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Reviews for The Enticement

By : scatteredlogic
  • From ANON - Evelyn on February 04, 2004
    Well I suppose 'all's well that ends well'. It is a good stand-alone fic. Hope you're planning on writng more! An excellent story, this one was. Nice work.
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  • From on February 04, 2004
    The latest chapter is brilliant, and thanks so much for the hints about the David Bowie concert. Did you know a Labyrinth Collector's Edition is out. It cost me 50$, but I bought it out of Bowie-love, lol. You had to end with a cliffhanger, though :-P...now I will be checking for an update like mad.
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  • From ANON - Goblin Princess on February 04, 2004
    Just a question, in one of your earlier chapters, Sarah told Jareth that she just wanted someone to love her. Was that what the Laberynth was granting her, or was it only, as Jareth so charmingly put it, 'erotic fantesies'?
    Would you care to define 'deal with' in accordance to what Jareth is planning for the Laberynth? It does not sound very promising, does it?
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  • From ANON - Anotherherosangl on February 03, 2004
    THANK YOU very much for e-mailing me. I love your story. Most stories on adultfanfiction.net have no plot. your plot is amazing
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  • From ANON - Evelyn on February 03, 2004
    Great chapter. I'm sorry the Bowie wasn't at its best. Damn those non-fans. One more chapter, you say?! This will never do :) Is a sequal in the making? Once again, awesome job.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on February 03, 2004
    Really good chapter! please update as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - me on February 03, 2004
    Oh, you´re so mean. Yet another cliffie. I just love your story. The romance, the bickering, the sexual tension *sigh*. I hope you update tomorrow.
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  • From ANON - aimless on February 03, 2004
    ACK! What a cruel place to end that last chapter. ;) You torture us so, heh, heh. Well no help for it I guess we'll just have to wait breathlessly for the next installment. Great chapter, wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - LaRoseNoire on February 03, 2004
    Oh, yes, yes, yes! It's all coming out now! (Okay, Sarah had to die to get h but but hey, she didn't STAY dead and she gets the guy - um, fae - in the end, so it was worth it, right?) Lovely handling of The Revelations (the hyperventilation scene was wonderful, a deft mix of humour and pathos), and I find your incarnation of The Labyrinth extremely interesting.

    I'm so sorry to see this story wrapping up. I'll miss it.
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  • From ANON - Alesun on February 03, 2004
    YAY!!!! *screams like a fan-girlie* I can't wait to hear Sarah's answer to that one. You've done a wonderful job so far and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Update quickly please. *is a happy, happy panda*
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  • From ANON - Alesun on February 03, 2004
    YAY!!!! *screams like a fan-girly* I can't wait to hear Sarah's answer to that one. You've done a wonderful job so far and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Update quickly please. *is a happy, happy panda*
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  • From ANON - Rhoni Lake on February 02, 2004
    I can't even begin to wxpress how very much I adore this story. You've a wonderful gift for characterazation, and ing ing Jareth and Sarah true to themselves, while moving them forward at the same time. Your imagery is also amazing and enthralling. It is so easy to visualize everything, and the way you bring us into the character's emotions is just perfect. You've got amazing talent. I can't wait to read more. I just hope and pray the writers block that's nagging me never hits you.

    Rhoni
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  • From ANON - Duchess on February 02, 2004
    I have been following this story for some time, and I simply wanted to say that I am impressed with it and await each update. I apologize for not leaving a review, sooner, as I definitely should have.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on February 02, 2004
    I love this story! i think the plot is great and the story is well written!
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  • From BigGator5 on February 02, 2004
    Damnit! I didn't know you were writing another story, scatteredlogic! Please, put me in a mailing list to keep me updated! Oh, I just started reading this. I will give a better review soon.
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