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By : hellborne

From ANON - spotted.paw on April 03, 2004
What you wanted to say is "Mein kleiner Depp, verschwinde von meinen Schiff und sei das n�chste Mal bei der Namenswahl ein bisschen kreativer." I know because I am Austrian, i.e. speak German. Just in case you desperately want the "son" to be in, use "Deppensohn" instead of just Depp. You could say that, but the other sounds better. I'm not sure where they use "Depp" actually, we rather say Trottel here (was funny when Charlie's Angels: Full Throttle was released, though). Poor Johnny. He'll have to take my name when we get married.
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From ANON - pendragginink on April 03, 2004
This a great chapter. Love the detail. Love jack's kid. Too bad they have the feisty relationship--but i guess it couldn't be any other way could it? Spatz is about twenty, no? Fun seeing all the pirates at a party. That is going to be quite a fleet that commodore sparrow commands. Henry Morgan had a fleet like that on one raid. but they didn't do anything close to demolishing an entire cliff. Now is Will the devil? or is Jack? Of course Jack isn't afraid of th devil. The devil has hooves and horns. that means he only eats grass. Nothing to be afraid of there. It is brilliant how you had the captains all suspicious of each other and at the same time all agreeing on a goal. love the guns all whipping out at Spatz. What is is with this doctor? I mean, we all love Jack, we all want to give him baths--even Will gets into the act. Nuthing to be ashamed of doc, say it I LOVE JACK. now Im laughing. thank you for writing such good stuff. this chapter is as fine as anything Ive read in fan fic and that is a lot I tell you. wilck tck torture the crdinal? or will he just lock him up and let him worry about it for a couple years
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From ANON - bittersweet on April 02, 2004
what? no more story?! but...but...i just found it! you can't do this to me, please, no, it's too good.
seriously now, this story really is good: extra realistic (although some of that realism - the surgery - almost had me squicked to the point of no return), and thought out, and so well written that i didn't know i was reading for an hour straight. Your characters seem a little off from what i usually read in fanfics, but that's good - you're different, and i'm getting bored with whiny!will. i'm really into your tale and i hope you continue it so i can find out what happens to the doctor's modesty and jack's son!
i'm off to find out if all your fics are as great as this one. ciao!
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From ANON - Koryu on April 01, 2004
I love this story ^-^. I always wanted Jack and Will to be together when I saw the film and now it�s reality. *g*
About your German, heres a correction from what you wrote: "Mein kleiner Idiot, verschwinde von meinem Schiff und sei das naechste Mal ein wenig kreativer in der Wahl deiner Namen." You write the ae like a "�", but I don�t know if you can thatthat letter the right way.
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From ANON - littlebird on April 01, 2004
> (Translation done through ets.freetranslation.com, so don�t blame me�
I don't blame you, but that translation is really curling up my fingernails. If I were you I'd rather stick to the method: "text in between ## is supposed to be German". That should be easier to read for most readers anyway.
> I�ve other stories that have been neglected too long,
>so for the next week I�ll be putting a chapter into each one,
>along with a startup of a new story: �In the Arms of Morpheus (Book 2) � The Bloom Files�.
YESSSSS! *dancing around in circles chanting and drumming*
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From ANON - Wheee!!! on April 01, 2004
Whoa! This is good! Shall give better review when i'm more awake.
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From ANON - Mahie on March 30, 2004
Have I mentioned how I like this fic? hee. It was a wonderful sex scene! I was willing to read some smut today! Jack & Will are just the best pairing ever! ^___^ Please update soon,can't wait to see where this is going! It'd be nice if you mentioned more about the ones who have harmed Jack.
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From ANON - db27 on March 30, 2004
Very original!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Will someone try to take over the ship??? I can never predict the twists you make in your chapters!!! Keep going!!!
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From ANON - Mel on March 29, 2004
The stroy is awesome! I absolutely love it. Your approach to handling the medicinal and surgical aspects of the fic are great; they make it seem plausible. And I ly lly love the relationahip between Jack and Will as Jack explained it. (With Will being the more dominating one^_-)

You're treading dangerous waters with the Biblical talk of sodomy. (Though I agree... heh) Possible flames on the horizen! (Ignore them, no good comes from discouraging great work!)

