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Reviews for Power of the Sparrow

By : hellborne
  • From ANON - spanishgoddess86 on January 09, 2005
    wow I didn't think I'll be able to hate Bill more then I do now with what he's done to Will and Jack putting them against each other like he did. Anyway just wanted to write and tell you that I enjoy almost all your stories, and I look foward to an update soon. By the way I was wondering if you had this story archive anywhere except for the yahoo group and here. Just because you never know when this site is going to act up, and with yahoo your usually more updated here then there so I was just wondering. Anyway again please update any of your stories soon I love them all.
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  • From ANON - Rosepetal2001 on January 08, 2005
    I LOVE this story the torture is great and I cann't wait til the next update so PLEASE put it up soon I was so excited when I saw you updated the other day.
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  • From ANON - littlebird on January 06, 2005
    >Hey Littlebird! This one's for YOU!
    Thank you, mistress! *bowes deeply and gratefully*
    Bill is so evil! He really wants to bring his son and Jack apart, doesn't he? And now he apparently has a commodorical accomplice, which is very promising. You are right, he has to be that brutal if he wants Jack punished as promised and pain is not a punishment for Jack.
    Please continue soon!
    >My plot bunnies are starving,
    Good plotbunnies, fine plotbunnies! *feeds the plotbunnies minced whips, branding irons, ball-gags, shackles, blindfolds and chili oil*
    >Ok, I've got several more chapters finished...
    You cheated!
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  • From ANON - Jazzy on December 04, 2004
    LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT..... Were the hell did u get the idea for this story, its GRRREAT. Please up -date soon. Please.
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  • From ANON - littlebird on April 20, 2004
    Norrington not yet adjusted to existence as a ghost - cute. Lucky thing he only failed in pouring himself brandy. Falling through the chair when sitting down would have been too annoying.
    It's also nice how Bill and Norrington seem to become friends immediatly. Do they have much in common? Sexual preferences, I mean? A taste for manhandling a certain pirate captain, by any chance?
    Norrington taking care of Jack while Bill persuades Will to find a woman and produce grandchildren would be quite a good match.
    On the other hand: As those ghosts can be in the same place as a living person or an object, there could be really weird sex scenes. I imagine Will giving Jack a blowjob, and Bill oder Norrington grabs through Will's head at Jack's cock. Jack would feel both of them in the same place.
    I am SO looking forward to that next chapter which "will be more 'interesting'".
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  • From ANON - bittersweet on April 19, 2004
    ok, ok, i'll feed the bunnies...the horribly vivid visual of you being knee-deep in dead plotbunnies convinced me. luckily for you, your story was good enough to warrant a review without the bunny-torture.
    so, anyway, i find Norrington dead to be realmusimusing, and the fact that he's still annoying Jack to be more amusing still. you're really good about not making it all terribly fatalist and depressing, even though there's dead people all over, and you know that something bad is bound to happen somewhere on this trip.
    now, go pet the bunnies, you know living things need other kinds of nourishment than reviews.
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  • From ANON - eccentricpirate on April 17, 2004
    I'm clapping! I just found this and I love it! I eagerly await a continuation... and I suck at reviews...
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  • From ANON - Wheee!!! on April 16, 2004
    Oh dear... looking at the reviews, looks like i might have to re-read... oh well... am v sleepy so shall do it tomorrow... in the meantime, ignore what i just said.
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  • From ANON - Wheee!!! on April 16, 2004
    Hm. Sorry.. so far your writing is just average... the plot's rather fresh though (as in the good kinda fresh) and slightly interesting... that's what's been keeping me reading... you could try adding more what-cher-call-its (plot elements? don't really know), like bits of history, or descriptions, or even spreading screen time mroe evenly between the main characters, and space them out evenly to keep ers ers reading.. afterall, what are cliffhangers for? :) good luck!
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  • From ANON - Blue Magic on April 16, 2004
    I SWEAR! I didn't even pause between reading and hitting the review button. I'm not having Tink on my conscience. Oooh - the commodre is a very intriguing tiwst. I can't wait to see where iting ing to go. Maybe Bill could torture James for awhile and leave my Jack alone?! (PS _ Chapter 6 is up.)
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  • From ANON - rOSEpETTAL2001 on April 16, 2004
    tHIS IS AN AWSOME STROY i HOPE AND PRAY YOU KEEP IT GOING COUSE i WOULDN'T KNOW WHAT TO DO THEN
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  • From ANON - Frankenmuth on April 16, 2004
    I hate to see good plot bunnies die...

    I love this story! I never would have thought of it! (unlike many of the storys that fill the vast internet as we know it) One g thg tho, what happened to James? How did he die? I guess I didn't understand he was on the Navy ship, he was wasn't he? How come the ghost crew let him on, I thought they were making the Navy guys walk/swim to shore if they died and came back and were helping only pirate ghosts back on the ship...*head spins* Whoa...I really shouldn't get this into stories...

    Well, please write more! I want to save the plot bunnies! It's the Save the Plot Bunnies...erm...Crew! (of one)
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  • From ANON - littlebird on April 13, 2004
    >“Jack, you’ll pay for this later, I promise!”
    Hellborne, I have to repeat myself: It is cruel to let Jack wait so long for his punishment.
    It is even more cruel to let us, your faithful and plotbunny-feeding readers, wait so long. *beg*
    Whatever you intend to do to Jack (a slashy threesome with Bootstrap's and Norrington's ghosts for the first time in the fandom?) - please do something! Or else I shall starve those plot-rodents on purpose.
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  • From ANON - bittersweet on April 05, 2004
    that cliffie right there was on the negative side of the fairness scale! that was beyond wrong. I'm guessing that was good old norrington, but is he alive or dead? hmmm.
    also: 15?! um, ouchies! bill turner is scary in a "well, that's not too bad because he still looks just like will" kinda way. i really like the idea behind this; how do you come up with this stuff? anyway, please update soon, i'm dying to read more! (sorry, horrible, unintentional pun)
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  • From ANON - Cait on April 04, 2004
    HOLY SHITTOCKS!!!
    I just read the last 2 chapters.....damn.
    And now what will happen? IM DYING TO KNOW!!!!!! UPDATE NOW!!
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