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Reviews for The Enticement

By : scatteredlogic
  • From ANON - AK_IceQueen on October 03, 2016

    Probably one of my favorite Sarah/Jareth fics. Excellent story! Not going to lie, binge read this over the weekend. No regrets. I'll definitely read this again. Great job!


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  • From ANON - Dee on April 27, 2016
    Funny, sweet, touching and absolutely perfect! Thanks :) x
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  • From gghanima on August 06, 2009
    bloody fucking brilliant. first labyrinth fanfic ive read and i LOVED it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 17, 2008
    Your story was excellent but I wouldn't have minded an epilogue containing information about those "more than 2.5 kids." (lol)
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  • From BelovedOblivion on August 01, 2008
    This was Very well written good job!!
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  • From Savaial on February 04, 2008
    Wonderful, wonderful story! I've read this before but I can't remember where. I was so happy to see it again and get the chance to read the way you paint Jareth and Sarah once more. Lots of real interaction, real emotion and delicious friction. You did a great job with this story. I love it.
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  • From IshidaRyuken on November 24, 2007
    *_________________*So beautiful and wonderful, I beg you to write another one involving Jareth and all his hotness...I believe you captured his personality perfectly as well as Sarah's. ^____^ You have made my night ^_^ Wriiite more *begs*
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  • From ANON - Lizard on January 06, 2007
    *squee*

    *squee*

    *squee*

    Oh, this was lovely. I really love how you slowly developed Jareth's increasing feelings for Sarah, and the characterisation was spot on. I was particularly glad to see that you didn't make Sarah into a perfect human being, and Jareth's thought processes made me laugh. :D So awesome! Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Lish on January 05, 2007
    wow. *applauds* I stayed up all night just to read this. this is not my fandom nor my genre and also I'm a die hard slasher. I am so shocked to have read this and I am also very glad. umm if you can't tell I loved it more than I can possibly say. do you have more fics that you have recently written? I would be very interested in reading them. I hope that you get this, odds are you won't. *g* thank you so much
    -Lish
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  • From ANON - Anna McNarin on December 20, 2006
    I've really enjoyed reading this story of yours. The flow was nice and clear, and the characters had a life of their own. Bravo.
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  • From ANON - S'Powie on December 19, 2006
    *applauds* Wonderfully written, you managed to create a backstory for Jareth and the Labyrinth without ever going there. I admit I am a sucker for happy endings and stereotypical plot devices used well; and you did use the 'near death crystallization of feelings' particularly nicely. Personally I don't think anything else would get through to His Tightness anyway. Which comes to another point - the characters. Again superb characterization of Jareth and a realistic Sara. My only regret is not "seeing" their wedding and what the goblins did to the Labyrinth in Jareth's absence.
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  • From ANON - phebe on November 15, 2006
    great story. you're a talented author. you're other fics are great!
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  • From ANON - LadyLunarian on August 08, 2006
    I can proudy say this is the best Labyrinth fanfiction I have ever read. Thank you so much for writing this beautiful fan-fiction, it's truly wonderful, I can only hope to write something as lovely as this someday.

    Best Wishes, LadyLunarian.
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  • From ANON - Holly on August 04, 2006
    Oddly enough, I had a gay uncle named Gary who died of AIDS. For real.
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  • From NekuYasha on November 30, 2005
    I found this fic as a link on DM.net I must tell you that this is quite possibly the most captivating Labyrinth fic I've ever had the pleasure to read! Each chapter was masterfully written. They drew me into your version of a very believable aftermath for one of my all time favorite movies. I always felt like Jareth had truly loved her, or felt something anyway, at the end of the movie and I felt that it was completely unfair ,^_~, the way it ended. I was very intrigued to read your version of Jareth's feelings and what was going on. I love the way you tied everything together and how you still captured the very real escence of the characters. It literally felt like I had just thrown in the movie, watched it, and got to see the suprise sequel film hiding on the end of the tape. Kudos for a brilliant piece!
    ~NekuYasha
    P.S. The epilouge of a wedding might have been a nice touch. ^_^
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