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Reviews for A Necessary Deception

By : scatteredlogic
  • From ANON - Kitrazzle on December 10, 2003
    *cackles in maniacal glee* I'd forgotten that was the next bit of the song! Oh, how excruciatingly appropriate! *continues laughing* Ahhhhh..... I just adore the little romantic bits in the story. I'd probably faint if someone proposed to me after all that. It's so sweet and romantic and perfect. *le sigh* Sarah is a damned lucky woman.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on December 09, 2003
    So very beautiful.....i wish I could get through my chapters as quickly as you. Alas.....I take forever. The fact that there is very little time to write doesn't help matters either. Ah well....hasta na. na.
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  • From ANON - Orin Leland on December 09, 2003
    Oh how sweet! This is coming along so well! Can't wait for the next chapter! Are we going to get to see the birth of their child?
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  • From BigGator5 on December 09, 2003
    After rereading chapter 22, I would like you to read my challenge. ;)
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  • From ANON - Kitrazzle on December 09, 2003
    *cavorts with joy* Ding dong, the Marcan's dead! The Marcan's dead, Mar Marcan's dead! *giggles evilly*
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  • From ANON - wyrm of souls on December 09, 2003
    wow...plot twist...heh heh heh *evil* served him right, damned stupid bastard...but now viviene is gonna try and play the hero! erg, i almost felt sorry for her when she got hit and was all confused...almost...then it passed and my sanity returned and i still wanna see her get her ass kicked...*evil*...and what was with ethain getting all flustered about breena? he seemed so cool! dont do it ethain! dont turn into a male pig! brennan really was kinda coldblooded, but that just makes him all the cooler, he knows who and what he is, he knows what has to be done and then does it, and thats a respectable quality, so he's still totally cool in my book...anywho, i am rambli.com.comes from not sleeping for a day and a half...oh well, i cant wait for more, sorry i'm not feeling so giddy right now, i'm too tired to be hyper...but dont worry, tomorrow or the next day i'll be back with a vengence *mischief* heh, so look out, hon :P happy writing!:D
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  • From ANON - em on December 09, 2003
    *sob* i can't much more excitmenol, ol, the last chapter was amazing, i was so worried something would happen to jareth, evil marcan, he deserved what he got, and i can't wait for the happy J/S makeup chapter hehe, love the story!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2003
    *sob* i can't much more excitment! lol the last chapter was amazing, i was so worried something would happen to jareth, evil marcan, he deserved what he got! can't wait for the happy J/S makeup chapter hehe!! love the story!!!

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  • From ANON - Morrigan on December 09, 2003
    Ah, more of the classic anti-magic ingredients...salt and iron.
    Personally, I would have expected to have iron play a part in Marcan's demise :) but that might be just wishful thinking, as I would have opted to hit him to death with a horseshoe (remoof tof the horse beforehand is entirely optional), but that's just me.
    Being stabbed through the lung is quite appropriate, though.
    Hmm, what will Jareth do to Vivienne now...I somehow don't see him as someone who would let her get away with a slap on the wrists. After all, you don't get to be someone at the Seelie court without having at least a good measure of ruthlessness...hmmmm. Even if it's not immediately fatal it will certainly be humiliating and an example...I don't envy her right now :)
    I'll be holding my breath for the next chapter....I already said it but will say it again, this must be one of the best stories I've read on the 'net, and since I consider myself a fan fiction veteran (been on the 'net long before there wWW ;WW ;) ) this is not something I'd say lightly...
    (BTW,Yes, I'm aware of what my nickname signifies, and it's on purpose...I've always been interested in all kinds of mythology.)

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  • From ANON - aimless on December 09, 2003
    Hot damn! what a chapter! I am so glad it was sarah that got to be the one to take out Marcan. I applaud your wonderful storytelling. Your writing of the emotions of the characters are right on the money. The fact that you had sarah so upset after she stabbed Marcan was very true to life. It would be upsetting to her to take a life, but she would not hesitate to do so if she was protecting someone she loved. I still hope Vivianne gets what is coming to her. I do not think she confessed out of any feelings for Jareth but only to save her own skin. I say again this is the BEST fanfiction I have ever read bar none. You should be very proud of your creation. When i got done reading chapter 22 I felt like standing up and cheering. I hope you continue to write whether it be fan fiction or your own original creations. Thsi has been the most enjoyable read I have had in a while and look forward to more. for making my day ;)
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  • From BigGator5 on December 09, 2003
    Wow, simply wonderfull! So now we can have 7 full chapters of just Sarah and Jareth! Woo-Hoo!
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  • From ANON - Klep on December 09, 2003
    Aha! =D The black-hearted knave dies! *cheers* As Viv Viv...Well, I guess her actions were commendable in the end. Sort of. -_-* Awesome chapter, as always! More Sarah/Jareth goodness to come! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Talene on December 08, 2003
    Are you telling me that this is the end of the story? I dearly hope not! There is still so much to tell! And as before.....I will see you tomorrow eagerly looking for another chapter to your wonderful and beautiful tale!
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  • From ANON - Anna on December 08, 2003
    Wow! I wonder what's going to happen next? Now Jareth knows the truth what will happen to Vivienne? Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the good work. And Yea for Sarah. She got him good! Please update soon!!
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  • From BigGator5 on December 08, 2003
    Wow, it getting better and better! Looking forward to chapter 29 (The end and the big sex scence as well. I've got a dirty mind. :p ) Anyway, any planned smutt between Breena and Ethain? Speaking of Breena, ie wae was at the party where everyone of the girls slept with Jareth, I was wondering if she did?
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