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Reviews for Change in the House of Flies

By : Sarryn
  • From Darksidedown on April 23, 2010
    I know this may same to have been written a long time ago but will you ever continue it. This si a wonderfully rich story.
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  • From berkie88 on July 08, 2007
    are you still continuing this story? hell, are you still writing in general? I hope so... you just can't leave the story there! Jack just found out what's happened to Will and probably won't react very well, though Will could have delivered the news more gently... lot more gently... just reminding him of the taunt and that it's true now would have done the trick...
    poor Will...
    well, it explains why they all thought he was dead... the blood loss, not too mention if a guy would want to live...
    I really do hope you'll continue the story!
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  • From Jags on June 14, 2007
    this is jags from earlier as well and my email is akkirby@wichita.edu please email me when you continue!!!!
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  • From Jags on June 14, 2007
    ok you have to finish this! please! pretty please? with rum?
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  • From ANON - yuneek on May 31, 2007
    Wow.... just.. wow! I'm a new reader :) so glad I found this fic! Amazingly well written - and the plot! Sorry, but all I can think of right now is "wow" XD Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - jags on May 03, 2007
    you have GOT to continue! such beautiful words...such real emotions in every syllable...and you've got us by the hangman's noose with that ending! ~murmurs about pirates and their writing skills and ability to hang a person by a thread~ please PLEASE continue and with the same pleading I ask that as soon as you post a new chapter that you email me straight away! beautiful...

    "Sometimes I hate lady Fortuna, though certainly not the God that wields her...I wonder why?"
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  • From ANON - sil3ntr3tribution -not logged in on April 02, 2007
    this story is amazing. please kindly continue
    i avidly await your update
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  • From ANON - lady_kail on December 30, 2006
    Is there going to be a chapter 7, 8,9 10 etc???
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  • From ANON - Butter Fly Soup on August 21, 2006
    Heh, Deftones... I love that song But yeah, poor enich (?) Will...
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  • From ANON - OrinLeland on July 12, 2006
    Amazingly written. I love the use of language, it fits perfectly withing the time period, there is nothing I hate more than a fic based on something with a particular period that uses modern day language. (Where in POTC does anyone call a group of people 'guys'?) Jack is perfectly written and characterized, I can imagine him perfectly swaggering around in that strange manner he has. I would love to see this completed past this chapter because I highly doubt that will be the end of it.
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  • From ANON - Sentra d'Winter on July 10, 2006
    ahh.. so long with out an update... why is it i always find the good stories after they've been let go....
    i've spend the better part of the night in front of the computer, skimming through any a horrid fics, but i must say, that this one had my undivided attention from start to finish. you have a wonderful gift for words, and alot of creativity, and if i wasn't in need of sleep, i'm sure i could write so much more back in responce.
    I loved your story..
    sentra
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  • From ANON - Lee on July 10, 2006
    Quite possibly the most brutal and qrotesque story I've ever read. But somehow, I loved it and will continue loving it as long as you update soon! At first, the first couple of chapters, I couldn't understand the plot at all due to its many 'obscure' words and I thought this story was gonna be one of those: Will gets raped and Jack heals him mentally and physically by offering Will a night of hot and steamy sex. (I have NO idea HOW that helps after one has been hurt sexually, but no matter.) But no, your story takes on this typical story line above and beyond by very strong characterization while managing to stay IN-character COMPLETELY and nonstop event-by-event plot, which urges the reader to continue reading and reading until this turmoil that we seem to relate/connect with Will is subdued. I could probably go on and on about why this particular work is great, but I'm afraid this site might overload...anyways, I cannot wait for the next chapter, which I KNOW is going to be just as splendid as before. P.S. I especially like your use of foreshadowing! And, truth be told, I don't mind AT ALL that you use so many difficult words. It actually helps me from getting lazy because I keep looking all the words up in the online dictionary and I love to read too, which gives me quite a bigger vocabuary then my fellow peers! Keep on writing, Lee.
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  • From ANON - Rickie on October 15, 2005
    I love your story! It is written really well and a great story. Please tell me if you're going to update it.
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  • From ANON - Littlest Coyote on October 02, 2005
    A new chapter! Hazzah! How will you wrap this in one more chapter? I'll be looking to find out.
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  • From ANON - Littlest Coyote on August 05, 2005
    So far this has been an absorbing story. While the foreshadowing feels fairly clear, there is still enough tension to leave me wondering just what we will find out when all Will's secrets are exposed. Please right more.
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