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By : Mahierj
  • From ANON - lostmarbles on November 24, 2003
    Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!
    You can't leave it there!!!! Oh my god! This was soooooooo heart breaking!! I seriously wanted to cry! I don't cry!!! That was just so sad with them in the cell and Will confessing he's a virgin and that he's so scared, OMG!!! I just wanted to hold him and make it all better! He's so sweet! Bravo!! You damn well better update soon!! lol! I'm going to go crazy if you don't! Well.... crazier would be a more appropriate word, eh? hehehehehehe! But oh sweet christ that wo goo good! I think I know what Jack has planned, but I'm going to keep it to myself incase other poeple are totally clueless... don't want to ruin the surprise..... and this way if I'm wrong..... NO ONE WILL EVER KNOW! MUWAHAHAHHAHAHHAAHAHHAAAAA!!

    Lydia NightShade
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  • From ANON - NEWENIT on November 23, 2003
    Oh no!!!! What a horrible situation!!! Aaarghhh!! I am dying for the next chapter, cos, it is going to be so good!!! I feel sorry for the women, good lord.

    You are one hell of a writer!

    Newenit
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  • From ANON - Jack4Turner on November 22, 2003
    O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Stupid stupid Charles, how can he do that? Will is never going to even talk to him again even if he manages to get Jack out of the way he has to know this.

    And poor Jack trying to be truthful anding ing to Will, but all he got was the truth thrown back into his face....that is so so sad. Don't make Jack cry to much its unbareable. Pirate Captains arn't supposed to cry!!!

    Can't wait for the next chapter! Please post more soon I'm dying to know what happens next

    :)
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  • From ANON - lostmarbles on November 20, 2003
    Eeeeee!!
    I knew that Charles bastard was up to something evil! We hates him precioussssss, yesssss.... He's evil! I'll kill him! I can't wait for more of this! I'm so excited! I had such a shitty day too! Thank you for posting this and letting me have some joy in this crappy day!

    Lydia NightShade
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  • From ANON - RosePetal2001 on November 20, 2003
    I like I like this is an extremely awesome story and plot line I like how you portrayed Jack as a sweet and caring pirate where in the movie that side didn't show up until the end. And I came real close to crying when you had Jack and Will fight which was really good. So please up date soon so I can find out when they get back together they are get back to gather aren't they? Izzy
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  • From ANON - NEWENIT on November 20, 2003
    Whoa!! I really really like this story! The sweet love that Will has for Jack is so impressive, and so deep. Talk about intensity!!

    I love the tale you are weaving here, and I cannot wait for more. Your story is simply awsome!

    NEWENIT
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  • From ANON - Grey Elven-Eyes on November 20, 2003

    *eyes widen and fall down anime-style*

    WHY?! WHY!? WHY!? WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME!?!?

    Elven: *tackles Charles and proceeds to beat him up* *slaps Will*

    Will: >o< WHAT WAS THAT FOR!?

    Elven: For you being an ASS!!! *whaps him over the head* *glomps Jack*

    Jack: AHH! Get off! What did I do to deserve tha'?

    Elven: Will's being an ass, that's why. And you need some lovin', though I'm not going to bed you, Captain Sparrow. *giggles*

    Jack: O__O Whatever, lass.

    Will: Why am I being picked on by you, Elven?

    Elven: *tackles Will and sits on his chest* Because you're being mean to Jack! Captain Jack Sparrow is going to have a broken heart due to you, and you know it!

    Will: *sweatdrop and leaves room*

    Jack: *grins and goes after Will*

    Elven: O__O;;

    Sorry, that was some ranting. UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN, SAVVY!?!?!??! I LOVE THE STORY AND I HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON!

    If you want to check out my stuff (iton fon ff.net and I actually have a lemon! ^__^) my bio page is:

    http://www.fanfiction.net/profile.php?userid=449922

    LOVE THE STORY! UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!!

    Elven
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  • From ANON - Casey on November 19, 2003
    very clifferhanger...i want more!! no fair...i ver very good, you really surprised me. please keep doing so. but i want to the W/J romancek, ak, and i want more SOON! VERY SOON! who needs classes? j/k :-0
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  • From ANON - lostmarbles on November 19, 2003
    Whobaby!
    Ain't nothin like hot pirate slash man! Woo! That was damn hot and all yummy and goond jnd just mmmmmmrrrrrraaaaaaahhhhhhh!! Hehehehehehe! I should be study but but fuck that! I love this story too much! I can't wait for more!

    Lydia NightShade
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  • From ANON - Shara Nesu on November 19, 2003
    Amazing Story! I'm loving every second of it. Can't wait for the rest. Please post really soon!!! You're killing me here. Fantastic writing, characters, everything.

    Thanks so much for sharing, Shara Nesu
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  • From ANON - Jack4Turner on November 16, 2003
    Uh oh the crew is starting to get mutinous....thats not good. Stupid Charles for leadit...t.....Glad to see that the whole crew isn't out to get Will and Jack....can't wait to read more about what Phil and Tracy are going to do...they should warn Jack or at the very least tell Gibbs or Anamaria of what the rest of the crew is up too.

    Good job Will yelling at Charles like that.... I just loved that!!!!!

    Can't wait for Jack and Will to really really get together....still it is really cute now how they are so no worries and we wouldn't want poor Will to be rushed into anything.


    Keep up the excellent work and post more soon!!!! Savvy?
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  • From ANON - Casey on November 15, 2003
    interesting idea for a story...i love it! they are cute together, though. can't wait to see where this goes...update soon!
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  • From ANON - Grey Elven-Eyes on November 15, 2003

    I want them to have SEX!!! MANSMUT ENSUES, PLEASE!??!?!?!?

    *ahem* Sorry 'bout that. BUT THE THEM GET TOGETHER!! PLEASE!?!?

    Update soon!

    Elven
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  • From ANON - Jack4Turner on November 14, 2003
    Excellent Chapter!!!!!!!!!!

    But how can you end it like that....oh man....now I'm not going to have a life until you post the next chapter cause I will always be online checking to see if you have posted the next chapter. I'm so glad that Jack and Will got together in that chapter and I'm looking forward to soore ore Jack/Will in the next chappy. What was with Charles in that chapter yelling at Will calling him a f$%^toy? Now he's hurting Will and thats just not cool. You made a smile come to my face at Jack response to what Charles was saying. ha ha He even told Jack that Will loved him thats so funny....stupid Charles....he should have thought about what he said before he opened his big mouth. But ha ha ha he didn't. :)

    Post more soon as I'm dying to know what happens next!

    I'm off to read the chapter again.

    :)
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  • From ANON - Jack4Turner on November 14, 2003
    Good chapter! Could have used a little more comfort though.... And whats with this rent boy???? Stealing Jack away from our Will that simpy won't do at all...I'm glad young Will decided to go after Jack! I'm seeing mush....lots and lots of mush :) You could always have him get attacked on his way to find Jack or something just for an added twist. Or he could run into Charles, and Charles could do something to him....(just a thought...not really thinking it will happen) Is Charles the bad guy in this fic or just a side character with much angst? I can almost see him hooking up with Barbossa just to get Jack out of the way so that he can have his way with Will. Well keep up the excellent work and I look forward to your next chapter!!!!

    Just remember don't hurt our boys too much.... angst and comfort is always fun to read but remember don't put them through to much.


    Post soon!!!!

    :)
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