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By : bluemagic132003
  • From ANON - Chelsey on July 03, 2004
    Oh goody!!! I can't wait to read your next chapter! Please update soon Magic! Oh and go check out La Belle Rosa, Chapter 5 is out! Can't wait to read your review.
    What's in store for Will and Elizabeth???????!!!!! Hurry and update!!!!


    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - C.J. Davis on July 02, 2004
    Haven't reviewed in awhile, for that I'm sorry. Real life intruded, what can I say. Anyway, good story. I'm curious as to how they're going to become rich but I figure you'll elighten us soon enough. Keep up the good writing.


    C.J
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  • From ANON - aimless on July 01, 2004
    Oh wonderful 2 chapters Luv. Jack has fallen and fallen hard. Will got to take the helm, and take Elizabeth too for that matter. Heh. Loved the part where Will slapped Anna Maria on the butt. Also now the plot thickens, rich beyond their wildest dreams......hmmmm. I really like the part where Jack talked to Wll about his father, wonderfully done. I love this story the characterizations continue to be right on the mark. I cannot wait to read more.
    Hugs
    Amy

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  • From hellborne on July 01, 2004
    Well done, my dear! Sorry I haven't been around for a bit...I've been doing migraines instead...I'd rather be reading your story!

    Looks like next chapter will be "it" unless you've got a new plot complication. Excellent work and extremely entertaining!

    I've finished The Sail Maker...could you look at it and let me know what you think please? I'm curious...

    Hugs!

    Hellborne
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  • From ANON - n¨ ' on November 30, -0001
    well have read this several +++ times and just wanted to say that what is stingingly sharp on first reading becomes razor like on subsequent visits..you come back and think...fuck ..yes that is exactly it. the portrayal of jack is amazing- he is human-not cartoon- he is vibrant, funny ,real and incredibly sexy and i just want to get to read more more more-can't get enough of him and his stuff with suzanna-
    and the lovemaking- written with experience, love, emotion and a love for this inspirational pirate that shines through..and did i mention that it is so hot it melts me..
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  • From ANON - Absynthe Addicted on June 08, 2004
    HOLY HELL! Unbelievable! I really think that chapter may have been one of the most beautiful things I have ever read! This is just getting so good. i love this story!!!! Keep going please!!!
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on June 02, 2004
    I can't believe chapchapter! I loved it! You wrote the ocean/sex scene so well. It's like the couple was truly free. Please do write more! You made it all so real! Continue!
    and look for chapter 5 of La Belle Rosa "Devils, and Black Sheep, and Really Bad Eggs!"

    Update soon!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From JennyPugh on June 02, 2004
    Lovely chapter, but I can't help wondering wheres iss is all leading?
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  • From ANON - anasazi on May 19, 2004
    Please, please, please UPDATE!!! This story is so good in so many ways we're hungry for more! SOON!! PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on May 16, 2004
    OMG! I still wish all sex were that good! That was so hot! I almost need to go take a cold shower. I did enjoy the midnight snack theme, twas brilliant! Please do update soon!
    This just keeps getting better and better!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - Absynthe Addicted on May 15, 2004
    Now that's more like it! i stil just can't get over how well you characterize all of them and i think the more you delve into the personals the better the sex is! but yes..more sex! detelytely.
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  • From ANON - anasazi on May 14, 2004
    Great update!! I was so scared you were done with this fic, but I added your author page to "Favorites" and just kept checking back until I found the ever-so-pleasant _surprise_ of a new chapter! Sorry, luv, couldn't resist[insert Jack's cheeky smile here]. Great writing, great imagination. Please keep going. Must. Have More!
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  • From ANON - aimless on May 14, 2004
    Hello Luv! Jack and food and hot sex! Gasp! Drool! Swoon! Thud!!!!!! Oh my what a chapter. It is a pity you do not get more reviews I have been a staunch and true fan since chapter 1 and will continue to be one. I love this story and the characters. There are not enough het fics and this is a gem. I cannot wait until the next chapter.
    Hugs
    Amy L

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  • From JennyPugh on May 14, 2004

    Hmmm! That chapter has made me hungry now.... d'you think Jack will come and feed me?
    This is a great story and I apologise for not reviewing sooner. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From hellborne on May 11, 2004
    Hello Magic my dearest! Sorry about the delay in reading Chapter 10...I've been rather, shall we say, "indesposed" regarding the entire Internet...

    Anyway, fantastic story! Reminds me a little of something...I'll tell you about it some time...it's not from any fics I've read. You just keep on writing and writing and writing, and I'll be one happy Hellborne!

    Love ya!

    Hellborne
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