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By : bluemagic132003
  • From ANON - AbsyntheAddicted on April 23, 2004
    MORE MORE MoRE! what a great story!! i just love the way the characters interact! its fabulous! i want more please!
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  • From ANON - evileyedpirategrrl on April 22, 2004
    well blow me knickers off! a chapter dedicated all to meself!
    you must be a kind hearted pirate. kind hearted, but with a lewd
    and lusty soul....just how i like my pirates. it makes me happy that
    my suggestion inspired you. i think the different format worked
    really well for this chapter. since most of the story was conversation,
    breaking it up into segments involving two characters at a time was
    prolly the best way to write this chapter. whats the point of adding
    filler? breaking it into segments also made me feel more like i had
    stumbled into viewing these private moments, which i found very
    enjoyable. who doesn't have a little peeping tom in them? also, was
    i picking up a little heat between will and suzanna? and the last couple
    lines with the exchange between elizabeth and jack was definatly hot.
    hmm, maybe alittle group grope is in order, savvy? now that is any
    y
    i would love to join! i totally want to write my own fan fic now, maybe i
    can bounce some ideas off you? well any-hoo can't wait till the next chapter!
    rum flavored gold toothed pirate kisses luv xoxo
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  • From hellborne on April 22, 2004
    Magic, my dear, you have pure talent there for comedy...and romance. Truly delightful!

    I'm so glad I was finally able to read without interruption this time! Please continue...this is magnificent!

    Hellborne
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on April 22, 2004
    ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!! GAAAAAAAA!!!! You must write more or I'll die! You don't want me to die right? Cuz then I can't finish MY story. Which will be up ASAP. God I just got a brilliant idea for my smut from your smut. It's not taking ideas I promise on my pirate soul. It should be good though. Keep a p eyp eye out for chapter 5 Really Bad Eggs! Update soon!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - aimless on April 22, 2004
    I loved the latest two chapters. Jack is such a rogue. You manage admirably to keep the characters "in character" while adding you own personal flair to them. I like that Suzanna is willing to accept what ever Jack is willing to give. The skirmish with the French ship was very well written as were Jack's comments. I loved chapter 8, it added a lot to the story. Suzanna telling Elizabeth off was something I would have done. Her talk with Will later was also very well done. Look at the results it had, it made Elizabeth very happy. As always Jack and Suzanna are so very hot together. Elizabeth's parting comment to Jat tat the end of the chapter had me laughing with delight. Thank you for making my day by alerting me to your lovely updates. I cannot wait to read more.
    Hugs
    Amy L
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  • From ANON - Rozzan on April 22, 2004
    (Jack's offer shook him out of it. "Will - I'll get Gibbs to take over at
    the helm. Grab a bottle from me cabin and meet me on the terrace and we'll
    have a little chat. Elizabeth will be so happy with me she'll probably knit
    me a sweater. And Will - mind you tell the crew that the women had best not
    get wind of this little wager, or it'll be both our nuts in a noose." )

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    JUST LOVE YOUR HUMOUR
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    (It was a particularly warm evening and Jack had kicked off the thin
    blanket and lay stretched out in all his glory. Christ, she had never seen
    anything more beautiful in her life, particularly as he was either having a
    very good dream or he was already awake and waiting for her. )

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    WELL THANK YOU! THAT'S JUST GONE AND SPOILED ME FOR LEGOLAS FOR A WHILE
    *************


    (Gives a man pause as to the cause. although the effect." and he shuddered
    again. )


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    Love the way you play with words...magic...so good
    ****************

    (and was truly lost to the deep.)

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    WHAT A BEAUTIWAY WAY TO DESCRIBE IT...ESPECIALLY FOR A PIRATE...GOD YOU ARE GOOD AT THIS.
    *************

    ( still hadn't been to sleep but he didn't think he cared if he ever slept
    again.)

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    YOU KNOW THAT IS JUST HOW I FEEL WHEN I'M THINKING ABOUT LEGOLAS
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    ("Had I suspected, I might not have burned the rum."0

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    WHAT A LOVELY WAY TO FINISH.. YET ANOTHER MINDBLOWING LAST LINE
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  • From ANON - C.J. Davis on April 21, 2004
    Well now... I've been away for a bit and look what I miss Won Wonderful! Love the humor, the steamy sex, the inuendos, the romantic sappy stuff.. all of it!

    C.J.
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  • From ANON - Jamie on April 20, 2004
    I wasn't sure if I would like this when I first started reading it...but it's amazing! I cannot wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Emeraldfire on April 20, 2004
    That was a fun chapter!
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on April 20, 2004
    Ok Ok OK...............SMUUUUUUUUUUT!
    I feel better now. You should so update this fast! I love the story line and I need more! I loooooove your story Blue Magic keep it up!
    oh and have you read my 4th chapter? Cuz 5 will be up soon.

    -Chesey- AKA:HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - travieso on April 17, 2004
    Great! Please continue.
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  • From hellborne on April 16, 2004
    Magic, my dear. I can't figure out why you don't have a lore hre hits than you do. This is simply magnificient! As you know, I don't usually like OCs (especially the female variety), but this story is NO Mary Sue! She's very realistic, and for ONCE I actually identify with the WOMAN of the story!

    Don't know how you managed to pull that one off, but please continue...PRETTY PLEEEZE?

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  • From ANON - Emeraldfire on April 16, 2004
    Very hot! Just when I thought a love scene couldn't get any better you go and top it! Also, I agree with the other reviewers, your Jack is "spot on".
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  • From ANON - evileyedpirategrrl on April 16, 2004
    oh, thank gaaawd, you posted a new chapter. i was waiting for it with
    breathless anticion. on. i'm very much smitten with your story. can't wait
    till i get to read about will and lizzy's reaction to the snog-fest. hmm, maybe
    they should join in on the fun, have one big pirate orgy!
    arrrgh-wanna little pirate in yah? xoxo
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on April 15, 2004
    All i can say is dear god! I want to be locked in Jack's cabing for a day and a half! This story is getting gooooooood! Keep it up! and thanks for the review!
    Update soon!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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