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Reviews for A Necessary Deception

By : scatteredlogic
  • From ANON - Angel on June 15, 2005
    It deleted some of my writing! "You're a great writer!" was the first sentence lol
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  • From ANON - Angel on June 15, 2005
    You're did an awesome job with this story!! Just enough dialogue and just enough description of the surroundings! Good balance and good job!
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  • From ANON - Melantha on May 15, 2005
    The Epilogue was the best sex scene, and I LOOOOOOOVELOVELOVELOVE the political intrigue and politics and gah! I love that stuff! Brennen is a flirt, too, and Breena was very sweet--from the way you times her appearance I was suspicious at first, but slowly trusted her presence, which I loved. Very real characters, my lady *bows in respect*
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  • From ANON - Paula on April 19, 2005
    A very good story with believable well evolved characters, the plot twists and turns were cleverly thought out and I enjoyed this story very much
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  • From ANON - Danu on April 01, 2005
    Wondeful story, beautifully written, I was hooked after reading the first chapter. I can't wait till the sequel is posted :o)
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  • From TheShadowCat on January 18, 2005
    Very nice. I really enjoyed this story. Will we ever see what Jarath had planned to deal with the fact that Sarah will age and die?
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  • From Pankhurst on November 04, 2004
    This is the first story I read on AFF (and is likely to be what led me through it, via a google search for Labyrinth fanfic). It's a stunning and intricate tapestry of a tale.
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  • From ANON - GenesisEve a.k.a Lasher on June 13, 2004
    I spent all night reading this, literally. I began reading this before dinner time yesterday until 6am in the morning for crying out loud. And i still hadn't finished it. Well, now i have. First thing i did when i woke up. I'm really glad i found this story of yours. I also found another of yours, i do believe of Sarah and Jareth in that lovely little cabin which i still have to review. And i'm quite happy to say i enjoyed this story a lot actually. Everytime you have him say "Sarah..." I swear i can hear his voice from the movie, where he's there, leaving that pause inbetween her name and the rest of his sentence. That stuck with me since the first time i saw the movie, which was years ago. And oh so long ago e i e i last watched it. And now, well, i have convinced myself that i need to buy it, hmm, i wonder if they have it on DVD *chuckles* rather nicely done though, i enjoyed reading it a great deal, and i hope you produce more of this lovely work sometime soon. Thanks for the wonderful story to read, it kept me quite entertained while i'm getting over being ill, keeps my mind off of feeling miserable and gives me a reason to smile.
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  • From ANON - wyrm of souls on May 19, 2004
    hiya :D well, heh, i finally got around to reviewing your story...*feels sheepish*...sorry it took so long, but i couldn't go without reviewing it eventually :D...wonderful, spectacular, i loved it! it was brilliantly done! there were a few things that i was wondering about that didn't really get answerbut but i saw that you intend to write a sequal, so i'll wait and see if they get answered there. I hope you come out with it soon, i can't wait to see what happens next in this tale. you are a remarkable author, thank you for sharing your work. until the sequal :D

    ~~Wyrm of Souls
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  • From ANON - Ella on April 09, 2004
    That was just...what can I say? It was brilliant. I have searched long and hard for a J/S fic that I could actually read, and when I came upon yours, it seemed like I couldn't read it fast enough! I had to go back and re-read a couple of chapters because I just skimmed them so I could get to the next part to make sure everything turnet okt okay (I guess it's like when you cover your eyes at a scary movie) but then after I was reassured I went back and read it all again. It's taken me all day to read this. Literally from about 9:00 this morning until now, and it's 3:00 in the morning. I was hard pressed to actually make myself go to class, but I didn't think my Lit professor would approve of my reading fic in lieu of attending his lecture. But I've rambled enough, I just wanted to say that this was a marvelous story. I laughed, I cried, I took a cold shower--all is right with the world! Cheers, luv.

    Ella
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  • From ANON - lacewing on March 29, 2004
    AAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNDDDDDDDDDD I forgot to give my name

    *gives and goes to die of tireness now*
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 29, 2004
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW shit man.. NEVER start a finished fic this good at 9 in the evening... it's 6:30 in the MORNING now! *crashes* but I .. had.. to .. finish..

    HEHE! Love what you did to the bitch!!! WOOHOO! I feel so sorry for the troll, he seemed like a nice guy.. NOW Im goto mto mark you story, can after I get in a few good hours of sleep see if there is a sequal! LOL SOOOOOOOO much possibility! Their kids.. DAMN..

    aw let her dark hair come through on at least one of them...

    THough my question, if going to the above world effects the child, whouldn't going into the salt mines do the same?
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  • From ANON - The Angel of Destruction on March 24, 2004
    All that I have to say is... DAMN!!!!!!!! :D *spazs out* I loved it! You are one of the very best authors that I have ever read online and offline! I cannot say enough about your story! I mean come on it was splended! You should really look into writing a story/novel of your own and getting it published (that is if you havent already *grins*). Anywho loved , cried , laughed, and even sit here and called Vivian a F@$king Bitch! Thank you . :D
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  • From ANON - jen on March 10, 2004
    What a wonderful story! I admit that it took me three sittings to get through it because of the sheer length, but it was like reading an enjoyable novel. Great plot, very gripping, and each time I had to go away from it I looked forward to coming back and reading more. Everything was very well thought out, and your characters were wonderfully well-rounded. I will hope for a sequel, though, because there were a couple loose ends left to tie up. But what a t ret read!
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  • From ANON - Wynter on March 07, 2004
    You are amazingly talented! I could not pull away from this story. The only complaint I have is it caused lack of sleep lol. Keep up the good work!
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