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Reviews for The Makings of a Pirate

By : hellborne
  • From ANON - Blue Magic on April 10, 2004
    Let's see, have I used the word genius yet? Nope, I've checked my reviews thus far, and its missing. I am dazzled. I also have to tell you that there is a balot lot bunny lurking in my story that will look familiar but from a very diferent direction. Boy, this is fun.
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  • From ANON - Blue Magic on April 08, 2004
    Hellborne, you and those ferets are something else. Having already tapped in to the daydreamer, the voyeeur, the architect and the sleuth in me, now you tap in to The Crusader. As there is nothing more vile and loathsome on this earth than slavery, I am eating this up with a spoon. I love it.
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  • From ANON - Blue Magic on April 08, 2004
    You really are brilliant. So now I'll be really presumptuous and say great minds think alike. When I post chapter 3 of my story, know that I wrote it before I read this. Interesting.....You must be a food fan as well. On to Chapter 4....
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  • From ANON - Blue Magic on April 08, 2004
    This is a dazzling beginning. You had me engaged from word one and then never disappointed me. Jack at his machiavellian scheming best, a fascinating twist with Lizzie as the captain, a great cause to make kiiling seem justified. Actually I've had some thoughts about slavery myself, and how it fits into Jack's story, so it will be interesting to see how we both follow those lines. ove ove seeing peoples' different visions of these characters.

    I would love it if you could take a look at my story Surprises, and comment as it develops. I think my strong suit is more the word play and romance, and you are obviously BRILLIANT at adventure, so I'd love to have the benefit of your feedback.

    I can't wait for your next upda
    Blu
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  • From ANON - Lyndraco on April 06, 2004
    I like it so far, please continue! I'd give you something for your plot ferrets to eat, but I'm not entirely sure what ferrets eat.......
    But anyway, keep writing!
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