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Reviews for The Enticement

By : scatteredlogic
  • From ANON - A Nonny Mouse on November 18, 2005
    Uh, I just spent the vast majority of my night reading this....damn you're good.
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  • From YaoiOtaku on October 20, 2005
    Also, could e-mail me so I know that you update the story?
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  • From YaoiOtaku on October 20, 2005
    Wow! That was really good! I was so into it that I couldn't stop read it!
    Is the story finish or do u going to write some more?
    If you are then please let me know. :)
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  • From ANON - Jessie on October 19, 2005
    I don't know which story I like better, Enticement or Necessary? It's a tough one...let's just leave it @ you're an awesome writer and I totally can't wait to read anything more that you write.
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  • From ANON - TheGirlWhoLovesHim on October 15, 2005
    I loved this...overall a beautifully crafted tale...
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  • From ANON - Simmons on October 14, 2005
    Absolutely Amazing. I offer cookies and puppies up in your name.
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  • From ANON - an-angel-in-hell on October 10, 2005
    I absolutelt LOVED this story! Jareth is so erotic and cool. My favorite part was when he tried to seduce her without touching her... I know I wouldn't have lasted very long under those...conditions. This is remarkably well written. It is rare indeed to find a fanfic of this caliber. This one has an original plot to boot! Props to you, m'dear!
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  • From ANON - Magget on October 09, 2005
    .....Holy fuck.
    I'm speechless.
    Just...wow.
    Incredible.
    Utterly incredible.
    Never stop writing.
    Ever.
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  • From on October 04, 2005
    This story is my favorite. i've read it 10 times last week. lol I'm glad you edited! Although I'd love to see the wedding and how Sarah becomes a Fae or something. Are you going to be updating?

    ♥ Bri
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  • From ANON - Regena on September 07, 2005
    I loved it! I hope you do a sequel.
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  • From ANON - Chihiro on August 05, 2005
    Going on my favorites. Wow, that was so good! ^_^ I hope you have a sequel!
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  • From ANON - Liz on July 28, 2005
    I just flicked over to your profile after enjoying this fic immensely and saw The Best Revenge, thought, score, judging by The Enticement, I've found one of the rare good HGLM fics...and realised it was one of the stand-out fics that I found when I first started reading the pairing. Off to look at your other stuff!
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  • From ANON - Kasutaishi on June 22, 2005
    I have read a ridiculous amount of fanfiction in my time, by authors who did well and authors who did not. This story was, in my opinion, extremely well done, and dare I even THINK it, realistic. I am a big fan of the Labyrinth, in fact I have the rather embarrassing honor to be the only person I know who actually conducted not one, not two, but SEVEN count 'em SEVEN imaginary marriages of myself to the Goblin King, in front of my parents and siblings no less (was that a run on sentence?). Thus I have very strict ideas about how the Goblin King should be treated in fanfiction. You did a wonderful job with my Jareth, and I very much enjoyed your portrayal. Jareth as CHILD-LIKE??? I loved the idea! Hey, I seem to remember some mention of a sequel?? I would definitely read it!! If you do decide to do a sequel, please email me! Anyway, I want to offer my congratulations on a job well done! I wish you had shown what Jareth did to the Labyrinth as punishment, but how often do wishes come true? *giggle* Congrats again!
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  • From ANON - Drusilla on May 13, 2005
    I must say that this is on of the best fics I have read in a while. I would like to give you my compliments on your knowledge of the old teachings. The fact that you knew about the Fae surprised me. The fact that you knew that iron is deadly to them, was even more of a shock. But back onto topic... the plot was very good. Most of the Sarah/Jareth stories are either waaaaaaaaaaaaay too sappy, or they just don't make sence. This one has none of that. The one critism I have is that, every once in a while there are places that are just jiberish. I think you need to have someone proof read it and then edit it. But all in all a very good story.


    Ciao!
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  • From ANON - Naoko on April 24, 2005
    Such an excellent story!
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