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By : hellborne
  • From ANON - lysan on November 30, 2004
    *pffft* that's for the threat :P

    But since I am reviewing, it obviously worked, so double *pffft*. *Grins* This fic rocks. I've been enjoying it since I stumbled across it lasts month. Please please please keep writing it!!
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  • From ANON - littlebird on March 22, 2004
    I think Jack is quite out of character. Jack rather being tortured to death than saying some easy words without meaning them? He's a trickster character. I would expect him to confess immediately, then telling the cardinal some wild stories about places and persons he cursed and where he must now lead the clerics to, so that everything can be exorcised (and a certain pirate can try to escape on the way). I could imagine him seducing the clerics ("You are an attractive man, cardinal. Like sin itself. If you weren't a cleric I'd try to seduce you. But you know what? A cleric's semen causes a witch like me immesurable pain. So pleeeeeeease, don't touch me!").
    I like yours other stories better. Especially the one with Bootstrap Bill's ghost. Jack being tortured and LIKING it, that's the thing.
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  • From ANON - Shannon Holmes on October 28, 2004
    OMG! His eyes! They took his eyes! That is so messed up!......Man this is a really great story I can't wait for the next update. Keep up the good work and update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Koryu on October 25, 2004
    I wish they would stop harming Jack >.
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  • From Vana on October 24, 2004
    As I was finishing this chapter, the final sweet female group choir sang aaaahhh in Rhapsody's 'Shadows of Death' came on and I felt very very mellow. Considering my father passed away last night I am in a quite sensitive emotional state and am actually desiring Jack to be martyred.
    Be it strange? Me thinking a sweet and glorious death which has revenge to it's fullest would be the best grand finalé around? I wish this a lot, and yours is the first fic I have reviewed in positively months ever since dagot got sick. So...as a request...make us cry. But also make as feel less like sweet fluffyness has occurred, and more like devine justice and courageous farewells.

    Am desiring tears but also that swelling of the breast that makes one feel like they are fullfilled with the read. Not like I want you to finish anytime soon. I mean, you could kill Jack or Will in the next chapter or two, but let the story continue for a few more with the aftermath.

    Do not feel oblid, td, this is YOUR story.

    Make us readers prouder than we already are :)

    ~Vana E the Sadist~



    "Algalord arise, greater than before; time of peace, not of war..." 'Rhapsody: Symphony of Enchanted Lands 2'
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  • From ANON - Lizzy Sparrow on October 12, 2004
    thank you for the update plerase try to finish the story i need to what happens its a great story
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  • From ANON - littlebird on October 10, 2004
    It's nice to hear your demons and muses are better now and out to play again. If only they could see to Bootstrap Bill's poor, neglected ghost once in a while... (*beg*)
    If Jacob grew with his Cherokee mother among the Cherokee, why is he "Jacob" then, and not "odd seabird" or "getting-on-my-nerves mockingbird" or whatever his stepfather might have found appropriate?
    When the other ship was sighted and Jacob could not identify them, Jack could at least have asked what type of ship it was. He might actually have asked for a description as detailed as possible, in order to know what he has to deal with - and perhaps he would have been able to recognise them from the figurehead or something. Will, Gibbs and Norrington should also have taken a look, I think.
    My best wishes to you again!
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  • From ANON - bittersweet on September 08, 2004
    Madre de Dios!!

    Every single time! Goddamn, you're great, but what you /do/ to our boys! And how you just slap us in the face with it! Amazing!

    I haven't been to this site in...months? but then I go to find your story, read it all the way through (most of it for the 3rd time) and BAM!! Wow. You're insane - but in a good way.

    *is speechless and breathless* Amazing. I can't say anything else; I'm in sucock.ock. Wow.
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  • From ANON - Knives on September 08, 2004
    AH!! Jack is blind? How mean. T_T And how the hell did that guy ever become a "holy man"? *sigh* Sometimes I look at the past and feel ashamed of being a Catholic (plus those guys in Rome can be stupid at times). AH well, I didn't do it and I think just about every religion has screwed up at some point or another. Ai, I can't get over poor Jack. *pout* Please, kill the Cardinal *slowly* and *painfully*. I think Will should have a go at 'im too. And some more Jack/Will soon? *puppy face* Love it but is sad for Jacky. Luv ya buh bye!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2004
    holy shit, please update soon. you can't leave me like this.
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  • From ANON - Shannon Holmes on August 18, 2004
    This is such a good story please write more and soon. I am dying to know what happens.
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  • From ANON - pendragginink on August 15, 2004
    Suns of beaches!!! Gotta whack that cardinal. And who is that gnarly philistine pirate that hands Jack over to him?? Bummer. Gotta get Jack off of that cliff. Let Will blow it up. and the cardinal--and BTW, also whoever was standing watch the night that Jack got grabbed. I also need to know just how they snuck Jack off that ship---incase it is a technique that I want to use sometime. Cardinals get all the fun. I know you're gonna hurt Jack, and I accept that---but it would be really nice if Jacob gets to rescue him---and Jack tells him he does a good job. I know, in my dreams......in my dreams, that's it exactly.

    How come there are more reviews (78)listed here than there are hits (35)?
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  • From ANON - Shannon Holmes on June 14, 2004
    This is a really good story I love it! Please please please continue this and update as soon as possible. :)
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  • From ANON - flesh tuxedo on June 04, 2004
    Oh me, oh my.
    This storie is so detailed and rich, it puts quiet a number of others to shame. I hope you don't keep us waiting too long for more.
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  • From ANON - Kel of Mayhem on May 21, 2004
    Err... P.S.

    Completely random question here, but... I once did a project about the Spanish Inquisition. I hope I'm not getting my 1800 history mixed with my 1600 history-or what the hell ever; I suck with the memory for dates part- but I once read that, when a woman concieved more than one child at the same time-usually twins- one was considered evil as one was considered good, and both were killed, as was the mother (for she was considered a consort of the devil or something; remember, not-good-with-history-stuff girl here). So... Norrington's twin brother?

    However, please feeee tee to correct me if I'm wrong. I'm just curious... and currently unable to look it up myself. ^.^; Heh. Sorry.
    Love, Peace, & Chicken Grease,
    Kel of "I Love MY CAT tolerates me." Mayhem
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