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By : boogbee
  • From ANON - Rankai on March 05, 2004
    Whoot! Another chapter! ^^ Um...Perhaps Brandi has accepted this all so well is because she's in love? o.O I dunno. I just know if I were in her shoes, I'd accept it, too...(Not that I even know why I would!) Most likey, um, trusting your gut? *thinks* From what I've read so far, it sounds like Brandi could take care of herself at any time. Maybe her family just understands that and is not worried. Um, don't listen to me. Well, anyways, this was very well written and sorta humorous at the end. Can't wait for next chapter!
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  • From ANON - becky on March 03, 2004
    hey i just wanted to say i love the idea and the story is goin good. a few things bother me though, what does brandi look like? maybe you could say she resembles a famous person or simply describe her. also, how come she was so cool with everything and somehow knew it was okay? where is her fear or guilt or worry over anything? i would just like to see more of her emotions please. anyways i cant wait for an update! lost boys rocks!!! david and marko were my favs;) good job!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on February 09, 2004
    This is so good. I can't wait for the next. Short is fine just keep it comming; it just leaves us loyal readers wanting more.
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  • From ANON - Melissa on February 06, 2004
    WOW!!!Chap.3 Was GREAT!!!! I Can't Wait For Chap.4.Keep Up The GREAT WORK!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rankai on February 05, 2004
    Another great chapter! I really am loving this story. Oh, and I don't care how short the chapters are. At least you updated. Keep up the wonderful work and I shall await more!
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  • From ANON - Krystal on February 03, 2004
    You so need to update this! Great job on it overall and I can't wait to read more. :)
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  • From ANON - Rankai on February 01, 2004
    This chapter was so awesome! I think Brandi is really REALLY cool now, because I hate Star. She left Davir Mir Michael! Why would anyone do that? David is so much cooler. I still love your story and I can't wait for you to add more! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on January 29, 2004
    Was worried we wouldn't get any more. Ie the the direction this is taking and can't wait for the next chapter. I'm with Melissa; keep Star in her place. Great work.
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  • From ANON - Melissa on January 27, 2004
    Alright!!!!! Love Chap.2,Especially When star Got Yelled at.I REALY HATE star.Keep Up The GOOD WORK!!!
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  • From ANON - MEG on January 26, 2004
    GREAT UPDATE BUT WHY THE SHORTNESS??? hURRY AND UPDATE SOON.!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2004
    GREAT UPDATE BUT WHY THE SHORTNESS?? pLEASE UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - Rankai on December 27, 2003
    I love your fanfic! Lost Boys is, like, the coolest movie on the planet and the vampires are so cool...I really, really hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on December 13, 2003
    I love it. Please add another chapter. I always liked Marko the best and like all the attention you give him.
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  • From ANON - Melissa on December 09, 2003
    GREAT Story, Please Write More!!!! P.S. PLEASE NO killing off The Lost Boys.
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