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Reviews for The Curse of Sanity

By : lostmarbles
  • From ChibiDarkAngel on January 08, 2009
    I think this was a wonderful story. And it shows you how the world really is just with a little twist. Life isn't really butterflies and rainbows for everybody and reality has a way of showing you that in terrible and horrible was. The story was a really good one.
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  • From ANON - Miya Sparrow on July 26, 2005
    cool! dark and...odd but cool. You know what I find interesting? everyone picks on Will! He's the one who gets hurt, raped, killed, ect. its really weird hehehehe, of course i'm not complaning about it. Although I'm a little upset with Jack *shakes head* that was disappointing. anyway! it was still good!
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  • From ANON - Nomi on April 17, 2004
    i don't review much, but i think your story has a unique twist to a potc fic. It's really interesting and can suck a reader into it, i hope you continhis his fic because i will return and read it!
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  • From ANON - Selena Delioncourt on April 08, 2004
    Sorry I didn't leave my name. I don't have an account on AFF. First of all, I really like your writing! It's a wonderful relief from all the boring, cliches for J/W slash. Don't let this one little flame get to you. At least the flamer left ducaducated flame. Trust me, it could have been worse. To me, every story put on AFF and any other fan fiction site is a work of art. Some art is better than others. This story is an expression of yourself. I think it's wonderful. Please keep it!!
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  • From ANON - Ibonekoen on March 29, 2004
    I didn't think it was a waste of my time. It was definitely dark and certainly made me stop and say 'Whoa'. Whether you should take it down or not. . .well, that's only one flame, and you're going to get those, unfortunately. All you can do is just ignore it and keep writing.

    I didn't think there were any Mary Sues. Spellcheck would be nice, but hey, we all make mistakes.
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  • From ANON - Brandybuccaneer on March 27, 2004
    Nah, leave it up. It's their own problem. "If they don't like, why'd they read" and "You need to look up WARNING, apparently" and all those other cases.

    I, for one, tht yht your fic veryvery nicely written. :)
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  • From ANON - Lovingelves on March 27, 2004
    No girl, don't take it off, i loved it! Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase don't take it off :D

    Lovingelves
    author Will love be the saviour :D
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  • From ANON - soxy on March 27, 2004
    I don't think you should take it down. Though it is a bit depressing, I still think it was an interesting read. But hey thats just my opinion.
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  • From ANON - roxie on March 26, 2004
    dammit. i just reviewed and then lost my internet connection and it didn't go through and i have no idea what i said.

    ok, *calms down* i now feel obligated to review (which I should do anyway, b/c it's just polite since i'm reading other ppl's works). I wanted to articulate my mixed feelings on this story. this is VERY different from what I usually read because there was hurt, but no comfort (no chance for that since will killed himself). altho i understand where you're coming from and it seems like that's will's only logical choice. i read this the first day you posted it and i still haven't decided whether will's crazy or jack really was a vampire. if you were going to expand upon it i would ask for a chapter in jack's point of view. despite the pain inflicted upon will, i'm kinda glad jack didn't abandon him and 'loved' him back in some way (i'm sick, i know). another thing that made me happs ths that mr. + mrs. turner made an appearance (it's nice to seem them alive for once). i especially like that bill was an asshole because that seems to be taboo in this fandom.

    my point - you should definitely keep your story up because some everyone has different tastes and there will be ppl who like it and ppl who don't, but all in all it was a well written story with an intriguing and original premise. you've provided us with a bit a diversity; and diversity's always a gohinghing.
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  • From ANON - Edward Uwnhai Silverfang on March 26, 2004
    Ok I’m really fucking mad now!!! Stupid jackass, not even brave enough to leave an email address. This was a wonderful story with plenty of angst and it was not written to please anybody but the writer, though any good author loves to hear feedback. One most assuredly does not have the right to give so much fucking shite off to an undesng png person.

    The story WAS a used story line in many fandom’s, but it was her own personal take on it and different in the fact that SHE wrote it and not anyone else. In defense of the grammar, most writers don’t usually catch it on their own, even some famous writers could not get grammar down on their own, that’s the job of the beta-reader, me!

    But I’ve been terribly sick, in and out of the hospital, kind of sick, excuse me for skipping over some, no body’s perfect.ore ore publishing books, the publisher has to read, then a lot of other people read it and review it, and during this process grammar and spelling is checked and they make sure there are no plot holes to be found, I’m just one person who knows next to nothing in the way of grammar or spelling. I just have a knack for seeing these things, and if it sounds wrong when I say it out loud, I change it!

    Lydia, if you take it down, it will be like giving in. Like getting kicked by a bully and shooting yourself in the head cause ase asshole doesn’t like you. Leave it up; give another chapter saying what you think about such an incorrigible, pompous, flatulent! Gather as many good reviews as you can and put it up along side it, flaunt it in this persons face about how much others enjoy it and yotyletyle of writing.

    You have personal experience about how picky I am in what I enjoy, and if *I* say its good, or you have potential, then you better darn well believe it! Don’t give yourself over to the critics who hate you, or enjoy taking people down, just tell yourself your good and *that* should be all that matters.

    -Edward Uwnhai Silverfang >:o
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  • From ANON - Jamie Roberts on March 26, 2004
    Oh what a wonderful story... I have been in the mood for something gloomy, please dont take it do I e I enjoyed it very much. Just you really should give the Vampire a name.
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  • From ANON - Frankenmuth on March 26, 2004
    *growls* Stupid AFF (sorry, I had this really nice review all typed ond ind it like ate it go something and now it's gone! *crys*)

    I'll try again.

    I don't think you should get rid of this story. I thought you did a good job of writing a hop hope you will continue to write other stories as well. I believe that if you are willing to put what you write out here to be read it has a right to be here. You put something you wrote online so people could see it and that takes guts. (Guts I personally don't have yet) Flamers, I think, just get kicks from bringing other's down and by taking the story off you are doing just that, beinging yourself down. Not every person rea read and like every story but that does not mean that they can insult the writer of the story just because they didn't like it. I liked your story, while dark and rather depressing I thought you did a good job of putting feeling behind the work. Please don't let what one person says get you down. Writing is a part of yourself, never change the way you write unless you want to, you could write the best story in the world and there would still be people who would say it sucks. You can't let them get to you.

    I hope you will write another story soon, I'd love to see what comes out next.
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  • From ANON - WitchesRaven on March 26, 2004
    Well....it wasn't the ending I thought it was going to have...but it was a good story and well written...don't take it down and try not to let the opinions of others make yhinkhink your stuff is bad. Hope to read another fic soon. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - thegorgonmedusa on March 26, 2004
    You shouldnt take it dow but instead change bits and peices and make it a longer more thriling story, the time Jack and Will got to gether how they got together etc. More of Wills time in the vampires lair would begood to, the reaction of his parents and Elizabethhave the vampire change him instead of killing him, but maybe take it back in time to the Pirates time have him bitten then, have Jack reborn in the 20th Century and Will is looking for him etc. Keep coming with all of your stories though you have eent ent plots.
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