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  • From ANON - ZirQu on December 06, 2006
    No, no...! Don't stop now..I liked the chapter..!

    Don't erase the last two chapters, things were getting interesting! I want to see Will break and torture Jack..^^ Maybe with a drug or something..?
    If you just have the energy and ideas to continue, please do!
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  • From ANON - evelyne on May 25, 2005
    so.. was chapter 21 the last chapter?
    or is there more.. which you have not updated yet?

    ah!! if it is the last.. does that mean will is forever subjected to norrington's cruelty?.. like a huge cliffie ending?
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  • From ANON - yum on December 06, 2004
    no dont u dare delete these chapters! i love them there great, carry on ! i beg you! please?
    lol its a great fic.
    update soon.
    me xxx
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  • From ANON - lovingelves on March 25, 2004
    Thanks for your help you guys, i was really jammed up about it, but im gonna write this further now :D wieheeeee more torture :P
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  • From ANON - NewReader on March 24, 2004
    Hey,
    just wanted to say, don't erase the last two chapters, ending it like that!
    Keep going, I liked this chapter...please don't change!
    Keep going, it's great!
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  • From ANON - leann on March 22, 2004
    i think this way has possibilties too, but whatever you want. evil norrington stories are fun sometimes...
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  • From ANON - lovingelves on March 22, 2004
    Hahahaha alright, i wont
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  • From ANON - gact on March 21, 2004
    Please don't change it and make Norrinton (sp?) a nice, sombering, what's the british term...wanker. I like him as a cold hearted person. Please don't change it, I like how you made him. Dark, twisted, manipulative, I can't wait to read what he's planning for Will&Jack.
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  • From hellborne on March 11, 2004
    I'd ALWAYS thought that speculums were torture devices, even IN the doctor's office! You're wonderful! Keep it up, but PLEASE write faster! I love it!
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  • From ANON - lovingelves on March 08, 2004
    I'll try to explain it. Jack hates it not because it hurts more than with Barbossa, but the reason behind it, Barbossa did it just for the pleasure and the pain and the humiliation but Norrington does it just because he can. Norrington has always wanted this, to have a certain power over Jack

    And he wasn't intending to take Will, but he does want him, as he showed on the Pearl, he made no move though because of the problems he could get, but now that Will offered it freely he won't refuse and he has a plan to keep them both from telling anyone, but just read, it will show
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  • From ANON - littlebird on March 07, 2004
    Sorry, I fail to see why Jack should hate being fucked by Norrington if he liked being raped by Barbossa.
    Besides, I think Norrington has far less power over Sparrow than Barbossa had. They are one a Navy ship; there are many witnesses who know Will Turner is on board and not under suspicion of piracy.
    So Norrington cardlardly harm Will and get away with it. Barbossa could.
    What I could imagine is that Norrington would blame Sparrow for getting Will in such a bad situation and thus making Elisabeth ill with sorrow. So he might punish Jack for that. He migth then even encourage Will to take "his revenge" on Jack.
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  • From ANON - lovingelves on March 06, 2004
    yeah i changed it again, because i thought Will love be the saviour wasn't a very good title, but you're right, this might be confusing so i'm changing it back again (this time it stays with that hehehe)
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  • From ANON - Frankenmuth on March 05, 2004
    Did you change the name...again? I almost went over the update, not wanting to read it...but I didn't...Yay for good eyesight!

    Anyway, I hope you update soon, I really enjoy this story (and I can't remember if I've reviewed or not)


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  • From ANON - leann on February 28, 2004
    love it! will our heros be torn apart? what will norrington do? wil jack get some decent clothes? more please more more more
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  • From ANON - Lovingelves on February 26, 2004
    leann: Don't worry, i love them too, why do you think i put so many in it? :p

    Mahie Sparrow: I'm glad you like it.

    Jack4Turner: Hahaha you made your point ;) well you'll see my descision soon as i'm writing the next chapter already
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