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Reviews for A Necessary Deception

By : scatteredlogic
  • From ANON - wyrm of souls on December 06, 2003
    oh, i cant wait to see what marcan is gonna dd i d i cant wait to see it fail...heh heh heh *mischeif*...*evil* i hope viviene told her little friends about her little deception, so brennan can find it out and then viviene suddenly dies a violent death...oh my, that was rather nonsequetous...but still fun :D...anywho, thank you for updating so regularly, its the only thing keeping me sane while i wait for the next update, so keep it up :D cant wait for the next installment!!!
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  • From ANON - Orin Leland on December 05, 2003
    :: dies :: Ooo, just wait till Jareth finds out Viviene is lying to him, he'll drop her in the Bog of Everlasting Stench (I have a pair of jeans I swear was dropped in that... stupantsants) or worse I hope.. He needs to find out soon though.

    This is excellent though, keep it up! I'm going to have a friend of mine read this too, she will love it! ^_^
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  • From ANON - em on December 05, 2003
    love it love it love it!!! this is great! your a brilliant writer, and i have to admit you actually made me cry in the last chapter, very emotional, i really want to find out what happens after Jareth find out sarah is also pregnant!!! update soon, well all love you!
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  • From ANON - Klep on December 05, 2003
    No cliff? *shrugs* How about a lightning bolt? Or, hey, falling down the castle tower's stairs works just as well. But, I guess you don't want to be predictable. ~_^ Anyway, this chapter was so emotional! I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Kitrazzle on December 05, 2003
    *growls and stamps and makes dire threats against Vivienne's continued wellbeing should they over be in the same room together*
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  • From ANON - Talene on December 05, 2003
    I have read this story from chapter one on and I must tell you how impressed I am with it! It is absolutely wonderful!! I hope you resolve everything for them soon and update soon as well!
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  • From ANON - aimless on December 05, 2003
    Oh you tease you...;) What an addiction you have created. All I can say is more chapters, more chapters, more chapters. I absolutley adore your saga so far. Keep up the excellent work and I look foreward to your next several installments with exquisite anticipation.
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  • From ANON - wyrm of souls on December 05, 2003
    so when is sarah gonna drop the baby bomb? i bet jareth finds out from doreniel(sp?). I dont blame sarah for being depressed, and i think she's in the right being so sad...after all, what kind of future can she have if she's going to have an illematemate baby, have to be looked down on the rest of her life by that haughty bitch viviene and she's not even allowed to leave the castle and the man she loves has to pretend that he doesnt giveamn amn about her...even if it isnt fair to jareth either, i'd say she's pretty well within her rights to be depressed and unfair....on a lighter note, heh, i think breena and ethian are gonna fall in love! *happy dance* that would be so cute! i cant wait for the next update, come on, let the baby cat out of the bag!!! :D happy writing!
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  • From ANON - Orin Leland on December 04, 2003
    Arg! You did it again... I'm going to be waiting very impateintly to find out just when Sarah decides to come out of her funk and actually tell someone that she's pregnant. And since she is, why on earth hasn't the healer informed Jareth, considering it's his heir? Hmm?

    Blar, I will wait I guess. hurry though!
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  • From ANON - Orin Le„§ L on December 04, 2003
    ARG.. You have created this wonderful story to read and then you leave it hanging there! I'm going to pester you now util it is done. Because i am like that, and i really want to see the end of this, it's just too good! (I always loved the movie, but i really love this continuation, much better than a one-shot) ^_^
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  • From ANON - wyrm of souls on December 04, 2003
    AAAAAAAAARGH!!!! marcan and that bitch better get violently killed by the end of this or i'm gonna have to do it myself! i was about to yell at my computer it made me so mad! what's gonna happen to sarah and her baby then? how does that work, if he's got two girl pregnant, is he bound by honor to marry both, or does sarah's baby just get to be born a bastard? grrrrr...i bet jareth goes ghetto on viviene's ass when he finds out she was lying!!! and i bet sarah isnt going to just sit there and be his mistress while he goes and marries viviene, she's gonna be a wreck. this story is so well written and creative! dont stop now, you're doing great!!! cant wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - Klep on December 04, 2003
    OH GOSH! Pregnancy abound! =D LOL! What's the poor goblin king to do? Hope it gets resolved though...like Viv *accidentally* falling off a cliff...*whistles innocently* ~_^
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  • From ANON - emma on December 04, 2003
    OMG this fanfic is brilliant, iv been looking for a good labyirnth story for ages!!! thank you sooooooo much, and please update soon, i cant wait to read the rest!!
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  • From ANON - aimless on December 04, 2003
    Bravo! Just when oughought the plot could not get anymore twisty you added a few more curves. :) Really looking foreward to the next installment, heck the whole rest of the story. Kudos to you and your delightfully wicked mind. ;)
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  • From ANON - Raine on December 04, 2003
    Labryth has been one of my favorite movies since I was a child. I love the way you have expanded on the original story. Your explination of the movie is not only unique, but intertaining and very well writen. I hope you update soon.

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