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By : scatteredlogic
  • From ANON - Kae 3¨ Õ on January 19, 2004
    Mwhahahahaha, good job Sarah! Heh.... the ly gly gifts that came along with that interesting bit of information ought to prove interesting as well. ^_^

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  • From ANON - Ann on January 19, 2004
    Oh, Scatteredlogic, I do believe I hate you. See, I was just clicking through some recced fic from another author that caught my eye when I stumbled across this. I haven't even SEEN Labyrinth in years and years. And now I'm going to have to go rent it tommorrow I'm sure. And check back here obsessively for updates. It's dinner time and I haven't gotten my hair cut or gone out to buy kerosene for my heater and it's all your fault! Excellent fic. Now I go make toast and start reading your other stories. Dammit.
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  • From ANON - MelanthaNocturne on January 19, 2004
    Oh Yes!! I love this story! And the fact that you expanded on the world of the Labyrinth...gah! and the Fae! *applause* *glomp* I love you now, savvy?

    Regards!
    ~Melantha

    P.S. Who wants to join my Jareth-harem?? C'mon, you know you wanna!! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Anna on January 18, 2004
    Damn! He found out. Poor Sarah. He was going to find out eventually I suppose. I'm interested in finding out what Jareth's other questions will be. Also Sarah will probably end up telling him because he'll trick her into telling him some way shape or form. I am really looking forward to reading what will happen next. Please keep up the wonderful work, and update soon.
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  • From ANON - star_of_chaos on January 18, 2004
    This is an awesome story :)
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  • From ANON - Alesun on January 18, 2004
    Oh, this is gonna be good I can tell. And thanks for updating so quickly. *is a happy panda*
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  • From ANON - AngelicDevil on January 18, 2004
    NO!!!! Must have more! Write more now! UPDATE FOR LOVE LOVE OF GOD UPDATE WOMAN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Please?
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  • From ANON - Menagerie on January 18, 2004
    Another great chapter! I'm cus aus as to how Sarah is going to get out of this one...and loved the 'caramel sauce' comment. I enjoy your writing style very much; descriptive and well balanced without being overly wordy.

    And I haven't worked out how to format stuff on here either!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on January 18, 2004
    *sighs* Stalking Sara as though she were prey......bad Jareth! hehe Wish he'd stalk me. *giggles* Now who's bad? Update soon?
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  • From ANON - Lady Hoshi on January 18, 2004
    thank you and bless you for updating so frequently. Reading your stories is a real pleasure. Your writing flows so well and your characters are true to the movie and complete.
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  • From ANON - mathilde on January 18, 2004
    Ahh! *dies* I was waiting for Jareth to find the paintings... and this is just TOO perfect. But I must say, however wonderful and amazing your fic is... it can't possibly be worth the maddening need to read more of it! It's like I've just found the most wonderful story in the entire library-- but they only let me read a few pages a day. And it's driving me crazy because I know the really good part hasn't even come yet, but it's somewhere just a few pages ahead, and then... Gah!! They make me stop reading!

    Then again, maybe it really IS worth it... *grins* If it wasn't, the wait wouldn't make me nearly as batty.
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  • From ANON - Menagerie on January 17, 2004
    Excellent stuff! But Sarah is going to be awfully cross when she finds out Jareth is only being nice in order to seduce her...

    Great to see your fic appearing on here; I used to belong to one of the Yahoo groups and follow your fiction on there but it's a lot easier here. Now I just have to wait, with bated breath, for more of this one. May it appear soon!

    MadAndy
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  • From ANON - Fallen Angel on January 17, 2004
    I admit, I'm not a patient person (no more than Jareth), and it also turns out I'm a cheater. Brilliant story, enjoyed every minute. The portrait is almost finished n' I'll leave you a link when it is. :)
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  • From ANON - Talene on January 16, 2004
    Ah....Jareth! I love that boy! You have a good story going ....a very interesting one. Please continue?
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  • From ANON - mathilde on January 16, 2004
    I know I've said it a thousand times (give or taine ine hundred ninety eight times), but you are an amazing author. I adored this chapter even more than the last five, if at all possible.
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