Click Here!

Reviews for Vast Horizons

By : Agarwaenloth
  • From ANON - Jen on March 13, 2004
    Wow, I like this! You could really go a lot of different directions with it. Keep up the good work!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - DBZVel¨ À on February 19, 2004
    Nice start. Might be interesting to see what happens next!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Aurelius on March 09, 2004
    That was mean, leaving it hanging with "Unfortunately, that adventure came, but not in the way they wished", but you did make it up with that little bit between Will and Jack so... I will wait patiently, but please write soon!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Haldir Fancier on March 09, 2004
    Woo! Lookin' good! Story looks great, it really is lovely. I'm so honoured. *beams* Nicely done. La la la. Yay! Joy! Ha, I'm so hyper now. Thank you!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Pookie on March 09, 2004
    wee, I like this story :)

    but I do have a few issues that you may want to consider for future reference or however that works for you authors :p

    I think the story is going way to fast! I understand the speed with the prologue, but Will went from alive to dead ina couple paragraphs :p

    and in the first chapter, James and Liz went from arguing about telling the kids to telling them so fast... I think maybe you should have had a bit about their dinner there, with tension between Liz and James.

    I also think the kids reaction is a bit.. .well.. not written well. There is an allusion to their shock, but there is nothing like "And the twins st at at Liz and James in shock" or anything. and I'm a bit confused, do the twins know that James isn't there dad? did they just think that Will died before finding out about them? How did he die? Little details like that will help a lot I think :)

    otherwise, I really do like this story, although I must admit I was a bit hesitant to read it at first. I can't wait for more :)

    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jupitor Knight on March 09, 2004
    I love this story. Would it be to much to ask that you would email me when you update. I'd really like to see where this goes.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Aurian on March 09, 2004
    This is gonna be a great story, i can just imagine the reaction to Jack meeting Will's children (could be very interesting)
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Mahie Sparrow on March 09, 2004
    It's a lovely fic. I loved Jack/Will moments together. Though your writing is a bit rushed,your fic has potential. We surely want more!!! Please update soon! Mahie
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!