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Reviews for Will's Slavery or Slavery on the Seven Seas

By : Sharanesu
  • From Jags on June 04, 2007
    Not bad...
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  • From ANON - Calypso on December 08, 2006
    As far as POTC-based smut fics go, I must admit that yours is probably the best I have ever encountered. The characterization was fairly accurate (I’ll talk about the rough spots later) and the erotica, though repetitive at times, was a lot better than most.

    But as a true portrayal of the characters and story, this one fails to deliver.

    First off: Jack would never own a slave. You see, the reason Jack became the Captain of the Black Pearl was because the Black Pearl was once known as the Wicked Wench. The Wench was a merchant ship for the East Indian Trading Company under Lord Beckett, and Jack (born in colonial India) was it’s captain.

    Everything was all well and good until Beckett decided to use the Wench for slave running (taking slaves from Africa and transporting them back to the colonies). Jack refused to transport slaves and instead freed them in Africa. After that Beckett ordered the sinking of the Wicked Wench, and branded Jack Sparrow a pirate. Jack came to embrace his outlaw status, becoming a successful pirate with no desire to return to life under the command of others. Later, Jack petitioned Davy Jones to raise his ship from the ocean floor. He rechristened her the Black Pearl.

    So that blows away all credibility that Jack would sell slaves or take Will as one. If anything, Jack is against slavery and believes all men should be free.


    Secondly: While I did enjoy your ideas on Will’s transformation (though, I doubt merely getting into kinkier sex is really all that life-altering), I was very disturbed by Jack’s mentality in this fic. He’s a frightening ball of dark memories; selfish needs; and he's downright cruel and abusive to Will. I don’t believe Jack would ever be so horrible to anyone. In the movies he is self-serving ,yes, but at times he is damn near altruistic and I don’t think he has it in him to hurt someone who didn’t wholly deserve it. And William certainly doesn’t deserve his cruelty.
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  • From ANON - ItsaMiracle on October 22, 2006
    lol whoa that was an intense fic!! WOW, I'll definitly read the squeal!!

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  • From ANON - TheDarkOne8703 on July 08, 2006
    I don't remember if I've reviewed this story but I've been a fan of it for a long time. You are an amazing writer and I have to say this is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. You are amazing and I had to let you know. Great job.
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  • From ANON - Kayla on September 17, 2005
    It's been *so* long since I've last read this. Wow. One of my favorites from POTC's hit time...loved it then, adore it now...such a delicious fic.
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on June 28, 2005
    oh... please write the sequeal, this is so good and the questions you pointed out at the very end should be answered.
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  • From ANON - arien on August 11, 2004
    i must say i do not review peoples stories very often, but yours has definetly caught my eye and i would like to say thank you.
    this fic has been a wonderful experience...... please do make a sequel for it....please?????
    ~arien calen~
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  • From ANON - Ives on June 10, 2004
    oh my lord, that was one passionate story, and you seemed to hit the chaceracters bang on, i'll hold my breath for a sequel.
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  • From KagetsuAsame on March 27, 2004
    I really enjoyed reading this. You did a wonderful job =^^=
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  • From ANON - stephanie on January 27, 2004
    I absolutely loved it. Very good.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2004
    good story
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  • From ANON - Deb on January 02, 2004
    This is one of the best written stories on this site....I mean it is so so hot, and you have it all planned out so well. I just love the way Jack took Will step by step, a little at a time. I absolutely love your descriptions, especially of Will. A beautiful man indeed, sinfully so, and so unaware of it...I think Jack took care of that in this story.

    I would really love to see a sequel to this......I really would...

    You are an excellent writer!!

    Deb
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  • From kirameki on December 29, 2003
    Oooooh! Me likies! It was very good. I wouldn't mind a sequel (if you write it) |^_~|
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  • From on December 26, 2003
    I have to agree with Carmela with her view on there possibly being a sequel. Excellent work! I was completely invested in the characters the whole time, and that isn't soing ing that happens all too often with my ADD. I was a little surprised that Will wasn't a little upset waking up alone, considering his comment to Jack regarding everyone else in his life taking what they need from him and then leaving him, but that's just looking for fly sh*t in the pepper as they say. An amazing work and I hope, hope, hope there will be a sequel, Jack and Will still have quite a story to tell.

    TJ Lymicus
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  • From ANON - Sarryn on December 24, 2003
    Thoroughly delicious story, though I would watch the modern words and phrases. Still, hot and oh-so good! I applaud you.
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