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By : PiratesWench
  • From ANON - Jezrael the Overly Sentimental on March 23, 2004
    Oh.. my.. god.. that one scene when Mort was with Alex's beebee stuck in my mind so bad I started tearing up. I could see it perfectly. Julia's a little cutie with a huge smile, beaming at her new, oversized friend, while Mort fusses with her and the bear, one of those adorable smiles on his face (the sort that makes you want to just grab him and squeeze him. n.n AWW!)... Oooo! I loved this chapter!

    ..I can't take the suspense, however..

    ::Whines.:: Nooo.. I wanna know what's gonna happppeeennn..
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  • From ANON - Jezrael the Overly Seentaental on March 23, 2004
    Oh.. my.. god.. that one scene when Mort was with Alex's beebee stuck in my mind so bad I started tearing up. I could see it perfectly. Julia's a little cutie with a huge smile, beaming at her new, oversized friend, while Mort fusses with her and the bear, one of those adorable smiles on his face (the sort that makes you want to just grab him and squeeze him. nWW!)WW!)... Oooo! I loved this chapter!

    ..I can't take the suspense, however..

    ::Whines.:: Nooo.. I wanna know what's gonna happppeeennn..
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  • From ANON - Jezzy the Jealous on March 22, 2004
    Awww.. so roh-mahn-teek.. *sigh*

    You're going an absolutely spectactular job of keeping Mort in character. I don't think I could do it. I have a hard time with peculiar characters. Fantastico. n.n

    You ioneioned in one of the previous chapters that this story might turn out longer that you originally planned.. Hurrah! That just made my day. I love long stories.

    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Jezrael the Jealous on March 21, 2004
    Ayyii! Mort can cook! I love it when guys can cook! We're perfect for eachother! :D!!!

    *..ahem..* Anyway...

    I check this story constantly now. I just love it! Alex grows on you. Yesterday I spaced and forgot that she wasn't actually in the movie.. LoL

    Bravo! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Jezrael the Jealous on March 20, 2004
    EEEE!!! Mort is just such a cutie. Gotta love him.

    But it seems like his side of this romance is getting a tad darker. OOoooo, the hick is starting to squirm his way back into Rainey's consciousness again? Not good! EEK! I wanna know what's gonna happen!

    The chapter lengths are good! This has gotta be a difficult story to get out of your skull. Keep it up!
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  • From on March 20, 2004
    WEEE!!!
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  • From ANON - Jezrael the Jealous on March 20, 2004
    Yes! A Secret Window fic! A bold step, being the first in a category. I hope you have set a trend. There are a lot of fic oppurtunities from that movie, I think.

    I love your idea.. all of his 'sides' warring together internally. A beautiful thought. Intriguing, too. You keep it up! ..or I'll put a screwdriver through this here marshmallow! ::Waves the bit of white sugar-fluff around threateningly.::
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  • From on March 19, 2004
    Dont worry, i wont be running away anytime soon . I LOVE this fic. I check for updates everyday. You are a very good writer.
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  • From on March 18, 2004
    Wee! MORE MORE MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - PipthePirate on March 16, 2004
    This story is great! I would really like to read more. Please update soon!
    ~Pip the Pirate~
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  • From ANON - Danica on March 16, 2004
    This is really good. It really interesting. Please keep it up. I'll be checking back for updates.

    IM: Jacks Bandana
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