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Reviews for Pretty green eyes

By : Natasha
  • From Myna on June 19, 2012
    start is good please continue!
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  • From Lunarai247 on February 20, 2008
    It's a pretty good story but I would deffinately love to read more
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  • From ANON - Serenity James on November 04, 2006
    PWEASE write more SOON:) I would be eternally grateful!
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  • From ANON - angelnight15 on August 02, 2006
    i love it and cant wait until the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Miss Plinks on January 10, 2006
    Love the beginning, all I really miss is an update, please^^
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  • From SereG on November 22, 2005
    Cool, but it needs continued. And also, you might wanna consider putting in some background on how Sarah got where she is now.

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  • From ANON - The Summoning Dark on November 11, 2005
    Moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore!!!!
    Have I made my point?
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  • From TheShadowCat on January 13, 2005
    When are you planning on finishing this? It's a good start, so please continue.
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  • From ANON - carly on May 14, 2004
    want more? the characters are still those from the movie but have grown up and matured. the mystery behind sarah is still mystifying and where's the rest of it? when does the truth come out? and david bowie and the crotchpiece? hehe
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  • From ANON - kat on April 06, 2004
    MORE MORE MORE please
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  • From ANON - harpling on February 22, 2004
    i like it, i really like it. please continue!
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  • From ANON - Katie M. Holmes on February 01, 2004
    Um good begianing can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - TaraRose on January 23, 2004
    This has a good opening and I like the premise....
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  • From ANON - EssenceOfEvil_13 on January 20, 2004
    This is a great story! You have to update soon. Pretty please with sugar on top?!?!?!?! (puppy dog eyes)
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  • From ANON - MelanthaNocturne on January 19, 2004
    Hey wait! Why doesn't she say his name if she likes his gifts and him? And why does she like him? Because, despite Jareth's SEXINESS, she didn't like him in the movie, though according to most of my friends, and me, there was SUPREME evidence that he liked her. Maybe in later chapters you should explain her reluctance to call for him. Perhaps she has forgotten? Perhaps she's still as stubbourn as ever and won't admit deafeat (which may solicit a midnight visit/dream)? Or maybe there's something more sinister at work...the manager....or even Dawn keeping her from the Labyrinth? Please enlighten me!

    Regards,
    ~Melantha
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