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By : scatteredlogic
  • From ANON - Fallen Angel on January 10, 2004
    You certainly know how to torment a girl. As always, your writing is wonderful, and I can't wait for the next update.

    I'd be happy to give you a link when I finish. :) Unfortunately, your mentioning of Jareth needing oils is quite true, and my skill with them is horrid, so I'm hoping for the best with something else. I wouldn't mind a little Labyrinth art magic myself.
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  • From ErieDragon on January 08, 2004
    Well... I think it suffices to say I'm incredibly excited about this new piece of work. Though I don't know when it updates, I'll be checking back often.

    I really y yoy your style of writing. It's stylish, it's well-done, and you give such a wonderful setup that I'm itching to see what's coming next. Keep up the good work, and perhaps we'll see more soon.

    And by the way, thanks for "A Necessary Deception." Even though reading it kept me up all night, it was awesome! Your perpensity for depth and real world development makes everything you write gripping and enticing. Nice job.
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  • From ANON - Fallen Angel on January 08, 2004
    Oh dear, I think I'm finding out how loyal readers of your last story felt. I read it straight through, and now I'm dying with only two chapters of this one. Do continue quickly. It's a wonderful beginning.
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  • From ANON - Anna on January 08, 2004
    Wonderful!! I'm happy that you decided to write another story. This one is starting off very well. I'm hooked already. I am looking forward to reading more and seeing where this is going. Keep up the excellent work. Also I just want to say that I loved the ending to your last story. You did an excellent job with that story as well. Please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - LaRoseNoire on January 08, 2004
    YAY! A new labyrinth story with a nice strong Sarah, arrogant Jareth and a pushy Labyrinth! Well written, nicely paced and very intriguing....this made my day. Thank you!

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  • From ANON - kittywatches on January 06, 2004
    oooooh! Interesting story! I so tire of Labyrinth story stereotypes! Much of them occur totally in the Underground, so it's a nice change to see one that has beginnings in the Aboveground. I really enjoyed your other stories and was delighted to see this one posted tonight! Keep writing!!! On a side note, I was thinking earlier about this plot bunny running through my mind. I don't know if people tell you this stuff often, but I figured I would give it a go, since I'm actually a very poor writer (more of an essay-based person than an creative-based one). I not not seen a store before that featured Toby wishing Sarah away. I think it would be interesting if it was set after Sarah had already saved Toby, and he didn't remember anything about it. Sarah could be trying to get Toby to remember, while Toby calls her crazy, etc, finally trying to one-up her by saying "I wish the goblins would take you away right now" to Sarah. Don't you think it would be interesting if she became the prize and Toby became the rescuer? I didn't really think of how to turn it into a full on story, as I said I'm a terrible writer, but I think it could be turned into something interesting (and no doubt, amusing to no ends on Jareth's part, just imagine the arguements Sarah and Jareth would have whilst he attempted to defeat Toby). Bah, just ght ght I would share the rabid plot bunny, don't feel obligated to write on it! Keep up with this story, it sounds excellent so far!
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  • From ANON - Fallen Angel on January 06, 2004
    An excellent start, as always. Where you come up with these plots I can't imagine, but if you ever stop...I'll hunt you down. ;)

    Oddly enough I just began a Jareth portrait a few days ago...
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  • From ANON - AIMLESS on January 06, 2004
    Wow! Great start to this fic, but then I knew it would be. You write such good Labyrinth Fic, I cannot wait for the next chapter.
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