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By : bluemagic132003
  • From ANON - anasazi on May 10, 2004
    This fiction is great! One of the best at getting Jack true-haraharacter. Is it finished or will there be more? I HOPE more.
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  • From ANON - Emeraldfire on May 05, 2004
    An amazing chapter!!! Very well told story of her past! I love how complex and well rounded you've made Suzanna and Jack.
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on May 04, 2004
    Magic! Now I know where you came up with your pen name! That was pure magic! I love your writing. Please do go on. I'm dying to see 's 's in store. Oh God that was beautiful. Please update soon

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - Absynthe Addicted on May 04, 2004
    Ok...Awesome...thats all i can say...just totally awe struck with this story. i love it!!! please...more...please!
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  • From ANON - Emeraldfire on May 04, 2004
    I don't quite understand what it is they are fighting about. He saved her life. Good chapter though.
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  • From ANON - aimless on May 02, 2004
    Your spot on characterization of Jack continues to amaze me and Jack's conversation with Ruby was delightful. Your sense of drama is very finely honed as well. This story continues to be a delight with every chapter. Please keep up the excellent work
    Hugs
    Amy L
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  • From ANON - LOYL on May 02, 2004
    LOML,

    Wow, This story is great.

    Especially chapter 8. I didn't know you could think of these things, much less write them down. I, for one, am glad you can, and do ;-)

    WhiIe reading it, I completely forget that it is you writing it. (except for the occaisional totally Signature moments)

    I can't wait till Chapter 10.


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  • From ANON - Daisy on May 01, 2004
    Hey there! I really am enjoying your story! I especially like the tender side of Jack, you have written it very very well and I can really see how well he and Suzanna are matched. Good job!

    *~*~* Daisy

    And thanks for being such a faithful reader of my stories!
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  • From ANON - The Duchess on April 28, 2004
    I like what you did with Chapter 9 ~ starting it from the end was great! When's 10 coming? Put aside that OB fantasy and remember where your heart is ~ with Jack! Love you!
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  • From ANON - Ishtar on April 28, 2004
    excellent story! this is your first fanfic? wow! I love how you've written/created Suzanna
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  • From hellborne on April 28, 2004
    Magic, love, you are so great! This is definitely one of my favorites!

    Please keep going!!!

    Hellborne
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  • From ANON - AbsyntheAddicted on April 27, 2004
    OK! you are right! haha i am not likeing you! You just can't leave me like this! This has got to be one of my favorite fanfics...you have a great talent for writing. I really love how jack praised Ruby but then she ended up being a hag....classic Jack! haha and also I think my favorite thing that jack has been saying is "Christ on a stick!" haha its sooo funny. Makes me crack up every time. I really think you are doing and excellent job but oh yeah...MORE SEX! haha Jack just makes it so great...keep goin' luv your doing wonderfully.
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on April 27, 2004
    You evil Harpy!!! I want you to write more more more!!!! This is getting to be a great story! but I must admit I miss the smut. I did like the fight however and cannot WAIT until you update. So do it soon or I'll find out where you live and tie you to the keyboard until you've finished the story!!!! But please update soon. I'll be waiti

    -

    -Chelsey!-
    AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - 3 a.m. Gigglefest on April 24, 2004
    Phenomenal writing, and really rich character development. Along with deliciously sinful sex scenes--can't get enough and am waiting for more more more...I'm completely hooked!
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  • From ANON - Jedi Daisy on April 23, 2004
    Hi! I just sat here and read your whole story, and I have to say I l I like it, a lot. You are very good with descriptions, I had a very good picture of Suzanna early on, and she seems like a perfect match for Jack. I loved the part in the last chapter when Jack asked if he was going to have to kill the welp just when he was getting interesting. That cracked me up. You have cha character down pat, and I'm slightly jealous. I have such a hard time writing him. Good work, and thanks for your input on my story as well. I'll be reading yoursat'at's for sure!!!

    *~*~* Jedi Daisy
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