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Reviews for A Necessary Deception

By : scatteredlogic
  • From ArachneNonafel on December 16, 2003
    Don't think that I abandoned you. I didn't. I especially liked the last scene. That was so fun! I have enjoyed your story and look forward to more from you. Not of this story, no but, of others. Thank you and good luck!
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  • From ANON - Klep on December 16, 2003
    Oh, this was such a wonderful finale! ^_^ I'm almost sorry to see it end! =P All in all, it was a joy reading this story. You are a truly talented author, and I applaud your skills. I will certainly be looking forward to the sequel and any future tales you may share with us! =D Viva Scattered Logic!
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  • From BigGator5 on December 15, 2003
    You know what, you should post the "The 20 Rules of Jareth/Sarah Labyrinth Fan Fiction" here. Very funny!
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  • From ANON - Klep on December 15, 2003
    Aw! *teary-eyed* That was magnificentniffniff* Definitely a fairy-tale wedding. The dress is beautiful! Thanks for the link. ^_^ This is a wonderful story and the epilogue will surely be a memorable closing to such an enchanting tale. ;) I had a feeling that the sequel will indeed involve Khopok, the Troll kindgdom, and the rest. And, I'm guessing the conflict will some how be political, maybe? ^_^ I'm sure you'll deliver just as interesting a storyline as you did here. Well done! =D
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  • From BigGator5 on December 14, 2003
    Aww, that was sweet of Sarah in the last thing she said! I'm looking forward to the "Escher Room" honeymoon! ;)
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  • From ANON - Morrigan on December 14, 2003
    Oh, YES. That kind of punishment is so very, very like the fae. I bow to you in admiration.
    And that scene of Jareth wanting Sarah to kneel and her assumption about the reason was priceless...
    I love this story... it's well researched, makes sense in itself, and (what I cannot stress enough) the adult scenes fit smoothly into the flow of storytelling instead of standing out like sore thumbs... this is so rare and so very welcome. Mind you, there's nothing wrong with a PWP adult story, but the real trouble usually starts when an author starts with a sex scene and then feels compelled to somehow expand and force a plot around it. In this piece, it's as it should be, smooth and believable, written in taste and with neither too little nor too much emphasis and detail (nothing worse than some author going technical...ugh)
    I'm babbling, am I not? Sorry...
    Okay, this is offtopic, but have you read the Faery books by Laurell K Hamilton (Kiss of Shadows was the first one if I remember correctly)? If not, you might like them...


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  • From ANON - Em on December 14, 2003
    yay! I couldn't think of a better punishment for Vivienne!! Revenge is sweet! I can't wait until the wedding chapter, but very sad to hear you are nearly finished! :( what will i do now..hopefully you might start a new story? *hint* hehe, i love your work, see you tomorrow!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on December 14, 2003
    Only two more chapters! OH NO!! What am i going to have to read?? I hope the sequel comes soon. The next two chapters will be happy ones, not ones that will make me feel sorry for sarah and Jareth, will they? They totally need a break. I look forward to nextnext one. :D
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  • From ANON - Klep on December 13, 2003
    There's so much going on in this chapter, I don't know where to start! ^_^ The punishments for Carden and Vivienne were fitting, especially Viv's. What I'd give to see her face when she heard she'd marry a Troll! LOL! =D I do feel sad for Khopok though; being stuck with her for the sake of his people. =P The whole Troll alliance thing is interesting too. I've got a hunch about something, but I'll keep it to myself for now. ~_^
    Sarah's dress sounds beautiful! *dreamy eyed* And I am really looking forward to the next chapter. *gets al gushy again* It was sweet how Jareth "freed" her at the end. I'm sure they'll have just as interesting a relationship after they're wed. Looking forward to the grand finale! ~_^
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  • From BigGator5 on December 13, 2003
    Yeah! That was great! Just what she deserves! You know, this chapter got me thinking. Are the trolls going to be the focus for the squal?
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  • From ANON - Talene on December 13, 2003
    Things are so close nI haI have Labrynth on DVD and your story made me want to watch it again but, alas.....my DVD player is being stubborn and not allowing me to. *pouts* Hopefully me hubby can fix it. Wonderful chappie! Hasta manana!
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  • From ANON - Anna on December 13, 2003
    Great chapter. I must confess that the punishment for Vivienne is hillarious. *Grins* I think it's a befitting punishment. Hey at least it's better then death, but of course she wouldn't see it that way. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm really looking forward to it. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Em on December 13, 2003
    i like jareths mother already, but i have a horrible feeling that everthing is going a bit tooooo smoothly!? anyway, i love the story ( i'll never get tired of saying that! :) and can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - Anna on December 13, 2003
    Great chapter! The last line was priceless. I'm glad that Sarah's meeting with Jareth's mother went rather well. I am looking forward to finding out what Jareth has in mind for Vivienne's punishment. Keep up the wonderful work, and please update soon!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on December 12, 2003
    I reasted and got a nap today. Thank you.;) I loved your chapter. Sounds like the typical parents. hehe See you tomorrow.
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