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Reviews for A Pleasant Holliday?

By : hellborne
  • From ANON - littlebird on December 08, 2004
    It's hot, but are you sure that tangle on the bed is physically possible? On a knee-high, man-sized cushion perhaps, but on a bed I can't envision Will and Jack having proper access at the same time. (Not that I'd have any experience with that sort of thing. Perhaps it's just my poor understanding of geometry.)
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  • From ANON - Jazzhy on December 04, 2004
    Great chapter, i liked it a lot. Please keep up dating.
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  • From ANON - Jazzy on December 03, 2004
    Hey, I love this fict. so PLEASE releases the next chapter. The story is fun but a little perdictable (sorry i cann't spell) no offence. Please keep writing this story is very good, I like the way you layed it out it is easy to read and follow. Oh, and great lemon senes. --Jazzy
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  • From ANON - Karen on December 03, 2004
    I love this story, it's so much fun... I know it's been a while but I hope you finish this story,

    Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
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  • From ANON - Prrrrowl on September 29, 2004
    Ah loves it!

    Great story, luv.

    Is the "le dle death" from The Vampire Armand? I remember anne rice using that phrase at the beginning of the book.
    Am i right? ^.^

    HUGS AND KISSES FOR YOU! I love it. I do!!

    Ta ta for now, m'darling.
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  • From ANON - littlebird on September 27, 2004
    Whoa, the four of them will have a little orgy on the Pearl? *giggles in anticipation*
    >I had a governess till I was three.
    Most people wouldn't remember.
    >That was when he sent me off to England for a proper education. When I was seven,
    > They decided I was untrainable and sent me back.
    Ordinary people start at seven...
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  • From ANON - GundamNymph on September 18, 2004
    HI! I found your fic at High Seas and instantly fell in love with it. It is nigh impossible to find J/W/N. I've been working on my own, but they're no where near as long as yours (LOL) and no where near finished.
    Though a bit sappy at times, I love the trio's reactions and attitudes towards each other. Poor Will. I've had a weakness for J/W since the movie came out, it was the first fandom that prompted me enough to start
    writing my own slash. I think Will STILL doesn't realize how much Jack loves him back and can't wait for that to come out of the bag. The budding affection towards Norrington is also very sweet and I like how the
    story seems to revolve around him, but keep the other two center stage. The Anamaria/Elizabeth moments are nice too. While not overly fond of femslash, I do like to read it from time to time, and there isn't enough
    out there. I like how they seem to keep up with Jack and Will. I don't suppose Jamie will learn Tai Chi? ^_^ And the whole James/Jonathan dynamic...(like his first name BTW. First time I saw someone name him Johnny)
    I can't wait to see Jack corrupt him and 'add' him to the Pearl. The only part that seemed a bit OOC for me was when Will just accepted Jack was dead. He didn't even try looking for him among the wreckage, and we all
    know how persistent and stubborn Jack is. It'd be nice to see Will break down and be comforted by James. Hmm Also wonder about that scene in Jack's cabin. Why was it that Will didn'nt Jnt Jack to know he'd been playing?
    ^_^ Eager to see those stitches out. And how Will handles the Pearl and her crew in his Captain's absence.
    I read your AN and my heart went out to you. I don't know what your situation is/was, but I hope things are okay now. Ferrets are cute. i lohem,hem, but don't have any of my own. Have you read TheMadFangirl's series? It's called
    Taxes. Will and Jack (along with everyone else) have been reincarnated into present day. Jack has a ferret named Hector, who is SO damned cute. I used to help BETA her story, but I don't quite know where the fics
    at right now. ^_^ Last I checked, she was planning a Sentinel xover. She already did a Buffy xover.
    Again, I hope everything turned out okay for you. I myself just moved to Vegas...from MAINE. Unfortunately, I have to stay with my parents until I can afford my own apartment. *sigh*
    Please tell me you'll be updating soon! Poor Will and James don't know Jack's alive and Jonathan needs to be saved from Jack...er, or not. I hope this review perked you up a bit. but honestly, I do my best reviewing as I'm reading.

    Hugs and Love^_~GN

    PS Another great fic (that's LONG and finished) is by Haleth at Of Elves And Men Archive. It's called The Pirate Way. LOVE the interaction between Jack and Will and how they're relationship slowly reaches new heights...
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  • From ANON - MissHighSchool on July 02, 2004
    Why don't you update your story anymore? I love it, and can hardly wait to read the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - driretlan on May 27, 2004
    that is tooo good for words i want more like a zombie wants to eat brains
    lol

    more chapters plez
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  • From ANON - littlebird on May 16, 2004
    >I'm out for over a week and had like ONE review between THIRTEEN stories.
    I wrote a review yesterday, and data overflow on ffnet swept it away. Honestly.
    But I really don't know what to say to cheer you up. Yre hre homeless and separated from the plotferrets, but writing nonetheless and as well as ever. Some of us mere mortals might be at a loss of words.
    As for the story: If I were Jack I'd give Gillette false bearings so that the Pearl can get away and be repaired.
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  • From ANON - Jackfan2 on May 03, 2004
    This one!!! Write more to this one!! I'm soooooooooooooo.. glad you updated. I've been looking for the update to tell me what became of Jack for DAYS! Love this story.

    To be honest, though, I love everything you do. SO, you could update or post anything and I'll read it. thisthis one has me by the short and curlies soooo WRITE MORE!! PLEASE!!! *gets on knees and begs*.. Please!

    Pooor Jack at Gillette's mercy. And the Pearl, Will and James think Jack is dead and the Pearl is in terrible condition.. will Jack be able to 'corerce' Gillette into NOT blowing up the Pearl once he finds her? EEP!

    MORE MORE MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - jillfox22 on May 03, 2004
    I love this story so much.
    Please write more.
    James and Will have to find out that Jack is O.K soon I can't sleepwingwing that they are so sad:(
    Although it looks like Jack isn't going to have to bad a time of it. That randy old goat can charm anyone:)
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  • From ANON - Raija on May 02, 2004
    bugger.
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  • From ANON - hammer on May 01, 2004
    Work on The Sail Maker next plzzzzzzzz. It's my favourite fic by far, and you left Chapter 6 begging for 7.
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  • From ANON - haley on April 16, 2004
    you know it's sad, i read it again....theres just not enough sparrington with a side of Will in this world!
    -Pippin ;x
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