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Reviews for A Necessary Deception

By : scatteredlogic
  • From ANON - nomis on March 04, 2004
    Brillliant Story, i loved it
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  • From ANON - Loupey Lady on February 25, 2004
    Simply wonderful! If I didn't have class in hmmm... 5 hours... with three assignments to complete... possibly sleep... then I would finish it tonight... otherwise, I'll be back! Thank you so much for sharing this rich story, and I can't wait until you write more!
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  • From ANON - Dootz on February 22, 2004
    I loved this story. *dreamy sigh* While I was reading, I wished it would never end..but it did. :o( But again, wonderful story, your a great writer and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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  • From ANON - bookworm on February 22, 2004
    This story rocked! Thank you so much for writing and sharing it. I admire how intricate the plot was and how much work you put into reaserch, it really showed.
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  • From ANON - Foof 76 on February 22, 2004
    I don't know if you are still checking reviews for this fic, since it's been done for a while, but I have just got to say WOW!!! I usually stick to anime fics, but they have gotten stale lately, and they're all becoming the same. As much as I love movies, I don't usually hit the movie fic room as much. I guess it would just get to me to read some awful fic about a movie I love. I don't get as emotional about anime. I like steamy lemons and I even enjoy plotless smut, but your fics are just beautiful. So many of the authors on here can't even spell, or their grammar is so bad that you can't even find the plot. Yours almost seem professional, like something that's been published. I read a lot of romance, and this is just as good if not better than some of those!
    I have read all of your Labyrinth stories, caught "The Enticement" first and came back for the others. Other than the fact that they take up a LOT of my time trying to catch up with all the chapters, they are by far the best fics I've ever read. I had to go back and watch the movie again with all these damn Jareth fantasies swimming in my head! (I also just got my Bowie tickets today!!!!) I've been wanting to try to write different fics for a while now, and I just can't find the right motivation. I think I'm just a die hard reader. I love the whole concept of fanfiction, even taking the bad with the good, it's worth it. I think I've had Jareth/Sarah fantasies since I was in grade school (of course I always played the role of Sarah, but that's besides the point) and the movie was new. It just tickles me to death that someone else out there was thinking the same thing, and even now almost 20 years later they are writing beautiful love stories about it. The lemons don't hurt either!!! I think that's the most fun about fanfiction. Why else would I want to read something unless there was a chance of my favorite characters hooking up, especially with some lovely vivid detail. Even without the lemons, your stories are truly beautiful, and I hope you continue to write, even if they aren't Labyrinth related. Just let me know, and I'll frantically search to find it and read them all. Your fan forever, Amanda
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  • From ANON - sarah schafer on January 30, 2004
    this was a very good story, with well rounded people and events. the only thing i would ask is that are you going to add on any chapters, an extended after view. you see i was wondering how breecas courtship went and if she will marry her suitor plus i want to know about the child that Sarah saw with Jarreth. but it was a wonderful story!
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  • From ANON - AngelicDevil on January 24, 2004
    Wow! Thats all I can say. And Update! Hehe...please update the other ff! ^_______^
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  • From kuronekosama on January 22, 2004
    I finished this story after a couple days of reading--I wanted to say that this was the fanfiction that I had been looking for. I always had this wonderful fantasy of Sarah and the Goblin King, and when it dawned on me that I could try to look up fanfiction for it, I was hoping for something long with a bit of lemon, a lot of romance, some drama, and great references to the movie. So your fic was perfect, and I just wanted to thank you for writing it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2004
    I say sequel!
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  • From ANON - Fallen Angel on January 02, 2004
    Wow. That was a wonderful story, and I loved reading it so much. In fact, I'd planned to read a few chapters at a time, but you hooked me in, and I read it straight through. But every minute (right up till 7am :P) was worth it. You capture the characters so well in all your writing and give them depth. I especially love that you stay true to the original story, no matter how you change its context (*really hates authors who change the original to suit their little plots*). You're a very gifted writer, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

    I'm eagerly awaiting the sequel.
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  • From ANON - Allasyra on January 01, 2004
    This is an amazing story. It is the best fanfiction I have ever read. Around chapter five I began to think you were a published author who was moonlighting, and I was surprised to read in aut author's notes that you are not. Your style is similar to Laurel K. Hamilton, although it is not as dark (but I'm not complaining). You are extraordinarily talented, and I strongly encourage you to try publishing something.
    You made me laugh, cry, and get angry. I have always loved the characters, but they seem more real to me than ever now. I loved the wedding scene. The only wedding I ever cried at was my own, and this brought tears to my eyes. This is a beautiful piece of writing as far as I am concerned. I look forward to seeing more from you. Thank you so much for this treasure of your imagination.
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  • From ANON - Nieni Springs on January 01, 2004

    This is definitely THE BEST Labyrinth story I've read so far. You're a wonderful writer and I hope I become just as good eventually. It really was a pleasure to read. ^-^;; Which for me is a high compliment cuz *cough*cough* I usually like yaoi better than straight fics....

    VERY GOOD STORY I HOPE YOU HAVE MORE AROUND HERE SO I CAN READ THEM TOO!
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  • From ANON - KaeNoel on December 30, 2003
    This was purely fabulous, I've spent the better part of the past couple days reading the entire thing, bravo bravo. One question thoughThere was something about getting around her being mortal, and you left it to dangle. *pouts* and I'm curious.
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  • From ANON - Tina on December 29, 2003
    A beautifully written fanfic! Don't ever stop sharing the gift you have for writing because it would be a shame! :)
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  • From ANON - clare009 on December 29, 2003
    Thanks! I really enjoyed this fic. I was looking for something different to read and found something wonderful. I lovely romance. :)
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