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By : hellborne
  • From ANON - Kel of Mayhem on May 21, 2004
    Simply fabulous, hon! This is one of the better PotC fics I've read. Very well written, accurate, and the strong grasp of medical history makes Witch a remarkable story that I'd recommended to any friend -well, if I had any that appreciated the finer qualities of slash. ^.^ Please keep up the good work! I'm dying to find out just how Will plans to pull off a full-blown attack on the cathedral -also, the relationship between Jack and his son? I love it! Love it love it love it! Also, the thing with Tim and Jack came out of nowhere, knocking me completely for a loop! Will bettern thn that lovefest before long, too. A lonely Will does not a threesome make.
    Again with the "love it!" part,
    Kel of "Shooting alcohol from one's nose is not a particularly pleasant experience." Mayhem
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  • From ANON - pendragginink on May 20, 2004
    Well, I dont want Jack's son to get killed. you can chew him up a little, but not kill him. and we havent even met norry's brther yet. does jack's son kill norry's brothher? or do they go run away together. norry cant kill his won twin either. or does he. would norry kill his twin, or at least shoot him to save Jack? the last scene here is such a sramatic scene. gread surprise ending. and i dont wonder that abernathy is asleep after all that.
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  • From ANON - Deathy on May 16, 2004
    I absolutely LOVE this story!! you have to keep going!! I like your plot, very good i must say!!!
    Now be a good lass and finish atleast a few more chapters for us loyal fans!!!!!! I like norrigton having a pirate for a twin, very good idea i must say!!!
    and you need to give us a good description of Jack's lovely new bed mate Tim, the good ol' doctor that he is!!
    Anyway i cant wait to read more, keep up the good work, this is a very good fanfic that i cant wait to read more of!!!!!
    ~Deathy
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  • From ANON - Rainien on May 16, 2004
    The weather in southern Oklahoma is currently 79 degrees and partly cloudy with winds from the south, southeast at 6 mph. All in all a pleasant spring day. *S*


    Well...you *did* say we could tell you about the weather. I'll give you a bonus and actually say something about the story as well.

    I'm enjoying the story thus far. You've got a good plot going and I like the historical details that you include. Norrington's twin brother/pirate is an interesting twist. Well done. I'll be looking for more.


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  • From ANON - Aysha on May 16, 2004
    OK, it's raining outside right now, I don't think, that your eyes have to be brown, but I like your story and want you to gon on writing, so I DID hit the review-button and am reviewing... =)
    I don't like the fact, that now Tim is Jack's lover too - I loved the thought of Will being the only important one to him... - but I get to like Norrington more and more - write more about him...

    Aysha
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on May 16, 2004
    Fabulous simply fabulous darling! I must have more! I'm really caught up in the storyline. It's very well done! How are the ferrets by the way? I hope they're giving you ideas for this story. It's awesome.

    update soon!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - captainme on May 16, 2004
    ooohhh, i like this story!!! update soon please! :)
    Suzy xxx
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  • From ANON - littlebird on May 16, 2004
    >Will James kill his brother? Will Jack kill his son?
    Will Jamie explain how his brother became a pirate? Will he impersonate his then dead twin and captain a pirate ship himself? Will Jack explain where he got that son from and why he hates him so?
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  • From ANON - Neenie on May 15, 2004
    Please continue...I'd like the answers to the questions you listed! I like your original characters--they seem well thought out.
    I hope life starts to be better for you soon!
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  • From ANON - catzie on May 03, 2004
    Hellborn! Why are you not posting anymore? There ARE reviews!!! Please, I am so impatient!!!
    POST, POST, POST!!!
    I like the story - I love your description of Will - allthough he may be a little OC - but that's OK - I prefer your version anyway... =)

    Now come on and: POST another chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Wheee!!! on May 01, 2004
    Oooooooohhh....nice. *licks lips in anticipation* I love that line 'like a starfish to a small rock' but wouldn't a barnacle be more appropriate? Then again, a barnacle doesn't have arms does it? A tad slow, but nice. Shall be waiting and watching.
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  • From ANON - Sab_ine on May 01, 2004
    FANTASTIC!!! Jack a whitch? What a glorious idea! And he has a son... - I love your story! Please post more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Aysha on April 28, 2004
    I now read up to chapter 12 and I still like it very much - it's rather realistic, or at least: it's based on real facts - and that's what I like about it. Wonderful! Please go on posting!
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  • From ANON - Aysha on April 28, 2004
    I read your story till chapter 9 until now, but I intend to read on, cause I like your style and how you describe Jack - he's believable and I like, that you explaioned, what he was doing and his reactions.

    The bad part is short, but still there. It's about this part: "Mein kleiner depp sohn, steigt mein schiff ab, und nächste zeit, ist ein wenig schöpferischer in ihrer wahl der namen.*” and "My little moron, get off my ship, and next time, be a little more creative in your choice of names.”

    My first language is german and I didn'T understand, what you wanted to express until I read the nglish translation... - I'd suggest you change it into: "Mein kleiBastBastard! Runter von meinem Schiff und nächstes Mal, sei etwas kreativer in deiner Namenswahl!" - which means the same in actual german ;-)

    Please go on, I want to read more about that!
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  • From ANON - HisBeautiful@hotmail.com on April 23, 2004
    Another good one! I'm liken this story! keep it up!
    update soon.

    -Chelsey-
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