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Reviews for Change in the House of Flies

By : Sarryn
  • From ANON - JediGurrl*Achoolazytosignin* on February 06, 2004
    Amazing really, how I can read through a description of Jack gutting someone like a fish and not bat an eye, but when it comes to chiseling off a finger I get queasy. *shrug*
    Ah well, fantasticly written as always, it's become my habit to update my stories then look and see if any of my recs have been updated, and lo and behold, there was this fantastic /fantastic/ chapter.
    As always, I eagerly await the next installment, and I've got an extra set of batteries for the Fount of Creativity, should you need them.
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  • From ANON - PJ on February 06, 2004
    great update!!! This is an excellent story. So Jack saw that Will lost his ring finger and Will said that was the first I wonder if Jack will figure it out without Whavihaving to directly tell him. Or at least suspect anyways. I hope Will gets back to himself somewhat I mean he is still alive after all. I know it is a man thing to be worried about what happened but he could still be a pirate and husband and father too (would just have to adopt) Have him ask Anamaria if she needs that to be a good pirate just make sure he ducks the flying slap afterwards or gets a good head start on running. *LOL* Again great story update soon.
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  • From ANON - Night on February 05, 2004
    The only problem I have with your next selection is that it is too short!!!! I mean, you just keep making it more thrilling and addictive every addition and it makes it even more difficult to wait for the next chapter!!! So if you'd be so kind as to get the next one out "PRONTO" I'd be very greatful!! Okay, I love how you show what happened to Will through flashback, very nice touch, and that you make Jack understanding. Now the only problem again, is that you've left us hanging with just a snip of information and a craving for more, so from a loyal reader, help us out?!!! K?!!! Please, keep wrtiting!!!
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  • From ANON - Elven-Eyes on February 05, 2004

    *pouts*

    Jack: *looks panicked* Nononono! Don't you start!! *hides behind Will*

    Will: *looks around wildly for some tissues*

    Elven: *cries softly and themps mps up onto the table and shouts* I'M NOT WORTHY!!!

    Jack: *eeps and falls under the table*

    Will: *hands her box of tissues when she sits down on the edge of the table and lets her feet swing* *wipes her eyes tenderly*

    Elven: *cradling Will's hand* You poor dear!!!

    Jack: *sneaks up behind Will and wraps his arms around the sm's w's waist*

    Will: *pouts and lets himself be comforted by Jack and Elven*

    Elven: I feel so bad for Will!!! >__< Stupid f**kers!! I'm going to f**king kill every f**ker that hurt my William!!! *jumps up glomps Will and Jack*

    Jack: *huggles Will and kisses his hands*

    Elven: AHHH!!! I LOVED THE UPDATE IT WAS AWESOME, AND I WANT YOU TO UPDATE AGAIN AS SOON AS HUMANLY POSSIBLE!!!!!! *glomps you*

    *puts French beret on Will's head*

    Remember! Sexy is using a feather, kinky is using the whole chicken!

    Elven: O__o?????

    Will: O__o????

    Jack: O__o?????

    Don't mind the rantings. I love the story, I feel sorry for Will, and I hope Jack seduces Will!

    Will: *scowls and goes back to swordsmithing*

    Jack: *pouts when Will stops paying attention to him*

    Elven: *shrugs sympathetically*

    Ta!

    Elven

    ^V^V^V^V^V^V^

    Oh crap...you're going to try and cheer me up, aren't you?
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  • From ANON - crevette on February 01, 2004
    Lovely, well written. I can't wait to see more. I can guess what the injury is... Poor Will.
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  • From ANON - Hellborne on January 23, 2004
    Need more. MUCH MUCH more. Magnificent! Please go on.
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  • From ANON - Whitewitchdark on January 22, 2004
    Very interesting storyline with just enough hints to keep everyone guessing and just enough information to keep the reader from getting bored of guessing. Well written and (appearantly ) well thought out. Only request would be a a few more physical discriptions of settings and such. I can't wait to see where you take this.
    Whitewitchdark
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  • From ANON - Fiestyredms on January 21, 2004
    Wow... just wow. At first I was quite hesitant to read a fic that involved Will's death, but then I got pulled in. Your words flow so elegantly, the plots molds itself with them. The dialogue gives off its own emotion and not many people are capable of that. You acheived it well. The plot is original, and I like that. Originality is the key in the writing business and I'm very intriguied with where you are planning on going with this fic.

    Thanks for sharing! Can't wait to for more!

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Chibikat on January 21, 2004
    You know, it's so nice to find some decent, *intelligent* Jack/Will slash. Hey, I'm all for the pointless smut - who isn't, really? - but it's very rare to encounter a fanfic that actually manages to think things through a little bit.

    The way it started off, for example, was very, very cool. It set the dark tone for this, which has been steadily carried throughout the story thus far; just like Jack himself, while there's a bit of playfulness to be had, underneath is a very depressing, very real current of something very...ominous, shall we say. I like your descriptions quite a bit, and I do believe that you have Jack down pat, which is a very hard feat, considering his character. Takes some talent to do that.

    The only possible complaint I could have is the "wordiness" of it thus far. While I totally respect intelligence and all, I just think (and I can't believe I'm saying this) that you're using...well, too many big words. XD It actually makes the narrative a bit choppier than it ought to. I'd suggest picking and choosing the lesser-known words that you'd like to use, so as not to interrupt the flow of the story as much. But hey, that's just me.

    So! Keep this up, I'll definitely be looking forward to updates.

    ~Chibikat

    PS: ...poor, poor Will. That's all I have to say.

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  • From ANON - Night on January 19, 2004
    Oh boy, oh boy, more!!!! It's extremely well written, and I'm really glad to see Will alive (Well sort of) but dude, what happened to him to make him so tainted?!!! Keep writing please!!! Don't stop now!
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  • From ANON - Nicole on January 19, 2004
    I love your story! Update SOON!! You write very well, and I admire that! Keep writing :-D!!!
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  • From ANON - Ibonekoen on January 17, 2004
    Wow, I am most intrigued as to what is going to happen next. Please use your new green pen to write more and hurry up and transcribe it for us to read! :-D
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  • From ANON - JediGurrl*Achoolazytosignin* on January 17, 2004
    *does another dance* Woo! I'm liking this story more and more and more and more *takes a breath and calms herself*
    Fantastic, simply fantastic, and I can't wait to hear more *waves her 'Jack/Will forever' flag*
    I should point out that I would leave a more coherent review if I weren't full of cherry and/or vanilla coke and 'Hyper-Toffee' That's really what they're called.
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  • From ANON - ewanspotter on January 17, 2004
    Wow, what a wonderful story. I can't wait to see read more as soon as you have it posted. Continue, continue.
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  • From ANON - Ally on January 16, 2004
    very original and interesting...the psychology draws me in. not sure where this could possibly be going, but it's a great (sad) beginning. keep it up! post more soon!!!!
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