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By : bluemagic132003
  • From ANON - Sparrow-Lover78 on October 28, 2004
    This has got to be one of the best stories I have read. I love the way you write and explain everything in such detail. Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoo© ' on October 30, 2004
    Wow! What a great surprise(no pun intended!) ! It's been awhile since your last update. Mas vale tarde que nunca(better late than never)! You have a really good story going! Your original characters are really great and you've played off the movie characters beautifully! Mas updates soon, por favor! Date prisa! Tu eliges!(hurry up! It's up to you!) Keep up the great writing, mi chiquita! Tengo que irme! Salud! (I must be off! Cheers!) Killer K JGEL :)
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  • From ANON - dramaced on October 18, 2004
    Thanks for a lovely chap...so glad to see you had updated!
    The only thing I didn't get that I really wanted in this chapter was the story of how Jack got back...and news of the Pearl, how is she and who's in charge in Jack's absence?
    Wine cellar love, now there's a thought...one would have to be careful not to break things, though... :-)
    I am wondering...is this the end, or will there be more, or a sequel? I surely hope there will be more, in some form!
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  • From katrinacarvell on October 17, 2004
    Wow. Can't believe I've been missing all this!! I'm extremely thrilled to have stumbled upon this stoTookTook me a bit, but I easily got through every one of these marvelous chapters in just under three hours. ^.^ Really, your writing is excellent. You've got excellent writing style, the plot is great, unique, and utterly captivating. I love how you've portrayed Jack, and Suzanna is a magnificent character. The relationship between Elizabeth and Jack is truly the best I've ever seen and the father-son relationship between Jack and Will is the best I've seen as well. The icanicane was an excellent plot idea, which I truly love and have never seen used in another story. I couldn't ask for anything to make this story better. ^.^ I absolutely love it, and now I'm utterly addicted to it. ^.^ Can NOT wait for anotheapteapter (one which I hope will come swiftly) and I am eagerly awaiting to see what happens next for Jack, Suzanna, Will, Elizabeth, the Pearl, and the rest of this marvelous cast! ^.^
    Write MORE ASAP!
    Best Wishes,
    Kat Carvell
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  • From ANON - Lizzynet on October 17, 2004
    Aww, Magic you made me blush with your credits! Love the chapter. The pacing is fast and the sex is hot and fast too. Thank you for the moment in the cellar. Suzanna will make it up to Jack, I'm sure. XOXO
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  • From ANON - anasazi on September 19, 2004
    What Carol said...DOUBLED!! I am SO hoping there is going to be more of this. To paraphrase Capt'n Jack: PLEASE write?!
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  • From ANON - Carol on September 18, 2004
    I'm back, being greedy, read all the way thru The Fight. Damn, woman, this is so good. Oh, 'scuse me, I'm assuming you're female...you write so convincingly I'm assuming you must be... I see I'm more than half finished with the existing chaps. Is Port Royal the end? I hope not, I sincerely hope not! I love EVERYTHING you are doing with this, and want it to go on and on.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2004
    I've read the first two chapters (recommended by a friend) and I'm hooked. Absolutely bloody marvellous!! Can't wait to get to the rest.
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  • From ANON - nuit on August 31, 2004
    mmmmmm..sorry just read that again..thank the lord he came back..was desperate for him to..ok so she was too
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on August 22, 2004
    I loved it! I know exactally how she feels. I loose my other half for 6 months out of the year to the damn place that is college. Fortunatly for me I know for sure when he's coming home. Update soon. I love this story.

    -Chelsey-AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - Ani Sparrow on August 21, 2004
    Oh that was wonderful. I thought for one horrible moment you were going to do something... stupid. You had me going through the whole gamut of emotions there - bravo!
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on August 21, 2004
    Wow! What a great story! I can't contain una cara alegre(Espanol for a smiling face)! Can't wait for more updates- Date prisa, porfavTu eTu eliges!(hurry up, please! It's up to you!)Why am I writing like this? No tengo ni idea! (I haven't got a clue!)You're probably thinking ' Cierra la puerta?' (Were you born in a barn?) No, I just like using what very little Spanish I know- makes this Southern hillbilly feel smart. Once again, love your story. Keep up the great writing. Tengo que irme! Salud! (I must be off! Cheers!) All hail Johnny Depp- the great creator(?) of the marvelous Jack Sparrow! - I'm sorry- I meant "Captain" Jack Sparrow!
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  • From ANON - sarah on July 22, 2004
    Awesome story!!!! Great writing! But don't leave me hanging here, PLEASE update soon!!!!!! I can't wait to see what's coming next!!
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  • From ANON - anasazi on July 10, 2004
    Words cannot express how happy I was to see a new chapter for this story. It just keeps getting better and better, and keeps me eager for more. May your real life settle down to pleasantness so you can write more. thank you so much for gifting us with this story!!
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  • From ANON - nuit on July 05, 2004
    this just gets better and better if that is possible...there are ideas and thoughts flying around so generously it is hard to catch hold of them all first time round.. i love it
    jack and suzannas landscape..wills taste..the beach..just lovely and gorgeous.more more ..please
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