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Reviews for Power of the Sparrow

By : hellborne
  • From ANON - Stardust on May 16, 2005
    Just came upon this story and read all of it (thus far) in a single sitting. The story is highly enjoyable and well written and I can't wait to read more. This is a wonderful contribution to the fandom.
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  • From ANON - sallie on April 22, 2005
    "So, will Jack go with Pearl? Or stay with Will? And what of Bill? Heck, do I know what I'm doing?!"

    You know what your doing. I'll give you that much.
    But how's your next chapter?



    need SLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSHHHHH!!
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  • From ANON - littlebird on April 19, 2005
    Hopefully they are still in the dark, so that Jack will come to life again. Well, otherwise he'd have had a fitting and enjoyable death.
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  • From ANON - sallie on April 17, 2005
    YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!
    You updated!
    Great chapter. I love it to pieces.
    What happened to Jack?
    Has Billl struck again?
    What will the Black Pearl come to?
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  • From ANON - littlebird on April 13, 2005
    Wow, that was hot again!
    I especially liked the bits of tenderness, like Bill patting Jack's face after pinning him to the headboard. So it's not just brutal force, but he cares about Jack's reaction.
    Minor complaints:
    >Captain Turner, the only person allowed to sleep in the captain's cabin other
    >than the captain himself is the cabin boy
    But Jack and Will shared the cabin before. And did you not say in chapter 1 or 2 that Will was actually first mate?
    Besides, the crew is a bit more angry about Will's being whipped and a bit less angry about nonexisting treasure than I would have expected. (But I'm not a pirate, obviously.)
    Anyway, it's a wonderful chapter! Though I do hope Jack is really not dead after all.
    Was this Bill's "unfinished business" then: torturing Jack to death?
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  • From ANON - Rose_Petal on April 13, 2005
    More please more violince I love the Jack Bill torture sences. So please up date real soon.
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  • From ANON - sallie on April 12, 2005
    O.O
    I just started reading this story today.
    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!
    O.O
    *Still in shock and a little incoherent*
    I hope you update soon I'm addicted!!!
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  • From ANON - littlebird on March 29, 2005
    >"Jack, you've let us down."
    Bill becomes more disagreeable with every chapter. From caring father through having his son whipped to sending Will into a dragon's mouth. Now he cheated Jack (no treasure of gold as promised) and what does he do? Complain. The nerve!
    >"—Don't deserve it, Commodore.
    Would Jack be so entirely un-selfish? He's a pirate. I think "I'm not dead yet so it wouldn't work on me" is a more valid argument for him.
    Will's knowing what to do came a bit out of the sudden, I think.

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  • From ANON - littlebird on March 16, 2005
    Poor Jack, to be fading away. (And being inside Will but not the usual way ...)
    >Hit the REVIEW button and tell me what I'm doing wrong!
    You use cliffhangers in a cruel way.
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  • From ANON - littlebird on March 12, 2005
    Hellborne, you are back! *Squee*
    I had nearly given up hope and thought you'd have abandoned all your stories.
    I'm so happy that you haven't. And this chapter was a very nice comeback, whith Jack blindfolded and his back cut to ribbons and all.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on January 24, 2005
    You started out the first chapter very good. It was interesting and intriguing, but it quickly went downhill from there. But when you hit Chapter Three, you went to crap! That destroys your whole book 'cause can't anybody get through the filth you've got in Chapter Three with Bill tieing down poor Jack! You should be ashamed of yourself for that! STOP writing such filth about Jack!
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  • From ANON - littlebird on January 17, 2005
    Thank you, mistress! I am reviewing, mistress.
    Sorry for the delay. You won't stop hurting Jack just for me reviewing late, will you? *crawl* *beg*
    Beautiful sight, Jack baking in the sun, probably with his back caked with dried blood from the lashing.
    It's a bit sad that Jack and Will worked out everything so quickly. For my taste Jack could have stayed in Bill's capable hands a bit longer.
    If Bill knows the region, why didn't he take any precautions, to prevent crew members from jumping overboard? He could have reminded Jack to issue according orders before he was gagged. Or he could have spoken through Will.
    >You're mine, Jack Sparrow, and I intend
    > to keep ye.
    Branding comes to mind. *g*
    I think Jack should not be on his feet so quickly, after severe lashing and two days tied and starved. And he talks quite a lot considering two days not drinking and his tongue swollen.
    Never mind, carry on! Please?
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  • From ANON - Miya Sparrow on January 15, 2005
    I like it, I do, but I don't think Jack's soul would look like that. I mean his soul is too free if you ask me...I think he would have the devil horn/angel halo look. although the bad might over rule the good not sure. like I said before I like it....Bills mean...why is Bill mean?...he dosn't have to be jealouse does he?
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  • From ANON - rosepetal2001 on January 15, 2005
    I love it it was awsome hope you update soon iI was cheacking eveyday for this chapter. And I'm glade Will is starting to forgive Jack alittle. But truly cann't wait to find out what happens next. Rose
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  • From ANON - spanishgoddess86 on January 14, 2005
    Loved that chapter! One thing that confused me some does Will forgive Jack and does Jack really know that Will forgives him yet etc... Or are they just playing this whole I can't stand you, I'm guilty and deserve everything little thing you do to me just to confuse Bill cause he a bastard. (sorry for the language)

    Anyway please update soon. I can't wait to read more.
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