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Reviews for A Pleasant Holliday?

By : hellborne
  • From ANON - haley on April 16, 2004
    omg...if you don't write more....i'm going to jump overboard. >_< ^_- Amazing. I've been following the story for a while, very glad to see it updated ^_^!
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  • From ANON - Raija on April 15, 2004
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!
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  • From ANON - littlebird on April 14, 2004
    Let me guess: Jack will be picked up by some slaver, his nightmares coming true?
    Although, with law-abiding slavers, he could just tell them that he is property of Commodore Norrington, to whom he must be returned. That should keep him safe for a while. At least up until they hand him over at Port Royal, to a very upset and very jealous Gilette whose Commodore has been kidnapped recently.
    Wild guesses aside, the sex-scene was very hot again (as they often are with candles). Two men sharing Jack is something I would like to read more often.
    Speaking of candles: Would that candle not slide out from Jack's ass with every movement unless somehow secured in place?
    >My plot bunnies went out gambling
    If they are good t, st, stop feeding them and let them fend for themselves. Occasionally you can catch one and feed it to the plot ferrets.
    What happened to that inspiration demon you once had?
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  • From ANON - jillfox22 on April 14, 2004
    I read all 22 chapters today; I just could not stop reading once I had started. Its amazing, the scenes between Jack, James and Will in particular make me extremely happy.
    After many hours I finally got to chapter 22, which started off, well what can I say extremely hot, Jack torture is just so much fun, only when he enjoys it of course:)
    Then disaster strikes and Jack is gone NOOOOOOOO…….please, please tell me there is a happy ending. ::gets down on knees and begs::

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  • From ANON - NEWENIT on April 13, 2004
    HERE IS YOUR WARM FUZZY...EXCELLENT CHAPTER... YOU ARE QUITE CREATIVE WITH JACK'S TORTURE...AND AMUSING..VERY GOOD CHAPPIE!!

    NEWENIT
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  • From ANON - Jackfan2 on April 13, 2004
    OH NO!!! JACK'S GONE!??!?!?!?!?!

    Don't leave it there PLEASE!! Here.. I'll review over and over and over and over again and again and again and again. But you CAN NOT leave it there! Geeze!

    Love having you over on the Black Pearl Sails, Hellborne, by the way. Indeed your writing is a treat and I am utterly amazed at how you have me, as only you've been able to do, believing and actually accepting Jack/Will and the addition of Norrington. Fascinating writing and artistically done.

    Please continue ... SOON!

    Ta!
    Julie
    aka Jackfan2
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  • From ANON - littlebird on March 09, 2004
    >Sorry about the Muse…Demon went off gambling…we’re in Las Vegas, you know…
    Tell him what happens to little hellcreatures who back away from muses and do not do their duties: They deserve to be punished.
    Suggestion: hand that useless demon over to Bootstrap Bill's ghost! On the other hand, you might have to replace him afterwards.
    Another possible solution for you demon problem: Let a seagull drop that vial of oil on deck which Will threw out of the window - and then let Jack go after you muse. That should be inspiring.
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  • From ANON - MissHighSchool on March 08, 2004
    Yay!! Another great chappie!! James would've been a really great moron if he left Jack and Will. Well, I surely wouldn't!! Just the thought of me, Jack and Will on a boat in the Carribean *eyes become dreamy...* Oh, right...*shakes head and comes back to reality* Keep up the good work!! Kisses

    Miss HighSchool
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  • From ANON - Sarryn on March 07, 2004
    Absolutely, delicously, undeniably gorgeous story. So erotic and brilliantly so. My sincerest compliments.
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  • From ANON - MissHighSchool on March 07, 2004
    I LOVis sis story!! I started it this afternoon and I just couldn't stop reading!!! Can't wait for chapter 21! Please update soon! Kisses

    MissHighSchool
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  • From ANON - normal human being on March 03, 2004
    *headdesk* I shouldn't be allowed to post, I really shouldn't, especially before I finish reading things. This isn't a flame at all, the fic is good - the characters are all plausible and canon-ified and it's very well written. I think I'm just being narrow-minded and thinking 'Sparrow rescue. Hah!' I have a strange aversion to Sparrow rescue, for some reason...

    NHB, who hopes she won't be eaten, and is sure she's seen Hellbourne somewhere before*~

    (BTW, SEMPOTO is Stereotypical Evil Madman Phantom of the Opera Norrington. He rapes people and kicks puppies. If you'd written him you'd have to eat a LOT of fire).
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  • From ANON - Naur on February 22, 2004
    This is a really good story! The three hottest guys together, with just enough story to keep it interesting. And u show the characters so well! Keep up the good work! Would it be wrong to ask for more torutre and not physical? Maybe to Will? Hope not...Ja!
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  • From ANON - Karen R on February 21, 2004
    Damn, this story just keeps on getting better!!! More! More! More!
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  • From ANON - Karen R on February 15, 2004
    An excellent story as per usual, it would be great if Will was too nervous to perform for jack when he get his stitches out, and Jack becoming very Jealous of Norri, just think of the sex they'd need to make up!!!!
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  • From ANON - driretlan on February 14, 2004
    this story should never end.. i love it too goddamn much ^_^ it is really hot mansmut. i know im a sick puppy but it is so great. it is very passionat to and i love it. plez write more soon i so cant wait... lol...hurry!
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