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By : scatteredlogic
  • From ANON - Evelyn on January 27, 2004
    I'm speechless. This is too great. Please update quickly!
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  • From ANON - Alesun on January 27, 2004
    *intensifies the puppy-dog stare* It will work, I promise you.
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  • From ANON - Alesun on January 26, 2004
    *sniffles* Why haven't you updated yet??? Please *gives you the poor, pathetic puppy-dog eyes in hopes it'll speed you up*
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  • From ANON - Morrigan on January 26, 2004
    Oh, oh.
    This is perfect...."There might have been some singing...". I'm still laughing about that one.
    Wonderful scene, that. I'm so looking forward to see how this turns out
    Do you realize you made me break one of my cardinal rules for reading fan fiction? I usually never bother with works in progress; I don't have the nerves for it. But since I read that first story of yours (it was "Crossing the Line") I cannot seem to stay away from whatever you choose to write. Right now I'd proably read your shopping list, too, in case you'd post it ;) *sigh* So, there's truth to the theory that magic is woven with words, always....:)


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  • From ANON - Anna on January 26, 2004
    Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Perhaps now she can enjoy the holiday without all those bad memories. Sarah needs to be cautious when she tells Jareth about the agreement she made. I don't think he is going to react very well, but it's good that she waits until after christmas. I am looking forward to see Jareth's reaction to his surprise. Please keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on January 26, 2004
    Ah, but you are ever the talented author. I wish I wrote half so well. I have 2 stories out there and they are slow going. One was slow going enough that someone asked me if they could take over about the time I was done with the next chapter. *shakes head* I politely refused havehaven't heard from said person again. Guess they're pissed at me now. *shrugs* Real life does have a tncy ncy to intrude. Perhaps you could take a glance at them and tell me what you think but, no worries if yon'tn't. You are likely crafting such intricate plots as this one and others. hehe Looking forward to more. See ya!
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  • From ANON - Kae Noel on January 26, 2004
    again, bravo bravo. *sighs* so fabulous, I want my own Jareth. He'd be so much fun to bitch at and then kiss ravishingly , totally perplexing him mwhahaha
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  • From ANON - Evelyn on January 26, 2004
    Way to leave me hanging! Hahaha, once again, I applaud you. Stunning work; I can't seem to get over it. Update quickly, please!
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  • From ANON - Alesun on January 25, 2004
    Yay!!!! *is a happy alesun* The dancing was so sweet, I loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Manda The Witch on January 25, 2004
    YAY!!!!!! Jareth smoochies. I love Jareth smoochies. As you can tell. And your very smart because as you said you wouldn't turn down Jareth smoochies. This is soooo good. I mean cake mix ice cream good. You should update real quick. That way there are more cake mixy goodness of Jareth smoochies... that didnt make sense. Oh well, thats why your the author. Well quick more Jareth smoochies, Please!!!
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  • From ANON - Alesun on January 25, 2004
    *whimpers* Why haven't you updated yet???? Pleeeeeeease update soon!!
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  • From on January 25, 2004
    oh wow! that was great! I love it! that's the best labyrinth fic I've ever read! update update!!
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  • From ANON - nights on January 25, 2004
    you always make me want to read more and more.
    wonderful development.
    love it!
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  • From ErieDragon on January 24, 2004
    Back again, just deciding I'd leave you a little note!

    I am swimming in impressment (is that even a word?) at your ability to update on your promised schedule with such impressive, well thought-out chapters. Never have I been able to pull that off (frequent updates; yes. Content? No) and I admire you greatly for it. I love how the story is slowly taking shape, developing this new "grown up" Sarah to someone that we can all sympathize with. That takes real talent, and that's a talent that you definitely have.

    I know you probably don't need to hear this again, but keep up the good work! I know there are a lot of us out there who love to visit every other evening for a nice, fresh new chapter.

    Thanks,
    Another Daily Reader
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  • From ANON - Manda The Witch on January 24, 2004
    AWWWW!!!!!! I feel sooo important. Thats so sweet. Well, hurry up i want more jareth smoochies. Well i mean for sarah, although if you offered ME Jareth smoochies I wouldn't pass it up*wink wink*hahahaha. Well hope to see a lil more real soon.
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