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By : kattanon
  • From ANON - Aurda on June 02, 2005
    Ohhhhh. Ardeth...Is he gonna help jonathan get better!!! You have to update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - CC on May 28, 2005
    I must admit that for a time I did not think that I would get this far in your story. I was taken aback by th epercentage of your story that is given over to extremely graphic descriptions of brutalization. To skip the inevitable bandwagon of "well, if you don't like it, you don't have to read it..." that I am sure many people would spring to write - I am well aware of that fact. I took a chance based on your description that intrigued me, the fact that I haven't seen much fiction in this fandom focused on my two favorite characters lately, and liking your writing style in the first chapter. I knew there would be a rape and some torture [I assumed it would be graphic from your warning] that I would have to skip. What I was taken aback by was the sheer volume of it; how much of the story it takes up. Before anyone acuses me of not being able to deal with reality, I am sure I have heard what you wrote about and probably even worse from some of the runaway and at-risk adolescents that I have spent a great deal of my professional career working with. I suppose part of it then is that honestly, after having to deal with the real thing on a daily basis, from real young people, it is truly hard to then read it described so graphically unneccessarily. You could have left most of the description out and still have showed us the horror of what was done to Jonathon. You write well enough to do so. Regardless, I skipped most of it and I am glad I stayed. The reactions of Evie and Rick and Jonathon's escape to protect himself... Very good and again, I'm glad I stayed.
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  • From ANON - Morningstar on May 21, 2005
    Oh, enter Ardeth. I'm really intrigued by this story. What happens now that Ardeth is here?
    Please, make another chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - Kray on May 07, 2005
    This story is totally awesome. I really can't wait to read what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Beachgirl18 on April 20, 2005
    Keep going! you just got to the best part! YAY
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  • From ANON - Lalainmepants on February 19, 2005
    Awwwwwww. That's soo sad. What happens next? Update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - L_sama on November 09, 2004
    OOOOOOOHHHHH. This was SO freaking good!! PLEASE!! Update!
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  • From ANON - Bunnicle on August 24, 2004
    oh, i must say that i hope Holden gets his! And i hope Ardeth makes it a slow and very painful! Poor Johnathan! he really ought to have brought a gun with him!
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  • From ANON - PrincessYaoi on April 27, 2004
    OMG! This is... sad and depressing and all around a great story! I have a great deal of sympathy for Johnathan right now. Please, you have to coninue!
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  • From ANON - koshi on April 27, 2004
    This is good! Please continue! I want to see Ardeth kick butt, and comfort Jonathan.
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  • From ANON - ButterBalls (too tired to log in) on April 10, 2004
    While I really like the way this is progressing, you are in serious need of a beta, because there are loads of grammatical errors. Maybe you should look into that.
    However, I'm looking forward to reading the rest. There's not enough Mummy slash out there.
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  • From ANON - willowscribe on March 28, 2004
    Wow so dark.And written so well. 5 stars please add more!
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  • From ANON - ash on March 20, 2004
    noo!! finish soon, what happens to jonathan??!!!
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  • From ANON - Maria on February 29, 2004
    Good writting. Poor Jonathon. He's due for some respite, don'tcha think?
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