've captured Jack Sparrow as well.

    C.J.
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  • From ANON - Che‡¨ ' on April 07, 2004
    LOVE IT!!! keep it up!
    I do so love a good beginning! And Please read my story too. It's called La Belle Rosa. Thanks

    -HisBeautiful- AKA: Chelsey
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  • From ANON - Anni on April 07, 2004
    At last, another person who can actually write! Your form and 'voice' are great, now let's see where the story goes. Jack/OFC stories are fine by me, just don't think about having him get (gasp) married. 'Married' and 'Jack' don't belong in the same sentence.
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