Don't stop writing, I love this fic! ^_^V

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From ANON - WaterMage on March 28, 2004
I must say, excellent work! I especially like the new spin that you've created by bringing religious practices into the picture. People tend to ignore all of the pain caused in the quest to stamp out the so-called evils of paganism, and its great that you've been able to merge this in with Pirates. Besides, i just love JackxWill :grins:

WaterMage
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From Vana on March 28, 2004
*blinks hard*

I am no Catholic but am deeply religious...in a strange way, considering I am very dark and support slash so much I sometimes wish I were a gay male. But really, all that stuff you said there about male love in the bible...I'm trying to resist the temptation to grab my own bible and skim through it. I know in my Book Of Mormon they say that it is forbidden...but if it says it isn't in the Greek Bible then...oh crap.

LOOK WHAT YOU DID!! NOW I'M CONFUZZLED!!!

Bloody lost innocence. Ain't it grand how LotR has killed annocnnocence in so many people in this world? The fanfiction that has evolved from it has become slashier and darker than ever before. And I say this now, the only reason why PotC has tons of fanfiction too is because Ringers know Orli is in it and therefore they want to expand upon his elven purity, and non-Ringers simply like the PotC fanfic they read and wanted to try it themselves.

It's all Lord of the Rings fault...dammit, I WAS nice and spiritual before July 2002 when I read my first slashch wch was Legolas/Frodo (I seriously thought it was something about the elf teaching the hobbit swordfighting and was super stunned shiteless when I read it...but I got hooked anyway). But now I am a dark, sadistic slasher of unimaginable proportions that many would be fearing as I look so nice and innocent in real life.

http://aptafanfic.topcities.com

Thats my new fanfic site, go check if ye want to. I only support dramatic fiction and the more the merrier I say. Your's fits into that catagory...but I'm STILL trying to fix my brain after it fell apart about the bible thing.

ARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Vana E the Sadist~
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From ANON - laserbabe on March 28, 2004
This is brilliant! I can just imagine Jack being the most awkward patient ever, having to stay in bed, no rum, not sailing his Pearl, not seeing the horizon & no sex! Poor Jack! Love it, please please please write more ASAP.
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From ANON - pendragginink on March 28, 2004
white powder. salicylic acid powder. willowbark. asprin. of course. Im going, why would he give him coke and opium at the same time. and swelling hmmmm. finally got it. very nice. did I mention that im a fool?. id have killed jack with two major drugs, but he'd have died happy and in no pain. I love how he has to look at everything with only one eye. you keep the continuity all the way through. closes one eye, Im ejoying it too much gotta stop this multiple reviews
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From ANON - pendragginink on March 28, 2004
me wife william. very funny. and the little wrinkle and the look of confusion. Jack is going to wake up with more brusise if he isn't careful. lets see, he talked the doc into rum----Jack is going to lie and say that it is working even if it isn't just so he gets the rum, you know that. The laudenum makes him giggle. I hope he remembers that. and feels bad aabout it---fie on him for tortureing will. I love the part about will making use of the bucket. sooo funny. wow i am horrible for laughing at sick people. im terrible, hee hee. its your fault. giggle giggle---stop making me laugh. I am crying I am laughing so hard. what could ever have possessed jack to enter the priesthood? ah wonder. very elegant foot brace I must say.

Now, the white powder, several things it could be. Im betting it is cocaine. it is going to make Jack feel, very nice. he may still feel pain, but he wont give a damn! Poor doctor is getting dragged over the coals though. first admitting he has been a stup about helping the cardinal and then getting someone he can actually help and finds out---sodomites. oh the pain. hee hee serves him right. thank you thankyou for the line about will getting kicked in the head by gold feet-----wow. such detail. I mean such detail. every line has some little goody in it. I;ll never forgive you for making me laugh at a torture fic. Im dying here. could get injured here if ll dll down. I might. oh jack, pass the laudenum.
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From ANON - pendragginink on March 28, 2004
Oh I love the surgery chapter. Gots blood. And will is...well, it was funny before watching him be drunk, but now he is just to die for. hic. love it. I can see him. I ccan hear him. Baddles. of course. love you for this, very funny very
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