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Reviews for A Necessary Deception

By : scatteredlogic
  • From ANON - Klep on December 12, 2003
    I really do like this chapter. ^^ It gives us a look at Jareth's family and what his life is like as the Goblin King. *cheers* Yay! The wedding is coming up! *sigh* I love weddings! *starry-eyed* I just know it'll be spectacular! Again, wonderfully written chapter! =D

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  • From ANON - em on December 12, 2003
    :) I'm a very happy bunny right now! :) you had me worried for a while there, i thought they might have broken up, if that had happend i think mine and every other reader of this fanfic would have sunk into depression! im soo happy everything is back to normal! and i loved the "cheaky" lovin' that was going on at the end too ;) you minx! :) canwaitwait for the rest
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  • From BigGator5 on December 12, 2003
    I will never look at salt the same again... o_O You don't know how much it's killing me to not read the rest in one sitting. I could, but then I would be beyond everyone here and I couldn't do that to the rest of the people here. AHHHH!

    I've got a few comments from the last chapter as well: Still no clue as to the punisment of Vivienne. We may get that resolved maybe next chapter? I liked Paslia's "punishment". Not to hard, but enough to make her think about what she has done.

    Do you know your story here shows me how bad I am. No really. You make me want to do better. I am going all out on my next project (aside from the story that will go along with my challenge).
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  • From ANON - Jessica on December 12, 2003
    I have enjoyed this story soo much! I realize i reveiwed it earlier, but i have finished reading it. IM so excited for more.
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  • From ANON - Klep on December 12, 2003
    It's fitting how Jareth helped Sarah overcome her insecurities about their relationship in that way. The salt caverns. Perfect setting! And a very sexy love scene as well! ~_^ I love happy endings too! Can't wait to see what happens next! =D
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  • From ANON - Talene on December 12, 2003
    You will and I understand very well her difficulties. It wasn't my mother who did it to me but I have issues as well. They are very hard to overcome. You have to be willing to take a chance at being hurt as well as being willing to fly on faith upon occasion. It is never easy and always scarey. Listen to the words Of Mike and the Mechanics 'Taken In'. Very appripo I believe. (Forgive me spelling. Haven't had but maybe 15 hours sleep in 3 or 4 days. Can't remember anymore. hehe I'll be here tomorrow.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on December 11, 2003
    Im totally hooked on this story. Im only on the chapter that comes after "the date." I expect good things.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on December 11, 2003
    I am still here and reading. So much going on.....Why oh, why must Sarah be so presumptuous? Hasn't she learned by now that there always 2 sides to a story (at least) and that with magic....anything is possible. That is the basis of magic, I believe...that reality is what you make it. Magic is possibility and the ability to use magic is forming that possibility to your will. That is my view in a nutshell and very little will change my mind. ;) Hasta manana!
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  • From ANON - Klep on December 11, 2003
    AHH!!! *falls over* @.@ ANOTHER roadblock! *cries* Why? Well, Sarah does have a point...But we still know they'll end up happy together, right? It's even in the book! ^_^ Thanks, I feel a lot better now. And I'm looking forward to the sequel. Great chapter! Great story! Great author! =D
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  • From BigGator5 on December 11, 2003
    LOL, why the challenge I issued for all of AFF.net (check out my profile ;) ). I was hoping you could write a Jareth/[The Challenge] fic since you write him so good! As for the rest of you, I know why he can post a chapter a day but I'll leave that for him to tell! (Don't worry scatteredlogic, I only looked at the cast page. I havn't read ahead!)

    Anyway, great chapter! I wonder how Jareth and Sarah will get past this one?!
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  • From ANON - Klep on December 10, 2003
    *sniff* I love this chapter! ^_^ Maybe even more than the last! And yes, it did live up to my expectations. Thank you! *giddy* I think you should have let Sarah kick Viv's ass though. ~_^ But, I'm sure Jareth has something appropriate planned. And I'm glad you plan to write an Ethain/Breena story. Maybe, you'll give that hunk Brennan his own tale as well? =D Again, well done!

    (I would've reviewed sooner, but I was sick. The agony...I couldn't read your fic! X.X)
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  • From ANON - em on December 10, 2003
    awww!! i loved the romance, they do deserve some happiness! :) but i'm worried now about what you said, if they go through anymore problems i may cry!! *sob* can't wait to seat wat will get in the way of their happiness! thanks again for a brilliant chapter, i love reading them before i go to work, with my cup of wake up tea. what more do you need in life? :)
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  • From ANON - wyrm of souls on December 10, 2003
    ha! suck on that, viviene! *happy dance* i cant wait to see what jareth does to her that is better than a good thourough ass kicking, although i still think sarah should have been allowed to do it, just this once *mischief*....i'm so glad ethain wisened up too, he's too cool to be so chauvanistic...the scene in the hedge maze sounds so pretty, i wish i could see it! anywho, i'll be waiting over ie coe corner for the next update, dreaming of evil things to do to viviene *evil* :D
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  • From ANON - Paper Dolls on December 10, 2003
    I WAS supposed to get some sleep tonight... Ah, well. Read this all in one sitting, with lots of giggling, concern, and more giggling. ^-^ Very good writting style, you keep things flowing very well, and have some great diptiiptions.

    I worry that Sarah and Jareth got over the fear of each other bit a LITTLE fast in the first few chapters, but its the Underground, I'll forgive ya. And you put them through enough afterwards. VEG

    I just have ONE complaint. Not ENOUGH of the NC-17 stuff. ^-^ I mean, what you've got is nice, but where's the description of Jareth's great techniques? I demand a full chapter to them in the bedroom (Or other romantic setting of your choice), with at least 3/4 of it without their clothing on! VEG I have seriously cleaned out most of my resources for gooomanomantic porn for characters I like and want to be together. I need more to survive!! ^-^

    Continue! I have NO clue what you're going to pull off in the last chapters, so I'm looking forward to it. ^-^
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  • From ANON - She-Cat on December 10, 2003
    I admit I had avoided this lsection at first. I finally decided to read one and I am SO glad I chose yours. It was lovely and well-written. I eagerly await the rest.

    She-Cat
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