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Reviews for Change in the House of Flies

By : Sarryn
  • From ANON - Violent Underscore! rabbit on January 12, 2004
    this is great. I really love the dreamy feel to the story and the way you write Jack. Awsome!

    Violent Underscore! Rabbit
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  • From ANON - Sharanesu on January 12, 2004
    Whoa! Wonderful story so far, dark and thrilling. Can't wait for more. Please post soon.
    Thanks for sharing, Shara Nesu
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  • From ANON - Cashiel on January 12, 2004
    Oh darling, you merit every possible compliment ever invented, and more. And I'll gladly keep telling you that if it, in turn, keeps you writing.
    Your style is exceptional and the details are very impressive. Carry on.
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  • From ANON - Mercurial on January 12, 2004
    Please continue it, soon. It's beautiful, the descriptions are absolutely lurid... and it's obvious you've done some research on the period that you estimate the movie to have been set in order to make the narrative seem more realistic, more authentic. It was a pleasure to read, and I can't wait for more!

    ~ Jenna.
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  • From ANON - JediGurrl*Achoolazytosignin* on January 12, 2004
    *does the dance of giddy with joyness* New chapter!

    I liked this one too, even without Jack being all murderous and well... bloody insane. Though he's always just as good not murderous and bloody insane. Looking forward to more ^_^

    *goes to get new batteries for the fount of inspiration*
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  • From ANON - Emily on January 10, 2004
    Wow, I really loved this. The dark side of Jack is so absolutly believable! I hate how disney makes everything so fuzzy because somewhere in Jack he isnot a fuzzy person, and you drew out that part perfectly. Please write more soon! I want to know what was in that jar
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  • From ANON - falcon on January 09, 2004
    *Blink*
    *Pale*
    Woah...THAT taunt? I think I can guess what was in the jar *wince*. Poor Will.
    Fantastic beginning, luv! Your portrayal of Jack as what he truly is, a dangerous Pirate, was chilling. I'm pretty sure he didn't get his reputation and survive the seas just by swaggering around all the time. Keep up the good work, and I anxiously await the coming chapters.


    Falcon
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  • From ANON - JediGurrl*Achoolazytosignin* on January 08, 2004
    Oh.
    My.
    Frelling.
    GOD!

    I /loved/ it. Even though I was cringing through the whole torture/er/der/dark(seksi)Jack scene it was fabulously well written.
    And to those of you who want to know what was in the jar, read the summary, and I quote: "Jack discovers the there are worse things than death and that a taunt made years before has become horribly prophetic."

    What was Jack constantly taunting poor dear sweet William about? Hummmm?

    *goes about adding the story to her favorites and checking back often to see if it's been updated*
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  • From ANON - Naur on January 08, 2004
    Wow...that was graphic...but totally awesome! I love the way you described things & I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you hurry! I will be watching!
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  • From ANON - gact on January 08, 2004
    Thanks for all the side bar info, but is there more. The description was great, very vivid.
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  • From ANON - NEWENIT on January 08, 2004
    EXTREMELYY DARK FIC INDEED! BUT, VERY WELL WRITTEN. I HAVE TO ADMIT THE GUTTING PART I HAD TO SKIM THROUGH AS I AM A BIT QUEASY ABOUT SUCH...BUT, I WAS WITH JACK 110%! I THOUGHT TO MYSELF, DYING SLOWLY WASN'T EVEN VICIOUS ENOUGH. I SHIVER AT WHAT MAY HAVE HAPPENED TO OUR SWEET WILL, BUT, I AM SURE YOU WILL BE LETTING US KNOW.

    OBVIOUSLY, JACK AND WILL GO BACK A VERY LONG WAY, AND I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO THAT SEQUENCE AS WELL AND TO THE WAY YOU WILL PORTRAY OUR HANDSOME BLACKSMITH.

    I DO HOPE YOU WILL UPDATE SOON! AND YES, I AGREE WITH YOU, JACK IS A PIRATE, AND WHAT I GOT FROM HIS PERFORMANCE, WAS THAT THERE WAS A LOT OF UNDERLYING THINGS ABOUT HIM THAT WERE DARK AND VERY MUCH A SECRET. THE LOOK HE GAVE BARBOSSA WHEN HE SHOT HIM IN THE MOVIE....DID YOU SEE IT...NO REMORSE, JUST A STARE...ONE THAT SAID...I TOLD YOU I WOULD GET YOU....

    WAY TO GO! I APPLAUD!!

    NEWENIT
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  • From ANON - Lydia NightShade on January 08, 2004
    Oh god, what was in the jar?!

    My poor baby! This has certainly caught my interest. And don't apologize for Jack's brutality. In the deleted scenes you see a much different Jack Sparrow and it would lead me, and hopefully others as well, to believe that he's not all smiles and rum. Plus, like you said, he IS a pirate. I think it was very well written.

    But what did you do to Will?! LoL! That sounded scarey as hell lol! Oh, I hope he's okay. I know you said he's dead, but you also mention a JS/WT pairing so I'm interested in how that's going to happen. Wow... think I said the word Interesting enough? Interesting. Oh god! Okay, I've prattled on long enough. ^_^

    ~lydia~
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  • From ANON - Cassandra Selene on January 08, 2004
    Alright, I have a problem with this fic, and the problem is that there is currently only one chapter up. I got to the bottom, and was bitterly disappointed to find that there was no more for me to read at this time. So I command you to make haste and write more!
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  • From ANON - Desertrain on January 08, 2004
    Wow. I am stunned speechless. I really, really like your story thus far. No problems here about Bloodsoaked!Jack, and I am highly curious to see what you do in future chapters. I hope to see more soon!

    ~Desertrain ( http://www.fanfiction.net/~desertrain )
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  • From ANON - Cashiel on January 08, 2004
    I love it. The dark side of Jack is dead on. My compliments.
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