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Reviews for Opportunity

By : Chrysanthemum
  • From lostmarbles on June 29, 2009
    Aww, I just found this little gem and it's wonderful--well, yes dark and deals with some horrible topics, but the way you wrote it was simply superb and the thing between Jack & Will...so well done. Really, brilliant. I loved it.
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  • From spookydaedalus on June 05, 2007
    Excellent story. You have managed to make it quite in character, and deeply moving. Thanks. And nice job
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  • From ANON - Lans_chan on November 12, 2006
    Oh my god...

    I LOVED IT! This is /the/ best PotC fic I have EVER read! The detail you gave was amazing. And the way you portrayed the characters was flawless in my opinion! And...to add to that, I always love seeing Jack as uke, wether it's for n/c or not. ^^;
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  • From ANON - AnAngelInHell on February 12, 2006
    Brilliant. Amazingly well written and so heartbreaking. I nearly cried. Brilliant. Just wonderful.
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  • From on June 14, 2005
    Waaah! So sad yet so wonderful! Your descriptions and character portrayals were excellent! I would love to see a sequel to this with Will/Jack... but of course, that's entirely up to you. ^_^
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  • From ANON - mikky on May 25, 2004
    That was good but...............how could you end like that? i demand a sequel.
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  • From ANON - AriadneElda on May 13, 2004
    Well... it seems I'm at a loss fordsords. What can I say? Your story was... simply powerful! So dark and gloomy and sad and shocking and yet so compelling. I couldn't take my eyes off the screen for a single second. I think it's the most powerful (yeah, same word, can't think of any better) fic I've ever read. It certainly left an imprint in my mind and heart. What Jack did was such a noble deed; I could also say heroic and brave. I'm glad you're writing a sequel, as I saw in your homepage. I so much want to see Jack and Will having a second chance and getting together after this terrible incident. They could both definitely do with a second chance. I can't wait to see the story posted. You really are an amazingly talented writer. (And your other story, En Route to Tortuga, which I read as well of course, was just great, really wonderful!)
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  • From ANON - roxierocks on May 09, 2004
    hi, this is going to sound a bit stupid, but i can't get your story out of my head. I've already read it twice, and i just...really liked it.
    I found it very in character, and feel that Jack would do something just like that, sacrifice himself for Will, but refuse to ever truly tell him why. I liked the way you described the layers of Jack's character, and the use of "opportune moment". I don't know if you're planning on continuing this, or writing a sequial, but I would love to hear from you if you do, or the next time youmit mit any work. thanks for the story!
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  • From ANON - Sarryn on March 29, 2004
    Absolutely gorgeous and dark story. The depth of emotion and the various levels of humanity worked throughout were truly enthralling. I am most grateful to have been privileged enough to read it.
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  • From ANON - Rutaari on March 28, 2004
    That was absolutely, positively, THE most disgusting thing I've ever read! Great job! I mean, this was more than just a Will and Jack rape story, so much more! This was a Jack-gets-raped-be-cursed-monster-skeleton-things-with-decaying-dicks story! That part truly grossed me out, I'm not kidding. (And I do internship at an animal surgical clinic! I'm NOT easily grossed out!)

    I love the way you write! You're very descriptive, showing tons of imagery, which makes the story all the better. Not to mention your characters, how you build them up and show every single little thought that runs through their minds. This was brilliant! Absolutely brilliant. Cheers!

    ~Rutaari
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