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Reviews for Power of the Sparrow

By : hellborne
  • From ANON - Jackfan2 on April 03, 2004
    OK OK OK! Reviews! Right.. that... ok.. GREAT chapter..Liked the sea battle, liked the deal with the map.. LOVED all of it!! Well, in particular the part where Jack woke up Will..LOL..

    I'm loving this story, but too, I love Witch. Love ALL of your writings. Please post more soon.. VERY soon!

    Ta!
    ~Jackfan~
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  • From ANON - Rozzan on April 03, 2004
    Hi, Saw you had updated and read the whole thing again. What a great ride! I adore this story. Your characters are totally spot on. As I read I am THERE with Will and Jack and Bill, in the taverns, on the decks, in the cabin. I love your touches of humour. This line had me laughing out loud. .....Bill had always been a great knot maker, and death hadn’t lessened his ability. .....
    the torture is just so well done. I do remember the film a Man called Horse with Richard Harris and that scene was a very powerful, graphic image of pain. Personally though my favourite are the silver balls. For weeks now I have been saying to people, (well only selected people that I think will understand of course!) "Bet you don't know how many one inch silver balls you can get up a pirates arse? It's 15 at the last count!" Please Please keep this up, More tre, re, more of sweet William and more about the sparrow and the curse and the treasure and all. Can't wait to see what happens when they sail through the triangle. Thrilled you have updated. I am going to put this on my rec read list.
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  • From ANON - watashi on April 03, 2004
    I like this! Jack's in all sorts of trouble. He's got ghosts, he's got Bill Turner's ghost in particular, he's got the Navy...I can't wait to see how get get him out of this. If I were in his place, I REALLY wouldn't want my lover's father hanging around invisible, thank you very much. :)
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  • From ANON - LadyO on April 03, 2004
    Wow, this is amazing and very original! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - littlebird on April 02, 2004
    Gah, what a creepy cliffhanger.
    I'm looking forward to Bill's "plans for later".
    If he can put his son to sleep, he can take Jack any time he wants.
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  • From ANON - pendragginink on March 24, 2004
    This is interesting. Rather tough on Willl. Proud ofhim though---had no trouble plugging dear old dad did he? course he knew dad was dead. If when he was alsive--did he torture Jack on the ship? How come there are no legends about that? and if there were, wouldn't the live crew have heard them? The metal frame. I assume the spin was like a top, not like a pin wheel, cause he seemed to stay upside down. He is in between both worlds because he is wearing the silver sparrow, right? its a shame he feels old, serve him right for lying to will about his birthday. Lot of brithday kisses there, apparently dear william , when it comes to sex, is like a goat. The part about using the silver cat twice--sounds similar to the short story "Monkey's paw". Now, does Jack like being tortured by bill? appparently he did once. Is it that he doesn't like it any more? or he doesn't want it any more? because he kept telling bill that yes, he did want him to use all the toys on him. The "sundance" ceremony is interesting---i wonder if you are going to get any negative reaction from native americans? If bill is in a religious mod, there is alway the bris (circumcision), that oought to really please Jack. How about cruxifiction? although there is a fic on ffnet called untitled, where Norry gets tired of having him escape from the gallows so he cruxifiy him (legal until 1800) and he cant escape if he is nailed to a beam. Dies in one day though, and usually it was a two or three day ride. How is Jack going to explain to the regular crew how he ise toe to hang upside down in mid air. and how is he going to keep them out of his cabin because that is not something one sees everyday. What will Jack do if Will decides to continue a fine old family tradition? besides scream that is. and while he was scrreaming, why did none of the crew come in to save him. Jerks. What about the silver filigree anal ball that you put a live mouse in--chinese, I'v heard it called a bhinn wah ball---but I don't know if that is correct, nor how to spell it. there is also a tube with a trap door at the end. stuff the poor mouse in it, shove the tube in the ass, and open the trapdoor, withdraw the tube, leaving a very surprised mouse, which wiggles around, probably biting, and if it is lucky, it turns around and squeezes its way out. I would think that methane fumes would kill it pretty quickly if not. Does Jack like the torture because he gets off on it? or does he like it because he interprets the pain as pleasure? Me want to know. Also want to know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - littlebird on March 19, 2004
    Hellborne?
    Are you still with us? Long time no read, mate.
    You didn't gamble away your computer, did you? Or are you still busy whipping that inspiration demon of yours?
    Suggestion: Take the thumbscrews off! They can be obstructive in writing.
    Now, please, give us an update! It's cruel to let Jack wait so long for his 'paying session'.
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  • From ANON - Legolas on March 16, 2004
    this is a very goos story i hope you finish it and i can't wait until you get the next part up. IF you don't mind let me know when you get the next one up.thanks a lot


    Peace


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  • From ANON - RosePetal2001 on March 10, 2004
    This is great please update soon pretty please I love all the pain and torment Jack is going through but I also love the sweet sences of Jack and Will so please update soon I can hardly contain my excitement. P.S. ingenuis plot idea one of the best that I have read.
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  • From ANON - Rozzan on March 10, 2004
    This is so so good.This is both my first read of a POTC fic and also My first read of a sex torture flick. I have definetly and fortuitously stumbled into the right place. This is such fun. You have Jack so perfect in the role. More more more!
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  • From ANON - littlebird on March 09, 2004
    Slapping hellborne gets me excellent fanfiction. That's interesting.
    I wonder what a right good flogging could get out of you.
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  • From ANON - Frankenmuth on March 08, 2004
    Okay, so I'm really into BDSM but Bill scares me. *He actaully sounds like my top, who has gone crazy I swear* (I didn't just say that)

    Please write more...and don't let Jack get hurt...*tells Bill to be nice then runs away a quickly as possible* *eep*
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 08, 2004
    Normally i love your stories but this one is extremely confusing i don't understand a thing of it
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  • From ANON - littlebird on March 07, 2004
    Where is the update, you mangy bilgerat? *slap* People are waiting here. *slap* Get on with it! NOW!
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  • From ANON - Naur on March 03, 2004
    I can see torture ahead and not just sexual! From the way you worded some things I see Will using the statue or necklace twice without knowing it can harm you. Hmmm...that would be pretty awesome...he could almost die...^_^
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