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Reviews for The Sail Maker

By : hellborne
  • From ANON - TheSailMakerFan on April 25, 2004
    Please update this fic!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - hammer on April 19, 2004
    Plz update!!!
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  • From ANON - littlebird on April 13, 2004
    I half hoped, half feared the raid would fail, the Spaniards would capture Jack. No matter what they would have actually done to him, it should have been hell for him and for Will also.
    Now they gained lots of gold, but the Pearl is severley undercrewed and captained by a blind, depressed man whom most of the crew never knew as captain. I'd expect a mutiny as soon as the other ship is out of sight or any problem occurs.
    The whole story is enthrilling and fascinating, but so very sad.
    If Jack cannot bear to be touched even by Will, how shall that doctor ever work on his eyes? Would Will drug him and tie him up? Only for good of course, but scaring him to death?
    Sorry I can't really feed the plot bunnies, but the plot ferrets would hunt and eat them anyway.
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  • From ANON - pendragginink on April 11, 2004

    Jack entered the cabin and stood in the doorway. “What emergency, Captain?”

    “Jack, please don’t call me that.”

    “Fine. What emergency…whelp?
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    Just dropped in to spy on the reviews. Have to tell you that i love this line exchange here. it nails the characters brilliantly. does. still cant get over how you are able to communicate so much with so few, but carefully selected, words. very very visual without being words. ill figure it out someday. great story. but you knew i knew that and i knew that you knew that i knew.
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  • From ANON - Blue Magic on April 09, 2004
    You are the master/mistress of detail. From the spyglasses atop the guns to the battle to Jack's physical reaction to Will. You are killing me but it is brilliant. Can't wait to read more. Kisses to the ferrets.
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  • From ANON - Mel on April 09, 2004
    Awesome so far! You've kept Jack "Jack-like" even through his injuries and less than savory past, well done. And your characterization of Will is wonderful as well. ^_^ So glad you updated, I've been looking forward to this! heh^_^V Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - butterfly13 on April 09, 2004
    What happened to Jack!!!??? Please review soon! Love the story! Can't wait for the rest!! Do you have a mailing list?
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  • From ANON - Blue Magic on April 08, 2004
    I thought I was going to be too heartbroken to keep going on this one, but you've given me the encouragement I needed. The problem with good writing is that when its sad it works too well.
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  • From ANON - Frankenmuth on April 06, 2004
    the Luz? *grins stupidly* Luz was my name in Spanish class!

    I'm a dork

    Please write more! *pets the plot bunnies*

    I really like this story, it's sad what happened to Jack and I hope he gets to see again.

    (Write more, please please please please please!)
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  • From ANON - wintermoondancer on April 06, 2004
    this is very unique! and might I add very well written. Would very much like to read more!
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  • From ANON - seraphina on April 06, 2004
    OMG!!!! you must continue this. When Jack said that no one would touch his eyes for fear of blinding him for life i was like 'hang on...he's blind if they don't' and then he said it, and i laughed.
    Great premise! But he's got no leg *wails* but the bit about no one feeling pity for him as long as he put the boot on the right way LMAO!!!!
    keep going, keep going, keep going!
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  • From ANON - pendragginink on April 06, 2004
    I love the streamlined style you use in this one. its fresh. clear. and i want to kick jack's butt for letting will think him dead all thesers. rs. hes back on the pearl at least. now to get e eye eyes open. and find out why jack cant stand to be touched. tossing crumbs to the rabid plot bunnies.
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  • From ANON - bittersweet on April 05, 2004
    well, here's my donation to the "Feed the Plotbunnies" fund:
    If this isn't off to a great start, then...actuall don don't know, but this is starting off nicely. I've read a couple where it's will who goes off and is Changed Nearly Beyond Recognition, but i don't think i've seen it done with jack more than once before; it's a nice change. it'll be interesting to see what happened to him and the usual question of why didn't he go back to his beloved (ship, that is). hope you update soon, and your other fics too.
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  • From ANON - Anni on April 05, 2004
    Good start. Wiolloollow this one.
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  • From ANON - hammer on April 05, 2004
    Continue this soon.... is kinda different from most have read...... or at least, it seems to be. Write more!!!!
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