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Reviews for The Makings of a Pirate

By : hellborne
  • From ANON - LesbianLovers on December 28, 2005
    We didn't read this story because we like f/f only, unless there masturbation female and men watch (though we prefer f/f voeyuerism) well anyway, we wish the best to Hellborne and wish her well on her journey to the land of Eternal Peace (Paradise) and to wish that her fnial Christmas and Boxing Day was a happy one, enjoying happy final hours with loved ones and friends.
    Yours Sincerely,
    Anna and Heather
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 01, 2005
    OK, I'll go over to fanfiction.net and try to find the end of this story. Just found it or I would have reviewed sooner. Seriously good plot bunny here and glad you followed it up for our pleasure.
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  • From ANON - KELLY on March 20, 2005
    WOW! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT
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  • From ANON - LadyJanelly on December 31, 2004
    Ferrets and katanas and secret identities. Very cool. Love what you did with Jack's history, and Norrington's future.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2004
    You've stepped well out of canon, letting a man who owns half Jamaica take ten years to recover his Pearl. But that plot hole is like bad bits of pavement on the scenic route: no challenge to ignore, while the sights are so engaging. And your daring to explain the presence of Pintel and Ragetti goes a long way to make up for the other one. If I could have a dish or two from Rags' galley, all would be square.

    I like your characterizations. You plot and pace action and revelation well. I even like the critters. In sum, I hope your plot ferrets remain strong, sleek, and above all prolific!
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  • From ANON - cruiser on December 19, 2004
    WOW...love the sequel as much as the first story. Please update and finish the ending.......and could there be another in the series after this???? Your fans await with baited breath. Will definitely "keep a weather eye" out for future chapters. Well done.
    5 stars.......
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  • From ANON - bwalsh on July 18, 2004
    A most excellent story. I liked the teeth part. I had been thinking CJS covered "real" teeth with gold. But I can see where a pirate-etc. would need some falsies! I love epilogues also, it's a "where are they now" thing! Thanks bunches!!!
    bw
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  • From ANON - Bray on July 01, 2004
    I enjoyed this story. The plot line was well done, and the characters nicely written. I liked the 'adjustments' that you made to the characters, and the developing of their back grounds. I wish I could see how the Christmas Party turned out. . . Oh well. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - littlebird on April 20, 2004
    >The ridges from his slave’s brand were smooth to the touch and
    had faded a bit through the years, but it was still there.
    Ah, so Jack was a slave once. That explains a lot.
    But such a sad end - caged sparrow. *sob*
    Nonetheless, I feed the plotbunnies - to the plotferrets. Go for them, Kali, Satan!
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  • From ANON - Blue Magic on April 18, 2004
    Aaaah! O MY GOD!!!!! All three cats and two other family members just turned to lookat me to find out why I screamed. You are the QUEEN of the plot twists and I so did not see that one coming. BRILLIANT!!!!
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  • From ANON - Elessil on April 18, 2004
    Love it! All hail to the mighty plot ferrets!
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  • From ANON - Blue Magic on April 14, 2004
    Truly, woman you have no shame. Invoking Tinkerbell to get reviews! Damn, I wish I'd thought of it. I absolutely love this story. To watch James turn to Robert and be convinced of it is no small accomplishment. I really love it.
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  • From ANON - Seiko on April 14, 2004
    At the beginning of the chapter with Jack letting Pintel beat the crap out of him and shoot him in the chest, I was pretty confused lol. But I stuck it out knowing that Jack always has a plan up his sleeve. The takeover of the Dauntless was great! Yay Cap'n or should I say, Commadore Sparrow!

    Also I liked the appearence of the ferrets, very very cute. :D
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  • From ANON - Motley on April 12, 2004
    *feeds the plot ferrets* oooooh, more, more, more. This totally rocks. I love Jack prancing around in foppish gear, the idea makes me go all weak at the knees. Nice to see stuffy old Norrington letting his hair down & living it up a bit. Please continue with this story, pleeeeeeeeeease!
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  • From ANON - Blue Magic on April 11, 2004
    This chapter is just FUN! The simultaneous education and corruption of the commodore is delicious. As the chaptnds,nds, all I can feel is a tremendous anticipation and think, "I wanna go too!"
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