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By : hellborne
  • From ANON - Frankenmuth on April 23, 2004
    *begs* Please please please please please please write more!

    PLEASE!!!!!

    I love this story!

    (also, I suck at productive reviews, I just try to make the reader of the review laugh)

    *smiles sweetly* Please write more? I'll do/give whatever you want!
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  • From ANON - AbsyntheAddicted on April 23, 2004
    WHOA! that took me by complete surprise! that was great! haha i can't wait to see what happens next!
    seriously tho. the good doctor was good for more'n just doctoring! perfectly evil! ahaha soooo next chapter please??hehe
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  • From ANON - JediMistress on April 22, 2004
    WOW! hmmmm..... yeah, WOW covers it nicely! Continue the AWESOME work with this story! I love Jack's son..... a definite chip off the old block. Looking forward to the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - db27 on April 22, 2004
    I do think you're an excellent writer with very original stories!!! I would love to see some action in some upcoming chapters!!! Do Jack, Norrington, and Will get kidnapped by the Cardinal??? Please don't delete your stories! I am always reading!!
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  • From ANON - Wheee!!! on April 22, 2004
    Still average. I know there was quite a lot of action in the first few chapters but it's not enough in the last/current few! You might be building, but build quickly! Or the tower will come crashing down on you. loved the detail about the tortures but where has it gone to now? you could do the detail of the ships and their respective captains. will u be bringing in some 'real-life' pirates? if not, all your effort in the first few chapters will have come to naught. you should continue at least slightly in the same vein, to blend fact and fiction... that would be best, given your start but otherwise it's fine. btw the doctor and jacob now seem to be superfluous... unless you have more plans for them, then at least foreshadow!
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  • From ANON - Absynthe Addicted on April 22, 2004
    MORE!!!!! I love this story!!! please continue! i cannot wait to see what happens...
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  • From ANON - Jackfan2 on April 21, 2004
    MORE MORE MORE! Amazing story! REALLY! LOL.. Norrington amuzed at the presence of Jacob and how he infuriates the pirate. Brilliant!

    Ok.. MORE!!!!!!! And while you're at it.. More on your Holiday story! Jack went overboard after the storm!!?? DREADFUL CLIFFHAGER!!! MORE MORE MORE.. OF EVERYTHING!

    Ta
    Overly obsessed and enthusiastic
    Jackfan2
    *grumbling the MSN and AOL aren't friends and you can't join our fledgling schooner...* No offense mate, but we'd rather have your great stories there too! But we've many a young writer and are stearing clear of slash, for now. But, anywho.. our loss at not having you there.
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  • From ANON - AbsyntheAddicted on April 16, 2004
    OMG! i LOVE this one!!! i read two chapters of the morpheous one but this one kicks far more ass! goooo ferretmom!!! more raunch...must have more raunch in this one....and keep going...its awesome!!!
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  • From ANON - fei on April 11, 2004
    I used another online translator to translate Jack's little statment, and here's what it gave me:

    "My small depp son, my ship descends, and next time, is a little creative in its choice of the names."

    *sniggers* I think I like your translation better. But this one is funny. ^_^;
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  • From JennyPugh on April 08, 2004

    Damn! I wish you could have author alerts on this site :/ Great last 4 chapters, although I have to say, I'm rather suspicious of the good doctor. He's not trying to get Jack hooked on laudanum is he? You have a good medical knowledge. Do you look things up, or are you something to do with medicine?
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  • From ANON - Robyn on April 08, 2004
    It's brilliant. Please, write more!
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  • From ANON - latinereget86 on April 07, 2004
    Well I just love this story!!! I love the fact that Will just kidnapped the commodore for help commanding that will be really interesting to see how the other pirates react to Commodore being involve. Oh and I can so see why the Cardinal would see the doctor as a Witch. I mean come on he use almost modern skill to treat wounds and even medicence that some people back in that time period thought was just spells or something like that. Anyway I can't wait for the next update because like I already said I just love thiory.ory.
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  • From ANON - ladyjae on April 07, 2004
    It was good to see another chapter of Witch. I do like your doctor.
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  • From ANON - pendragginink on April 06, 2004
    Chapter 9 gets funnier everytime i read it. there are so many laugh lines in it. I am constaantly amazed. still. forever
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  • From ANON - Peggi on April 04, 2004
    Ih, loved the fanfic so far so I figured I'd drop in a nice little review. I really like the fanfic so far (not through reading it, though) poor Jack. . .I'm actually watching Pirates of the Caribbean right now. . .it's kinda weird reading this while watching it. . .anyway, I checked out that torture site thingy and oh my gods, some of the stuff in there is awful! We are learning about mideival *sp* tortures and stuff in school, so this isn't COMPLETELY new to me or anything but wow. . .just. . .wow. . .Anyway, I'll stop writing this incredibly way-too-long review
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