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Reviews for Struggle For Control

By : PiratesWench
  • From ANON - Dev on April 07, 2004
    How amazing! Wow, I absolutely love the story! I couldn't stop reading! They should have this as Secret Window 2 or something! Please keep going!
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  • From ANON - Just A Johnny Fan on April 06, 2004
    WOW!!! ALEX PREGNANT!!!! I knew it, from the moment Karen said Alex had a doctor's appointment. This story is great!!! I just hope Shooter doesn't come and ruin it but of course that's drama and what would a story be without that. But the real question is the baby, who's the father Mort or Shooter?(smile) Oh, can't wait to see your next chapter, I'm totally getting addicted tor str story!(clapping and chanting) I need more!, I need more! God, I've become a complete junkie of Johnny related fanfiction, especially this one!!! Don't stop, please update soon. I know good things come for those who wait but I hate being left on pins and needles!
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  • From ANON - Jezzy the Jealous on April 05, 2004
    EEEEEEEEEE! This is just getting better n' better! Shooter is acting all cool now.. I hated him in the movie, maybe just 'cause whenever I saw him all I could think was 'Sneaky, sneaky Sir" or something... whatever. I like him in this. Even though I don't like the idea of him hurting Alex. I like her. (How many times do I have to say that?)

    Ooo.. it's just so suspenseful. I wanna know whats gonna haaappeeennn! *Whines.*

    I know, I know. You can't tell me. >P

    Peep sucker. XD
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  • From ANON - Just A Johnny Fan on April 03, 2004
    I just found your story the other night and was very impressed by it! I read all 34 chapters in one night and didn't get finish with it until three o'clock in the morning. It was so good, I did not want to stop until I read everything you had up. I'm a huge fan of the movie "Secret Window", I saw it four times but then I'm a huge fan of anything that has Johnny Depp in it. Though I love to read fan fiction, the thought never occured to me to look for "Secret Window" fan fiction. The movie was great but the ending left little to elobrate on or at least that's what I thought until I read your story. I'm one of those crazy people that really liked Mort Rainey even after I found out that he's an insane murderer. Because I think deep down he's a good guy that just needs medication. I guess that's why I like your story so much because your showing the good person that he is and wants to be, but at the same time showing the dangerous side he can't control.on'on't think your story is chessy, it's really entertaining and I can't wait to read more, so please update soon! P.S I think it was a very clever idea to have all three parts of Mort's mind in the story, it add so much more to it!
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  • From ANON - Dawnie7 on April 01, 2004
    Such a great job you're doing with this story.
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  • From ANON - Jezzy the Jealous on April 01, 2004
    O.O ..whoooaa. That I did not expect.. what a twist! Is it wrong that I liked it? >.< Nooo! I don't want Mortie-poo to suffer! ..even though it's kinda fun.. >D ::Grabs Mort by his pretty, messy hair.:: Scream, angel! SCREAM!

    AWESOME couple o' chappies! n.n

    ::Runs circles before fleeing under her bed.::
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  • From on March 31, 2004
    Wee! I love this story, as I've said many times before. More!!
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  • From ANON - Jezzy the Jealous on March 29, 2004
    O Sho Shooter's not gonna like the idea of meds. Is he gonna pull anything wif Mort? He's not gonna try to kill Alex, is he? O.O;

    Eee! Next! Next!
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  • From ANON - Jezzy the Jealous on March 26, 2004
    Ooo.. Is Mortie (*Smacks herself for her Tedd moment*)-- er.. is Mort gonna go all Shooter style on the shrink? I would. I hate shrinks. Even though DR. Harris seems really nice. I --hate-- shrinks. ::Snaps a finger and points at Dr. Shrink.:: Sic 'em, Shooter!

    *ahem* ...

    Well, besides that, this chapter was cruelly and apallingly short. Grah. I'm gonna check back the entire rest of the day. You just watch me. I will.

    News: I saw SW for the 3rd time last night. I'm beginning to think I'm obsessed. @.@ What do YOU think, O awesome PiratesWench persona?

    HEHE!! I'mma go seek out some Mountain Dew and watch Sleepy Hollow. ~.^ I LOVE JOHNNY DEPP!
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  • From ANON - Jack\'s Pirate on March 25, 2004
    OMG so far this is the best fan fic I have read and I have read alot......anyways I like hte fact that you make new storys so often I had just finished reading ch 26 I gave the plus thingys saying it was s good story then I went back up and looked at what the last chapter was and then there was a new one in less then a minute after I was done there was a new one hmmmm maybe there is a new one now I MUST SEEE THIS STORY IS TOOOOOOO GOOOD!!!!!!!!! well i am so glad that Alex now knows about Shooter she is so kind to him and he is so kind to her (sorry I am a big fan of Romance it just makes you feel so happy all over) well uhh yah any ways nice job!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jezrael the Jealous on March 25, 2004
    I actually started freaking out when Mort was running to Alex's house, all crazy with Shooter behind him. I thought he was gonna go all mad on her.. Whew. I love being wrong. n.n

    Aww! Their relationship is so real.. you do an excellent job in pairing personalities and writing romance. Or just writing in general.

    It's official: I am addicted to this story.
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  • From ANON - MmC on March 25, 2004
    YAY! a secret window fan fic! and a good one too, i love how you have mort's conversations in his head.
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  • From on March 23, 2004
    Aww,that was sooo romantic!You are so great at writing this type of stuff.Kuddos for you my friend.
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  • From ANON - Sniper Higgins on March 23, 2004
    hehe! Wow. that was good. Not over done, but not underdone.....(?)

    I can't wait for chapter 20!! hurry!!

    ~*Sniper
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  • From ANON - patch on March 23, 2004
    great story..keep up the good work.
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