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Reviews for The Enticement

By : scatteredlogic
  • From ANON - Fallen Angel on January 24, 2004
    Oh no doubt they're quite interesting, particularly to anyone who might happen to see one and get the wrong impression. I suppose I could lock the finished thing away in the bottom of some dark drawer and never share, but what fun is that. Better to keep him presentable and let everyone enjoy, prudes and pervs alike. Though reading this chapter again, I may wear down my determination on the issue.
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  • From ANON - Alesun on January 24, 2004
    Hehe, well as much as I hate to say this I think I can wait. I can be suprisingly patient when I need to be. But if you make me wait too long I just want you to know that I'm not to be held responsible for my actions. I look foward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - aimless on January 24, 2004
    Chapter 10, Wow! is it hot in hor ior is it just me? LOL. Very well written and very erotic. Good grief sarah is being a tad reluctant, what resolve. Ah well that makes her more of a challenge and we all know Jareth loves a challenge. ;) Keep up the excellent work. I am positively dying for the next chapter. Once again the Mistress has posted and her fans are appreciative.
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  • From ANON - Melantha on January 23, 2004
    Dear Goddess, you update fast. *legcling* THANK YOU!
    *ahem* as for the chap review
    I really like how they're interacting (STILL! ^_~). And the things Jareth said...mm.....*swoon*
    I'm rooting for him to realize that he needs to shelve his big fat book called PRIDE and start actually putting some LOVE in that Lust...but it looks like he's gonna, ^_^ Please read my story...yes that's singular.... I'm trying so hard to write a Laby fic but...gah...can't come up with plot....*bangs head on table* nuh nuh nuh! I need plot bunnies! Plot bunnies that will give me complete plots, not half-arsed ones! *is angrysad*
    I wish I could write a complete story....*sigh**sobs*

    Anyway...I love you, you are my riterite author. *hug*

    ~Melantha
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  • From ANON - LaRoseNoire on January 23, 2004
    Pleased as I am that Sarah sh suc such self restraint, I don't understand HOW. The seduction scene (notice I didn't preface that with "attempted" because Sarah really was thoroughly seduced, even if she did make a clean get away thanks to the timer) was incredibly subtle and beautifully written; I reread it again just to enjoy the choice of words and structuring of his little monolgue. I hope I can write just like you when I grow up! (Next time I write a Draco/Hermione scene I am rereading this story for inspiration and something to aspire to!) Oh, no. Now the dreaded two day wait for an update. *sigh*
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  • From ANON - Melantha on January 23, 2004
    That was so...so touching. I really liked it a lot. They're very IC, and I still like what you're doing with Sarah. But that ending is...wow...*wipes away a tear* that was beautiful.

    Ever,
    ~Melantha
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  • From ANON - Kae Noel on January 23, 2004
    love it! its pure magic andI love how their both dealing with newfound feelings, makes for a lovlie sexual tension if I do so so myself.
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  • From ANON - Evelyn on January 23, 2004
    Again, I'm astounded. Your work is revolutionary. Again, keep up the great writing. I'm hooked! I'm glad that Sarah has determined what she wants from Jareth, so I guess it's up to him to figure that out ;)
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  • From ArachneNonafel on January 23, 2004
    You do so well with Jareth and I love your work! Waiting imaptiently for the next segment....hehe
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  • From ANON - AngleicDevil on January 23, 2004
    Hmm..well then. I wonder what shall happen when he finds out she's still a virgin. Interesting. Updated soon plz.
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  • From ANON - AngelicDevil on January 23, 2004
    Grr...right at the good part to! Update!
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  • From ANON - Talene on January 22, 2004
    I haven't stopped reading but I was busy for a day or two. Sorry! You write such a wonderful and beautiful story! I love the way you portray Jareth! Later!
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  • From ANON - aimless on January 22, 2004
    Once more I bow to the Mistress of the Labyrinth. Your story has sucked me in and left me crying for more. I love the fact that this fic is nothing like your previous one, you have reinvented the characters. They are a bit similar in personality but have a whole different flavor. I simply cannot wait for the next chapter. I will say again that you are the best updater I have ever seen. Whatever you do please continue to write, you have enormous talent.
    Peace,
    Amy
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  • From ANON - Evelyn on January 22, 2004
    Wow, your writing is amazing. You portray the characters in their true manner, but you shape them to do what you want. I'm flabberghasted. Haha, dunno if I spelled that right, but anyway I've been looking at least twice a day to see if you've updated. Jareth and Sarah...mwuahaha! *grins* I'm acting like a twelve year old again. Keep up that great writing and I'll be looking for updates!
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  • From ANON - Kae Noel on January 22, 2004
    Yay! kissies!!!! enough said ^_^ sent it off, I hope its not too huge.
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