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Reviews for In the Arms of Morpheus (Book 1) - The Depp Files

By : hellborne
  • From ANON - MsJonyReb on July 20, 2004
    Okay. . . you mentioned that you wanted feed back and maybe ideas. . .

    The story on the whole is good. I like the premises around Johnny and Jack being able to know each other. . .and the stuff with them being identical twins is really good. I got a kick out of the comment they made to Annamarie in chapter 4 that caused them to get slapped and their response to it. That was a very Jack Sparrow moment in my book. The vibrating bed was another thing that caught me as funny. . .I'd forgotten those things existed.

    Chapter 4's dealing with the 'slave trade' was handled and depicted well. It is a sad situation, but unfortunately it did happen. You did a good job with showing the emotional responses between the two personalities. I would have liked to have seen some of Johnny's thought processes, but that is okay. I'm sure for someone so shy (as you mentioned on occasions) being put into that situation was more than overwhelming. The fact that Will didn't go and sack the port to get them back (as a typical pirate might) showed how much he cared about the two of them. Good job.

    Couple of thoughts. . . I'm curious as to how Jack ended up in Johnny's house to begin with. . .Can Will or Van go back/forward too. . .Does Johnny seek out a Shrink? And a couple of others, but I wont prattle on.

    I think you've done a very good job.ep uep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - anasazi on May 06, 2004
    To write so convincingly about activities that are not your cup of tea takes quite a bit of talent. Please keep going, even though it's not my normal cup of tea, your writing is so compelling that I want to see where this goes. My personal opinion: I prefer when Jack comes to modern times. I guess it's the bathing thing. lol
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  • From ANON - wow on April 24, 2004
    the last one was great took ages to read tho but was still great. loved it lohem hem all shibby write more
    please
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on April 20, 2004
    So, ummmmmm, I wish I knew where you should go with this story, but I don't. I did like it however. I'm not big on the M/M action but I must say this was done quite well. I like how you added Johnny's family, and Will too. Oh, yes and "Fuckmook" is an awesome word. I also Love "Fear and Loathing" thanks for the great story! Keep up the awesome work.

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - Gwyn on March 16, 2004
    Hey wikit story! lol keep on writing it! umm.. I'm gonna keep on reading it lol..ok taht sounded really lame so yeah lol.lol man that wasa long friggin chapter tho lol! can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Tilly on March 14, 2004
    Plz write summore!!
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  • From ANON - Diana on March 14, 2004
    This story has got to be the best POTC fic I've ever read. It's amazing! I really loved how Jack and Johnny had everyone confused abut who was who. That was a cute idea. And it was very original. I've never read another fic with something like that in it... I love it! And as for the Johnny/Jack/Will orgy goin' on... THAT WAS HOT! Definetely include more of Will. Johnny and Jack can use some more Will-ness. ^_^ This fic is amazing. Update real soon okay? I'll be checking back for chapter 5 everyday! =)
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  • From ANON - Anni on March 11, 2004
    I vote for 'Jack comes to the present.'
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  • From darkmind21 on March 11, 2004
    This was definitely worth the wait :). I really love this story and can’tt tot to read another chapter so you have to continue writing it. I am curious to see what will happen when Johnny next meets up with Orlando as well as what would happen if jack gets stuck in the present maybe he might have a little fling with Vanessa. Anyway its your story so do whatever you lwithwith it only please continue it and try and up date as soon as possible :)
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  • From ANON - littlebird on March 10, 2004
    >This time I need people to tell me which they prefer…Jack coming to NOW or Johnny going BACK.
    I personally prefer Jack showing up in the present. "This bed is possessed" - that was just so cute.
    A little criticism: Why did Jack not go back to kill that man who had held him as a slave or at least rob him of Jack's&Johnny's hard-earned money?
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  • From ANON - Frankenmuth on March 10, 2004
    *eeeeeee* I loved it! It was wonderful! (and long, very good, very very good)

    I really wouldn't know where you would go with it if you went on, but I would be so happy if you did.


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  • From ANON - spankmonkeyjack on March 10, 2004
    mmmmm, very nice! It's so easy to get all hot & bothered about one Capt. Jack, but TWO!!!!!!! omg - so much better!
    & including Will was very sweet, I thought it added balance. I
    've always found it interesting the way that Johnny talks about his characters, & this is a fascinating (& very arousing!) exploration of that.
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  • From darkmind21 on March 04, 2004
    :( When are you going to update this story. I read it ages ago and have been checking every single day to see if there was another chapter. This is one of the most original pirate stories yet and i can't wait to read all about johnny and jack again. The idea of having both of them together is just brillient. i really can't praise this story enough.
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  • From ANON - MissHighSchool on February 28, 2004
    Great story!!! The idightight be a bit weird, but being a weird girl, I absolutely don't mind!! By the way, the French's perfect (I'm a Belgian girl and French's my second language), must be a good site you have there. I dunno if you'll continue the story, and if you do, I can't wait for the next chappie!! Kisses, MissHighSchool!
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  • From ANON - Wheee!!! on February 26, 2004
    Whoa Nellie! That was cool! (and no, I did not mean to make that pun) But one thing bugs me.. how is Jack gonna eat? What is he going to eat? Or will he just go home?
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